Could You Be?

Subject: Could You Be? Mon May 16, 2011 8:51 pm

Could you be the one for me?
Could you be my find?
Could it be, after all this time,
Fate is going to be kind?

Could you be the one for me,
The one to help me forget
The man that broke my heart, my soul
The man that haunts me yet?

You tell me that I'm beautiful
Something I've never heard
But the one still lives here in my mind
That couldn't spare a kind word

It's going to be hard to forget
And pick up the pieces he left
Could you be the one to teach
How to love again and forget?

Could you be the one to come
And mend my broken heart?
Are you willing to piece together
What another broke apart?

It won't be an easy job, you see
My road has been long and rough
And the heart that was once so soft
Is now shut, locked, and tough

But I can feel my heart open again
It's opening for you
Just come in, and love me back
That's all you have to do

I must ask you one small thing
Before we kiss and part
Please be nice and kind to me
I'm tired of broken hearts

-Princessa-

Glomp

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Tue May 17, 2011 12:40 pm

i like it!

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Tue May 17, 2011 2:17 pm

Unspoken Words
Though we have never spoken
I know you by the language
That you write
And that I read
for words beguile the mind.

To the voiceless ear they bring
Astonishment and awe,
that the hearts of strangers
Could beat so alike.

You brought to me
A world of words
Pen and ink conceived
Mind and Heart believe.

On this very night
I pause awhile to see the stars
Silently give thanks
For your written word.

~Princessa~

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Tue May 17, 2011 2:25 pm

My love, I have tried with all my being
to grasp a form comparable to thine own,
but nothing seems worthy;

I know now why Shakespeare could not
compare his love to a summer’s day.
It would be a crime to denounce the beauty
of such a creature as thee,
to simply cast away the precision
God had placed in forging you.

Each facet of your being
whether it physical or spiritual
is an ensnarement
from which there is no release.
But I do not wish release.
I wish to stay entrapped forever.
With you for all eternity.
Our hearts, always as one.

~Princess~

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Tue May 17, 2011 2:44 pm

I never want us to end.
So I will always love you.
I never want to see you cry.
So I will always protect you.
I never want you to be lonely.
So I will always be by your side.
I never want to lose you.
So I will hold onto you for ever
I don't want you to worry.
So I will really truly smile.
I don't want you to doubt us.
So I will love you with all of my heart, and no less.
I never want you to feel neglected.
So I will do everything in my power to make that beautiful face smile.
I never want you to forget.
So I will never leave.
I never want you to be cold.
So I will keep you close and warm.
I always want us to be honest, strong, cute, true, and fly together no matter what kind of weather we face .
So I will start by saying, "I LOVE YOU"

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Wed May 18, 2011 2:39 pm

THose are really good! I like them, Smile

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Wed May 18, 2011 3:14 pm

Thank you. I appreciate that. Smile

Subject: Re: Could You Be? Fri Jun 17, 2011 3:57 am

LoverofNight wrote:: I never want us to end.
So I will always love you.
I never want to see you cry.
So I will always protect you.
I never want you to be lonely.
So I will always be by your side.
I never want to lose you.
So I will hold onto you for ever
I don't want you to worry.
So I will really truly smile.
I don't want you to doubt us.
So I will love you with all of my heart, and no less.
I never want you to feel neglected.
So I will do everything in my power to make that beautiful face smile.
I never want you to forget.
So I will never leave.
I never want you to be cold.
So I will keep you close and warm.
I always want us to be honest, strong, cute, true, and fly together no matter what kind of weather we face .
So I will start by saying, "I LOVE YOU"

Independent lines that depend on each other. that's how amazing this write is.

You can read them as separate ideas altogether, for every two lines... but you will be truly, completely moved to tears by reading all of them as one.

for such a teary piece of write, it deserves some recognition.

The colour scheme adds to the feeling -- love, adore, care, concern.

speechlessly awesome!