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>-->C<--< lovely marked
Going to the House of Night
 Posts : 111
Location : school
Join date : 2010-02-05
Character sheet
Name: Bella
Age: 14
Affinities : spirit (all)
| | Subject: The Elements Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:32 pm | |
| The Elements
Strong
Protecting
Intellegent
Releasing
Intimidating
Trusting
Eternal
Ambition
Real
True
Heart
Alive
Instinct
Rescue
Wonderful
Aqua
Tempting
Evermore
Roaming
Furious
Indifferent
Red
Etrordanary
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Fri Mar 05, 2010 1:38 pm | |
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*~Jade~*
Completing a great ritual
Age : 43
Posts : 3621
Location : The home state of Horses and Bourbon, baby!
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Moria
Age: 24
Affinities : copies, and absorbs any ability she's around, and can use them at her will once she masters them.
| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:03 pm | |
| instructive criticism = honestly...i don't really get it. it could just be my old brain, but i dunno...reading the title i'm thinking it's gonna be like ritual poems for hte elements then i read it and it's a list of words...i can kinda see the elements in there in part of the word list you posted, but not all the way thru it. good attempt on your first poem posting. | |
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>-->C<--< lovely marked
Going to the House of Night
Posts : 111
Location : school
Join date : 2010-02-05
Character sheet
Name: Bella
Age: 14
Affinities : spirit (all)
| | Subject: eyes on fire-my fav song in the world Mon Mar 08, 2010 1:59 pm | |
| ill seek you out flay you alive
one more word and you wont survive
and im not scared of your stolen power
see right through you any hour
i wont soothe your pain
i wont ease your strain
youll be waiting in vain
i got nothing for you to gain
im taking it slow
feeding my flame
shuffling the cards of your game
and just in time
in the right place
suddenly i will play my ace
i wont soothe your pain
i wont ease your strain
youll be waiting in vain
i got nothing for you to gain
eyes on fire your spine is a blaze
failing any foe with my gaze
and just in time
in the right place
steadily emerging with grace
ah, failing any foe with my gaze
ah, steadily emerging with grace
ah, failing any foe with my gaze
ah, steadily emerging with grace | |
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>-->C<--< lovely marked
Going to the House of Night
Posts : 111
Location : school
Join date : 2010-02-05
Character sheet
Name: Bella
Age: 14
Affinities : spirit (all)
| | Subject: love with 5 Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:54 pm | |
| listening to his voice is like flowing water
feeling him touch me is like burning fire
looking to his eyes is like looking into spirit
feeling his body is like feeling the hard earth
he whispers in my ear and its like the air | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:56 pm | |
| very nice and heh 1st to post |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:58 pm | |
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>-->C<--< lovely marked
Going to the House of Night
Posts : 111
Location : school
Join date : 2010-02-05
Character sheet
Name: Bella
Age: 14
Affinities : spirit (all)
| | Subject: nyx Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:06 pm | |
| hair as dark as the night...
skin as bright as the moon...
love as deep as spirit...
she gives and teaches...
she helps and heals...
us...all of us...
we are greatfull...
something that i just threw together...i think that it could be way way better...hope you guys like it at least a small portion...=/ | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:10 pm | |
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Amii~.
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 5585
Join date : 2009-07-20
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Age:
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| | Subject: Re: love with 5 Sat Mar 13, 2010 4:13 pm | |
| Please make only one for all your poems. | |
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