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PostSubject: Re: **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**    **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**  - Page 2 EmptySun Sep 20, 2009 2:05 pm

Oh yeah, have to thank you for writing ur stories. Because you wrote your stories, I was inspire d to write my own too. XD

That's why it's up there now (under the stories thread).
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Haha! Good job!
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PostSubject: Re: **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**    **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**  - Page 2 EmptySun Oct 25, 2009 12:06 am

Well. I didnt mean "Good job@" That sounds so fake! I meant like, "Your welcome! Keep 'em going I look forward to the next one!:

watching for the boogeyman
katie mCmahan

the a/c is blowing...
my feet are cold...
i only hear myself sighing...
and the blowing a/c...
i yawn and stretch...
then toss and turn through the night...
sleeping with one eye open...
watching for the boogeyman...


hopes and dreams
katie mCmahan

all my hopes and dreams
locked away in a box
don't watch me put away the key
to the locked box with
all my hopes and dreams
i know your curious
but you wouldn't understand
if you weren't in
any of my hopes and dreams


g-bye
katie mCmahan

goodbye to you
and to me
goodbye to us
and memories



heat - glad
katie mCmahan

heat
seat
meat
meet
met
let
set
get
yet
net
not
cot
cat
cad
dad
had
gad
glad
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PostSubject: **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**    **-.^..Katie's Poetry Thread-Thread..^.-**  - Page 2 EmptyTue Aug 10, 2010 2:37 am

This was a year ago! It was on the old site! Haha! I love the old me.

**clears throat****starts practicing**
MEMEMEEMEEEEEEE
Okay. **breathes deeply** I think..............I'm ready!


Darkness is a thing.
Personified by pain, sorrow, and...joy
Like in Pandora's Box with hope
Darkness comes with joy
Some people like to wallow
In Darkness, they're filled with joy
I do not try to understand
For they are truly planned
To go nowhere
In this life
If they are
filled with strife
Against the Light
But Within
They're filled with night
With Night Comes Darkness
Darkness doth reap
The seeds sown by light
And Darkness doth bring
pain, sorrow, and joy
Oh How I hate
SOYYY
Milk!

TA DA! LALA! I hope ya liked it. See how I just changed moods on ya?
Emo and then out of crappin nowhere I pulled a Funny!

Oh and peeps You JUST GOT BLAZED!!!

And Darkness doth bring
pain,sorrow and joy
But the Light
Shall always prevail
Like**poet's block**
Like a ship is meant to SAIL!!!!
Ta da!!!!!@!!!!!!!!!@!!!!!!@@!!!!
**blue fuzzies for everyone dang poet's block**
*****bows********

-Katie-la



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Jeans
There is no "theme" for this one.....except for FUN and ......jeans??


Ripped
Faded
Used
Worn

Wrinkled
Old
Holey
Torn
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Sight
The purpose for this one is if you cannot see the good in the world and only the bad
What use is it


Purple and Blue
Are colors to you
But to me
They are people

For what you see nothing
I have brought Sight
Where you see right
I know it is not

Where you see darkness
I see the light
Where you are afraid
I am brave

When you hear a call
I hear a scream
When you see pain
I see joy

Where you see Sun
I see Moon

I have the Sight
That makes you distraught
There is no category
No perfect slot

For what is different to you
Is an evil incarnate
To see bright in dark
Is something you cannot

Why are you here
You hold nothing dear
In this world
Filled with Kindess and Nice
Everyone's warm hearts
Are, to you, Ice

That maybe too long!
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Rest....


We run fast
I fall down
You catch me
We run faster

Dead end
We're trapped
They catch up
To the last
Moment I have
With You

We embrace
Pull apart
Look into
Your Blue Eyes
I almost cry

You give
Me a glimpse
Of a ghost
Of your smile

I have
1000 words
To say
But none will come out

I love you
I need you
I want you
To stay
But instead
They Shoot
You'll fade away

We both
Fall this time
I see you beside me
Dead face, soon to be mine


Your dead eyes
They're open
They stare in my soul
A single tear
Down my face rolls

The soldiers they come
With torches you see
They burn you in death
In front of me

They know I'm alive
They know I'm well
But I know they all
Will go to Hell

They burn me alive and with my last breath
I whisper so softly:
"Rest with me.........Rest."
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It's Fate That...

