My Poems of life,love,pain and randomness!

Death
is the earth of years
surround by a pool of tears
from all those we hold dear
spread love and joy
for the earth will take what she can take
and snatch those you hold dear
so spread love, hope and cheer
before death is here

This is it
Im through with this
Get your f*cking hands off me
I can't take this anymore
I made up my mind
Its time for me to say goodbye
And escape from this afterlife
Gotta move on dear
I have to get far away from here
I wont look back
I'll miss you
But dear im getting out of here

Today is the day
I walk down the road
I see the light
I have moved on
The storm has gone
The sun is shining
This is the moment
I let myself be free
I finally smile
I forgive you
I got my heart back
I reached the end of the tunnel
I take a look back
And then I move forward
This is a new day

Love is good
love is great
but to me love is a wast
You spend your time dreaming
of the moments you kissed
but when in reality
love is just comfort everyone needs to live on with
others may disagree but you dont know till you've been broken
I'm alone, I have been betrayed twice
I close myself off no more trust
when will my world end?
I wanna trust again but i only trust one
and thats the lord above, let me move on
let me escape this horror
life is just a test we are put through the real challenge awaits us after death.

All the memories flowing back
I told myself I wont kill again
but here i stand with a knife in my hand and your dead
Im falling to my grave as I kill again
digging my self a deeper hole
NO! I didn't want to kill again its too late im addicted
Ill pull the trigger and then Im dead
as I lay upon the floor bleeding to death I smile as I escape the hell i lived
Im finaly free of the horror of death
I didn't make a sound as I passed down the long path to hell

Everyday I hear the words "I Love you"
But do you mean them?
Behind those blue eyes lies the truth
Can I find the real words you hide behind them

They think they know
but they don't understand
what its like to be left alone
I sit and wonder why do they hate me so
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When I close my eyes
I see your face
the memories coming so fast
why did you have to leave me
i didn't think it would be so soon

I have no light in the dark
yet I'm happy
I no longer need your help
I live freely
escaped from the grasp of the memory of you
No more blue eyes, no more soft lips
just a wave good bye into the dark
alone and happy
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my Angel in the night
is in my dreams
his black hair green eyes
glow in the dark so bright
only to wait to fly into the abyss of nothingness
alone you and I to fight the demons alone
your my angle in the night

I sit on the side lines
and watch time fly
people come and go
people change by the day
Life is rough
love is short
but once in a while you have to pause time
and watch the little moments
you never would pay attention to
and see how amazing life is
even though it tough
Take a seat
take a breath
and watch those little
moments when your most happy

The repetition reinforced the mood of this poem. Laden with emotions. deep, intricate, and very much complex. It's more than just love that you're talking about. You've reached a realm of positivity and appreciation that love has blessed you with. This probably isn't a write that resonates with everyone at the same level. This is a write that hits a different note within different readers, making it SO unique and SO extremely beautiful.

Keep writing! and I hope you can swing by my stories/ poetry thread to leave a review or two!

(thanks)

take time just to listen
to the voices screaming
only to find out there not real
It seems I'm going insane
and its Almost Easy

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Much has changed
since the last time
memories seem to change
the view is whipped away
and darkness is keeping the light concealed

(Randomness)

don't come running back asking for my heart
you had your chance but lost it at the start
I have moved on to discover what I have grown to be
A life with you and I can't be
So grow up move on
cause you not gonna have my heart this time

These are good

Nice Job