My Poems ((Hope they are ok))

Thanks and I'll try. lol. But its kida hard Cause I love them both.

are you sure its love?not attractiveness or something like that?

YEs! I am sure.

well good luck with that loool

(No Title)

Singing like a death bringing me down.
Throwing me down to the depths of death.
Free me from this night.
Free me from this Death.
Sing the song of death or sing your death song.
Your bringing me down with you.
I Will fight until I'm free from you.
Sing the death song or sing my love to you.

i liked it but i loved the last line "Sing the death song or sing my love to you" niceee

Thanks Thats the mood I'm in atm really.

Love? (Deticated to soon break up....)

I'm falling down you are never there.
All I see is death before me.
Why cant life just be like a fairy tail?
Nevermind that just give me something.
Something to get me out of maddness.
Something to free me from you!
All I feel is love of yours gone from me.
Do you rather want to die?
Or do you want to live?
If you wish to live then leave my site and never speak to me.
My love goes freely.
I just wish for one day someone or something.
To come and set me free of this world of death.

AWWWWE sissy

Thanks Sis .

You are a very gifted writer and that can bring great things your way Have you submitted any of your poetry to school contests, state ones, etc? Be careful to put your poetry out on the internet though, hun. There are some people out there who will take it for their own if you have no way to claim it as yours.

I love your style of writing... it's different but beautiful.
Keep it up!

~Allyson

waaaw it's a good one sissyy!!! i'm sorry you are hurting:( wish i could be there

Thanks.
@Allyson I never really acully have done that before. I dont think I would though.
@Zmi Thanks sisii and so Do I I wish you were here.

You should! Get out there and show people your talent. There is only a handful of people with ACTUAL talent and you are most definitely in the handful.

Aww Thanks girl. I try to any ways. lol

Let's hope i'll be on when you are and talk about it sry:(

Freedom

Come Now and Free your self.
Your nothing to her nothing to any one.
Why try to hurt you when theres some one some where.
Sing with me once more.
Whats to hope for when theres nothing left.
Sing the joys of life with me.
Bring what you know with you and Fill hearts with joy and love.
Hold me tight when you can.
But I know You can trust me with everything you can trust in some one.
Ones love can Help.
Ones love and fill happyness back into the world.
Dont let bitterness take over you.
Fight for Freedom and love.
Now Sing with me once more the freedom of life and Death.
As I am there for you when you never notice until the last min.
Sing the Joys of love with the ones you care for every day..

I love it

I love it

THanks

np sis

I sit here waiting for you to come here.
To hold me in your arms.
To hear your voice when you tell me you love me.
Days feel like years.
Hours feel like days.
Cant this get any easier?
I just wish you were at my side Forever.

These are really good

thank you.