You
fight
for
You
run
for
You
kill
for
You
die
for

Fate is
A
monstrosity
A
beast
A
Hero
A
Leader

Fate...
A breath
It gives
A breath
It takes
People
It loves
People
It hates
...Fate
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What If You Leave
Because of Me
I Hurt You and Cried
On That Day I Died

Gone Forever
Tears and Blood
I Loved You So Dearly
Now I Don't Trust

You Promised Me Forever
Love and Faith
You Promised Me You'd Be Here
And Give Me Strength

I'm All Alone
In This Forsaken House
With Screams and Tears
To Block The Past Out

Away From The Pain
That You'd Given Me
Away From The Sorrow
I Felt As I'd Weep



-------------------------------


Goodbye Forever
Or At Least For Now
As I Give Up The Struggle
As I Hang Up My Towel

My Life Shall End
My Misery No More
My Broken Heart Needs Rest
My Feet Are Worn

I've Walked To Lone
I'm Not Strong
I'm Tired and Weary
Too Weak and Dreary

Goodbye Earth
Goodbye Moon
I'm Going Home
I'll See You Soon

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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To tell you the truth about the darkness one Izz...I well uh,,, I'VE NEVER HAD SOY MILK!
There! I said it!


K.T. Mac's Rap

Time, Space
Human Race

Time, Space Space
Human Race Race

Time Race
Human, Space

Time Race Race
Human, Space Space

Think back
Tic Tac

Think Back Back
Tic Tac Tac

Think Tac
Tic Back

Think Tac Tac
Tic Back Back

Left Right
Shine Bright

Left Right Right
Shine Bright Bright

Left Bright
Shine Right

Left Bright Bright
Shine Right Right

Double Bubble
Think Back Gum

Think Back Double
Bubble Gum


**bows** I have no idea where that came from!
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Darah wrote:
Yuuki Cross wrote:
Darah wrote:
Sssssshhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
(takes Yuuki aside)

I know! But they don't want everyone to know. They have just came here for observational purposes, but if all the humans find out they will be force to destroy the world for fear of being taken captive!



But...We made them...they shouldn't be afraid of us! Instead our mouths! We wouldn't take those poor ufins captive!! We'd eat them!



But that's only what they want us to think! The aliens have the ability to take control of any object. Living or inanimate. That's why no one is sure what aliens look like! While the muffins are baking were off doing something for they next 15-20 minutes they use their infared minimizing gama ray to shrink themselves and break in through the back of the ovens. While wearing thier temerature resistant suits they go inside and mesh themselves with the muffins! I think I might have said too much.

\
Darah!?
ARE YOU THERE! They didn't ake you away did they?! Ooooooooonoooooooo I think I hear a spaceship...AND IT'S DAYLIGHT!
I have a question...Do they take over pizza bagels, too? Because I'm eating them right now...
UH OH!










**clears throat**

Pizza Bagel Rap


I was eating a pizza bagel
The other day
And I could've sworn
That I heard it say...

"Hey Hey Hey!
Yo, Homie G
I'm an alien bagel
They call me Justine."

"Well, hiya Justine.
Ya look sublime
And, hey! I love bagels
I eat 'em all the time.

But an alien bagel?
That's ubsurd...
Heard 'bout a unicorn
That's the word.

But what eva you say
IDK
Maybe I should just Go a-way!"
I replied...


"What the crap
This ain't no rap!"
he/she said
Oh and BTW
(The unicorn's called Fred)

"Well, technically
You cannot say
This ain't no rap
But Hey
Back off...
And I will, too.
But until then left me tie my shoe."

"WTC
OMG
LOL"
The bagel screamed.

"Uhhh Okay.
What's your topping?"

"YOU SHOULD KNOW GENIUS
MR. STEPHEN HAWKING"
\
"Umm...I understand
you have no eyes
but here's one for ya
a big suprise
I'm a girl!"

"O!
And by the way
I have some pepperoni!"

"A BOY!"
I screamed with joy!
WORD!
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Okayzzz that was more than justa sec...but here ya go!

