I haven't another word to say: WOW.
Your writing skills are really good. and it's pretty eerie too, because something similar happened around at my home town, as in the very first post about people dying by a water body. something along those lines.
I like it! thrilling and exciting. You should really write more!
Btw, I got attracted to your story by its title. You sure have an affinity for title, no? This is a beautiful title.
AWESOME PIECE! KEEP WRITING!
