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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sun Apr 17, 2011 10:27 pm | |
| Get away from me You're sufficating me I can't breathe at all when you're around
Don't touch me Your touch make me seize I shudder when you feel me when you're by my side
Don't talk to me Your voice makes me melt I can't speak when you speak to me
I feel so weird when you're around But without you I feel nothing at all So what should I choose? Numb or Love? | |
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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:48 am | |
| I'm insane My mind keeps twirling My emotions are wihrling I cant control myself
I feel so crazy Like the Anesthesia never wore off Like the whirl is spinning faster Like a whole new demension
Why is this happening to me? Now I'm crazed from the insanity You just want to torture me 'Cause I'm your Phsycological Victim | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Apr 18, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| sticks and stones always break my fragile bones but words shoot through my veins forever and always, I always get pain
You've abused me Physically I'm hurt But Emotionally I'm lost I don't know what happened I've already payed the cost
I gave you my heart And what do I get back? The beatdown of a lifetime I was broken at first but now I'm Dead Inside | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:08 pm | |
| Fly away with me tonight Let's go away into the moonlight Away from this nightmare Away from this world Away from this darkness Out of the shadows forever
I wanna live forever with you And I can't live without you So let's leave this world And have a happily forever after
This place is too dark This place is too screwed up For anyone to have happiness
So lets Fly Away From Here Spread your wings and fly To a better place Of Endless Life | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon May 02, 2011 8:43 am | |
| You got what you deserved Don't blame anyone but yourself Pain is what you get back For taking an innocent life
The life was so young So fragile So thin You knew what would happen If you messed with it
Yes, you didn't murder But you aren't inncoent either If you didn't exist That life would still be lving
If you weren't here The scars would dissapear The rope would untie And then A life would be spared I'd still be alive
Go away So I can finally heal~ | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sun May 08, 2011 11:58 am | |
| (I havent gotten comments recently but Its all good, I'll never stop posting lol) This one is Kinda a mix of a poem and a song, kinda like a lot of my others. I like it when my poems for into songs lol I'm Burning away From your memory Is it that hard to see? How much you are to me? But I guess you don't care What I've got to say Cuz I'm Fading Away Fading Away....
Three little words I should have said But it's late now You've already forgotten me
Why Am I still here? And why are my eyes bloodshot red? From the tears that I've cried To the times that I've lied I always felt for you But it doesn't matter now
Cause I'm Fading Away Fading Away Disappearing from your mind But You'll never Fade from My Heart ~<3 | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sun May 08, 2011 12:13 pm | |
| Just decided to drop by. Read several.you sure are going through a lot my friend, unlike me. I have yet to experience love.
Love is painful, but you can only really hate a person when you've first loved that person dearly.
Keep writing i'll be back this friday to do an in depth review to as many poems as i can. And i'll greatly appreciate if you could drop by my home site to leave a review or two ( anonymous review has been activated).
P.S: Please DO join my poetry contest! Thank you! (Link's in my signature)
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Jun 20, 2011 1:33 pm | |
| Frozen Tears Fall from my frostbitten face You left me here abandoned And now I'm gone without a trace
Why did you do it? I felt everything for you but you felt nothing for me I see that now
I see that you hated me for all the love I've given you I see that you feel nothing So you abandoned me Alone
Alone in the Artic Seas of Emotions Frozen Dead forever and always But as if you feel sorry | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Wed Jun 22, 2011 12:13 pm | |
| the last stanza is really powerful. beautifully written. I hope you're doing well! Don't ever give up and don't ever succumb to grief. If a guy finds you ugly, he needs to check his eyes. If a guy doesn't like you, he doesn't appreciate life. If a guy dumps you, he is homosexual. If a guy clearly states that he hates you, he is a big fat stupid *edit your post and this will go away* (because a guy in the right mind won't do that). And if he made you cry due to heartache, he doesn't deserve your heart anymore. So you won't have to cry for him. | |
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Socko Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 32 Posts : 86 Location : Michigan Join date : 2010-08-19
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:28 am | |
| As always you have very strong poetry. Youve reallly grown as well. Judging from the last time I read your thread. | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:30 am | |
| Thanks both of you~ @ Dreamer thx for saying that =] I love the part in your rant about if i guy dumps me hes homosexual. It made me laugh a lot =D
@Socko yeah my poems got shorter as well as better since I've started writing, as I noticed when i went back and looked through them all (I got really bored cuz of summer ._. lol)
I'll post more poems soon, its kinida late for me to write one, my creative side of my mind is shut off lol | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Thu Jul 07, 2011 9:40 am | |
| oh yes, just on a side-note. about your reply to socko. I don't personally think that 'short' means good in poems. Some of the best poems have long, erratic lines, and over 15lines in one stanza. Short is easier to read, yes. But it doesn't show quality. Sometimes the longer the better. Just saying >< I love to ramble, ignore me >< ><
But you should keep your updates coming! I'm getting bored waitn'~ Well, mostly because I don't have much to do... you see... when I come on here, all I do is look for new poems... and post my own poems. So if I've nothing to read, i get bored.