Universe

Universal Love
Universal Hate
Universal Happiness
Universal Taint

We all sail on the same ship
Though some people may fall off
We pick them from their "dip"

But for some
It's too late
We can not save everyone from
Our Universal Taint

Universal Love
Universal Hate
Universal Happiness



We all have feelings
That's just the way we are
But sometimes we look up
And we see the stars
They remind us just
How small we are
They make us feel
The Universal Happiness

Universal Love
Universal Hate

Some of us fall off the ship
And leave the living
And that pushes
The happiness on it's tip

The consequences are great
As you are judged at Heaven's Gate
And sometimes you're filled with
The Universal Hate

Universal Love

As we see birds fly by
We feel that things would get better
If, we too, flew that high

But we don't we can't fly to the Heavens Above
But we see our families and friends filled with
Universal Love

Universal Love
Universal Hate
Universal Happiness
Universal Taint



^^^Can anyone say, "Cheesy!"?^^^
Okay that's it for right now...I'm gonna swim away...(In our pool...) I'll be back...and post more...(Maybe!!)


RED FUZZIES FOR EVERYONE
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breaking down.
hating you,
kiss me so sweet!
loving you,
killing me happily?
hahaha,
hating me?
stop it,
youloveme!
ihateyou,
what?
what?
what?
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shhhh! don't you hear it!
shhhh! don't you love it!
shhhh! don't you care for it!
shhhh! don't you break it!

shhhh! can't you hear it?
shhhh! can't you love it?
shhhh! can't you care for it?
shhhh! can't you break it?

shhhh! don't you hear my heart!
shhhh! can't you hear my heart?
shhhh! don't you love my heart!
shhhh! can't you love my heart?
shhhh! don't you care for my heart!
shhhh! can't you care for my heart?
shhhh! don't you break my heart!
shhhh! can't you break my heart?

shhhh! can't you break me?
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I miss those guys so much! *tears ^*
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I was sooo CHEEZY! I miss those days so much! How much has changed in a single year. I feel like...writing a new poem! Here goes:
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Through It All
How would you know?
I've been through it.
Have you really?
Yeah.
So I am not alone?
I promise.



That Moment
So.
So what?
Sooo...
Sooooooo!?
*cough*iloveyoutoo*cough*
I thought so.


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And the lame cheezy-ness continues. lol
Hmmm.


Rainbows

Rainbow, Rainbow
Where are you?
Like a diamond in the zoo

Up above the world so far
Like a soldier at war

Rainbow, Rainbow
In the sky
Can you really seriously fly?

Or are you just levitating?



o.O I don't know if I like htis one or the pizza bagel one

It was inspired by the double rainbow song.
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HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!

I've finally found your poetry thread! Why is it so dead? so unlike the lit freak katie!


I'M HERE TO MAKE IT ALIVE!!!! XDXD

<3 universe!!!!! XDXD Rock piece of writing. I can feel the melody coming~
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Uh.......Oh.


Chaaa~!!

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This Is It (Back off M.J. I <3 You so Chill)

Please don't let me go
I see it in your eyes
You want to, badly
But please don't let me fall

Right now
I feel really cold
I feel your grip slip-slip-sliping
I feel my world finally crash-crash-crashing

My chest is going to burst
Any minute now you'll
Leave me to myself
And I'll drop into the dark

Right now
Is the moment everyone's waited for
Right now
The moment I'm alone
Right now
Will I be alone forever

Will you really abandon me
Will no one come to save me
Why are you doing this
Why do you hate me so much

I tried so hard
I tried to fight
I tried and I tried and I tried
And I failed

Now the world is spinning
You are really letting go
This time is for real
It's not my imagination

I played make believe
For too long, I guess
And now you're gone



Lala Land

Now, it's impossible for me to fool myself
It's useless for me to point fingers at others
It's unreasonable because all along
The whole entire time that I've pretended

You were the one who watched me fall
You were the one who laughed at me
You were the one who pretended with me
You were the one who tricked me

The reason I'm falling right now

Is because you pushed me
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Prefer Lala land more. It's shorter and easier to read (:

Not so much of repetition too. I'm just not really a lyric reader.
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Hmmm...I see where you are coming from. It is a bad habit. And all bad habits must...

*choir joins in with heavenly singing*

Must be broken!

Yeah...





Always There


The marks that have
Been put on your heart
The lashes, too
Will never go away

No matter how hard
I try to cheer you up
The depression stays
rooted to your soul

I put on a smile
I act the fool
But it never
Phases you at all



It'll All Get Better

"Time will heal everything"
I laugh at the fool
Who spoke those words
He was a stupid man

For you are the living proof
Those words are lies
Time has made your wounds deeper
And I fear you will never smile again








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you're still that humourous.

But repetition in lyrics... i suppose that's okay.

Poetry, we don't normally repeat that much, in terms of ideas.
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lawl.

I love your signature btw!
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