Midnightpanther
Attending your first ritual
  
Age : 25
Posts : 193
Location : Hehe, You only wish you knew
Join date : 2010-05-05
Character sheet
Name: Amanda Firestar
Age: 12
Affinities : Bending Shadows, Lightning, Fire
 | | Subject: Angels Mon Jun 14, 2010 8:23 pm | |
| Not much of a poetry writer, but this came to mind.
From hevan to hell
Most have fell
From evil sins
Now they plead
To have life
Returned to them
And be renounced
As angels once more | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Angels Mon Jun 14, 2010 9:27 pm | |
| Its great!! I like it  | |
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Midnightpanther
Attending your first ritual
Age : 25
Posts : 193
Location : Hehe, You only wish you knew
Join date : 2010-05-05
Character sheet
Name: Amanda Firestar
Age: 12
Affinities : Bending Shadows, Lightning, Fire
| | Subject: Re: Angels Tue Jun 15, 2010 4:03 pm | |
| Really? I didnt think it was that good. Thanks | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Angels Tue Jun 15, 2010 6:48 pm | |
| yes its good but add alittle more and it'll sound great!! | |
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