Keep me happy~ (don't worry, I get influenced by writes, yes, but it makes me happy at the very end of the day)
I hope to see you in my poetry competition at the end of this year again! I see a lot of potential contest-winning writes here :DD | |
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Socko Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 32 Posts : 86 Location : Michigan Join date : 2010-08-19
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sun Jul 31, 2011 12:41 pm | |
| Dreamer is right. Have you ever read The Autobiography of my Alter Ego? by Yusef Komunyakaa? Wonderfully long written poetry. | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sat Aug 06, 2011 2:20 pm | |
| Yeah I know shorter poetry isn't always better, but I was just saying if you look through all my work the better pieces are shorter than my begining ones. And sorry I haven't posted at all lately, I got hit by a car in July and lost my poetry mojo ._. lol But I'll probably start writing again soon. | |
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Drippy Your friends forgive you
Age : 31 Posts : 4460 Location : Across the Universe Join date : 2009-11-23
Character sheet Name: Emilina Blake Age: 17 Affinities : Earth,Water, ShaddowCasting
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Aug 08, 2011 3:47 am | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Wed Aug 10, 2011 4:02 am | |
| Yep, I got hit by a car. Did more damage to it then it did to me =P but its like it knoecked the poetic sense out of me ._. But ill think of something soon to write bout. =] | |
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Drippy Your friends forgive you
Age : 31 Posts : 4460 Location : Across the Universe Join date : 2009-11-23
Character sheet Name: Emilina Blake Age: 17 Affinities : Earth,Water, ShaddowCasting
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Wed Aug 10, 2011 12:48 pm | |
| Oh Dear god! Are you okay at least? Dont worry about your poetry Noxxy Lady I'm sure once the shock of the accident goes away your muse will come back. | |
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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sun Aug 14, 2011 3:33 am | |
| Thx KixxY! A weekend away from my parents got me my poetry mojo back! Here it goes! End of the Summer
Summer's Ending And I haven't seen you in a while It's been too long I miss your sunkist smile
So lets go away to a world with no tomorrow Lets fly today To a life without any sorrow Let's enter a fantasy Where summer never ends
See the perfect sunsets Feel the ocean breeze Taste the sweet of our lips Feel the love like a disease
So lets soar together forever and always to the perfect haven for just you and me Where Summer Never Ends | |
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Socko Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 32 Posts : 86 Location : Michigan Join date : 2010-08-19
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Fri Aug 19, 2011 3:07 am | |
| Sounds like summer dreams. Your mojo truly is back. | |
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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sat Aug 20, 2011 1:42 am | |
| Well it was. My dogs in the hospital right now so I don't think I'll be able to write for atleast a week, more if she ends up dead ._. I hope she lives though. I can't go through another dog dying D= | |
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Socko Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 32 Posts : 86 Location : Michigan Join date : 2010-08-19
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sat Aug 20, 2011 7:41 pm | |
| My prayers go out to your dog. Mans best friend is always valued. | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Aug 22, 2011 2:27 am | |
| Thx socko, she's home now and super hyper lol. She has ot take like 4 medications tohugh and im the only one home during the week so i wont be able to right this week much if at all. =/ | |
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!*Nox*! Mod
Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Sep 12, 2011 8:05 am | |
| Was it worth it? To crush another's soul To crush another's love For what you don't deserve?
It's so sad You scooped so low On an innocent Who'd do anything for you
You better feel sorry You better feel shame As you ignore me and try to put out the endless flame of what you've done
Say you love me Then take it back Why can't you just decide? You're like white and black
So if anyone asks I will tell them the truth That you are the reason that I am and always will be Dead Inside- No love, No Soul | |
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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Mon Nov 28, 2011 9:48 am | |
| Sorry I haven't posted in a while. My brain is dead from all the 8th grade drama this year -.- I figured I'd post this wonderful poem that i did NOT right, but only those that are deep fans of my favorite band Fall Out Boy would know where its from. Here it goes~. From day one I talked about getting out But not forgetting about How my worst fears are letting out He said why put a new address On the same old loneliness When breathing just passes the time Until we all just get old and die Now talking's just a waste of breath And living's just a waste of death And why put a new address On the same old loneliness And this is you and me And me and you Until we've got nothing left
~ Pete Wentz I'll get back to writing loads more soon so dont worry =] I'll never stop writing <3 | |
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Age : 25 Posts : 1381 Location : Drowning is a sea of self-loathing and despair, no lifeguards on duty. Join date : 2010-05-15
Character sheet Name: Crystal Night Age: 16 Affinities : Poetry, Love, and Death
| Subject: Re: The Poetry of Nox Sat Dec 31, 2011 2:35 am | |
| Whoo ! Back to poetry writing =] way to end the year and start a new one =D Dance, Dance With me 'till the End of time Hold my arms I don't wanna Lose you I don't wanna Let you go Tonight
Just give me the strength To live on another day I need you to stay By my side Just hold on A little bit longer Because without you I'll never be stronger
You're my will to live You're the light inside me Please don't leave me Until Time ends
A day without you Is a day where I am Dead Inside~. | |
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