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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
Appointing your friends to your council
Ageless Vampire


Female Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05

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Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian

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PostSubject: Comments - The One   Comments - The One EmptySun Jan 31, 2010 5:22 pm

The story The One can be found Here


I think it's good and you should keep going! The title makes me curious...who is 'the one'? He, she or someone we don't know yet? Good start. *smiles*
-Ageless Like a Star @ heaven
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Apple
Watching a friend reject the change
Watching a friend reject the change
Apple


Female Gemini Goat
Age : 32
Posts : 1959
Location : In Underland
Join date : 2009-07-13

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Name: Alexandra Turos
Age: 19
Affinities : Everything

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PostSubject: Comments - The One   Comments - The One EmptyFri Mar 19, 2010 12:28 am

thank you!
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Apple
Watching a friend reject the change
Watching a friend reject the change
Apple


Female Gemini Goat
Age : 32
Posts : 1959
Location : In Underland
Join date : 2009-07-13

Character sheet
Name: Alexandra Turos
Age: 19
Affinities : Everything

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PostSubject: Re: Comments - The One   Comments - The One EmptyMon Nov 22, 2010 11:13 am

i desited to not finnish it... i find it like dumb... idk if more people tell me its not dumb and they would read it and love it i prob will re start it but i re read it and it seems lame... is it just me?
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