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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: a poem Mon Oct 25, 2010 8:54 pm | |
| yea now i need to go put some poems up!!!! i suck at them  | |
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Caristiona
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Age : 30
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: a poem Sat Nov 27, 2010 6:09 pm | |
| All you poems are amazing.
Thought I would just through that in there. | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:21 pm | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
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Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: a poem Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:11 am | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Tue Nov 30, 2010 3:34 am | |
| I've had a major creativity block so... I won't be able to write more until I find some inspiration. | |
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night
| | Subject: Re: a poem Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:12 am | |
| read, listen to music. that might help. | |
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Crystal Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 18160
Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved
Join date : 2009-07-19
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Name: Star Light
Age: 18
Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| | Subject: Re: a poem Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:20 am | |
| or just wonder around outside and watch nature pass by | |
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Midnight Demon
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 26
Posts : 23496
Location : Take a guess ; )
Join date : 2010-04-10
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Name: Rosalina
Age: 15
Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| | Subject: Re: a poem Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:23 pm | |
| i have writiers block too. ha. i usally write about my life or dreams that i have. | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:30 am | |
| Life is Hope where Truth breeds trust,
faith has pride, and love brings lust,
pain leads to hate, and lies can kill,
so laugh to cry and live till you die | |
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*~Dreamer~*
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Age : 28
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
Join date : 2009-07-14
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| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:34 am | |
| ahha, what a cute little piece you've there! It's almost like a limerick that toddlers learn in pre-school. Rings and repeats, gets stuck into your head. I'd be quoting the whole write if i had to highlight lines I love. The whole write was just awesome. I don't know what to say, you just rendered me speachless  Beautiful? awesome? amazing? Too trite. Well, but still, it IS really beautiful. (: | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:37 am | |
| thank you | |
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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28
Posts : 2240
Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
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| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:40 am | |
| not a problem (:
Reviewing is my duty. >< | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:50 am | |
| well i'm sorry to say that that one is my last poem for a while. | |
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Saura
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Age : 29
Posts : 3937
Location : Sword Art Online
Join date : 2011-04-04
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Name: Saura
Age: 17
Affinities : Electricity
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:52 am | |
| I have just read through all the poems and wow.
I'm not the poetic person and to be honest, your poems actually captivated me and I wanted to read more. And that's just amazing.
You need to stop being so hard on yourself and your poems because like many before me has said, you really do have such a beautiful talent.
I really don't know what to say because there's no words to describe that amount of beauty in a sentence.
Also; you have such a good flow of vocabulary.
I wish you'd carry on writing them though. But, of course, no one likes to be pressured. ^^
Just keep in mind you really do have a natural gift. | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
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Zmirazz
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Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:25 am | |
| - Fallen_warrior wrote:
- *where angels dwell*
It's said there is a wondrous place
Where all the angels dwell
A place far beyond our vision
A place where beauty fell.
I've heard it said the angels fly
Throughout this place all day
and if you stop and listen
You can hear the harps they play.
I've never seen an angel
I've never seen one fly
But I just know somehow they're watching
From a majestic place up high.
I have heard it said they're always with us
though some days we seem to fail
but when we reach out to touch a heart..
we truly walk where angels dwell. I LOVE IT!!! its my favorite till now lool keep writing! | |
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Zmirazz
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Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:28 am | |
| - Fallen_warrior wrote:
- Life is Hope where Truth breeds trust,
faith has pride, and love brings lust,
pain leads to hate, and lies can kill,
so laugh to cry and live till you die changed my mind!! i love this one more lool:D aren't you gonna write more?  | |
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Fallen_warrior
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Age : 32
Posts : 3825
Location : other side of the veil
Join date : 2010-08-17
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Name: Reaper
Age: 19
Affinities : speed, strength, visual accuracy, shadow manipulation
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:29 am | |
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Zmirazz
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Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: a poem Fri Aug 19, 2011 10:31 am | |
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