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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: my poems Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:04 am | |
| im found to never cry but yet i want so much to be found im so tierd cant you see i hurt so much leave me be im starting to break there goes one peice then the next my heart is breaking its sleeping in air its burning in fire its freezing in water its smotherd in earth its losing spirit i cant stay awake any more i think i'll just sleep one more time i bid thy well goodbye
this was the first poem i ever wrote so thts why its a little off | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: my poems Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:11 am | |
| *-*!!!!! this is really good! you should write more!! | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:01 pm | |
| thanks heart stark i do plan on writing more i have a hole journal | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Fri Jul 17, 2009 1:37 pm | |
| my hours are weightless not many left you saved me once,will you save me again? i find i have been taken not ever to be returned its coming faster now dont worry ill be fine ill just sleep one last time | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:22 am | |
| some one help me im losing life i dont know who i am help me please when will i be found im sliping who are you? i...i... its to late i cant be helped there taking me away i wont come back this time im just going to let them take me whats done is done goodbye& and dont feel bad for me | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 12:44 am | |
| you said that you loved me i beleived you you said you wanted to be with me forever i thought you were telling the truth thats when i got hert you never came to see me but your brother did he said youd been seein some one else he said you never really loved me the worst part was that i wished he was lieing but he wasnt then i got out and i moved on when you came to see me i was mad you tried to tell me that your brother lied you were the one that lied your just a bitter memory now i took back my heart and gave it to some one else and he really loved me now were done and your gone and thats the way it will always be goodbye | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 5:22 pm | |
| - shallow grave wrote:
- some one help me
im losing life i dont know who i am help me please when will i be found im sliping who are you? i...i... its to late i cant be helped there taking me away i wont come back this time im just going to let them take me whats done is done goodbye& and dont feel bad for me that one reminds me of The Host by Stephanie Meyer! | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:24 pm | |
| well mabe i should read the host i just thought of this and rote it | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:26 pm | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:40 pm | |
| wht | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 6:48 pm | |
| can you help me? im lost please help me i dont want to go back there they do terable things im dieing becuase of them cant i just sleep you know what its time i think ill go now my heart is black now youve never understood but thats fine there calling hey dont feel sorrow im finaly happy now goodbye! | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:45 pm | |
| ^ i like that one! it sounds like something that would be on the ghost whisperer! | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:47 pm | |
| you know it does sound like that mabe if they turn it in to a song it could get put on ghost whisperer | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: never care Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:23 am | |
| you think its fun to beleive that life is going great but- when out side your mind you know the world is ending
but you dont care you never have and never will as long as you have your own mind
youll never care
i was in a bad mood so i wrote this ^ | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:40 am | |
| dont you understand
you were alway there for me then you went and broke my heart i know you didnt mean to it wasnt your falt but...
now youve gone and left me behind i know ill be with you soon but it just hurts i wish you were still here ill still love you and i still have your heart i just wish it was still "beating" i wish you would just come back
but i know you cant and i understand- i have to move but... ill still love you | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 12:41 am | |
| i made a couple of mistake ^ sry | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: my life Mon Jul 20, 2009 2:42 am | |
| life is like an open wound it cant be fixed it sucks
my heart has turned black please just back off you dont belong im my heart you caused my pain
ive been a fool for so long well not any more ill find out what i am but that still wont heal my heart oh well it dont matter | |
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MoonDreamer Finally mastering Earth
Age : 39 Posts : 1064 Location : In a small cottage cuddling with Dimitri. Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Luna Age: 18 Affinities : Air
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:06 am | |
| I really like this one, it remind me of the pain caused by a fool that broke your heart and you start viewing life like a black whole and nothing else matter. Keep it up, you are doing great!!! | |
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LaLa Messing up a ritual
Age : 28 Posts : 2860 Location : ooh im invisible so im everywhere!!!! Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Iris Age: 14 Affinities : drawing the future, rain, wind, water, and love.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 10:08 am | |
| wow that one was really good i like it!!! | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:12 pm | |
| thnx | |
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LaLa Messing up a ritual
Age : 28 Posts : 2860 Location : ooh im invisible so im everywhere!!!! Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Iris Age: 14 Affinities : drawing the future, rain, wind, water, and love.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:24 pm | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:40 pm | |
| this poem isnt mine a friend sent it to me i thought u guys would like to see it GLOOMY SUNDAY
sunday is gloomy.... my hours are slumberless. dearest, the shadows i live with are numberless. little white flowers will never awaken you. not where the black coach of sorrow has taken you. angels have no thoughts of ever returning you. would they be angrey if i thought of joining you? gloomy sunday. sunday is gloomy. with shadows i send it all. my heart and i have decided to end it all. soon theyll be flowers and prayers that is sad i know. let them not weep. let them know that i am glad to go. death is no dream. for in death im corrresing you. every last breath of my soul ill be blessing you. glommy sunday.... | |
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LaLa Messing up a ritual
Age : 28 Posts : 2860 Location : ooh im invisible so im everywhere!!!! Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Iris Age: 14 Affinities : drawing the future, rain, wind, water, and love.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:43 pm | |
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Devil Child Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 29 Posts : 675 Location : A home is where your heart is. Join date : 2009-07-15
Character sheet Name: Aaunn Age: 19 Affinities : The power of truth.
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:50 pm | |
| yeah its a 1990s suicide note my friend is goth so she lots of that stuff | |
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MoonDreamer Finally mastering Earth
Age : 39 Posts : 1064 Location : In a small cottage cuddling with Dimitri. Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet Name: Luna Age: 18 Affinities : Air
| Subject: Re: my poems Mon Jul 20, 2009 7:17 pm | |
| That poem is awesome, I like it a lot!! | |
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