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PostSubject: Gothic poems. please read!   Gothic poems. please read! EmptyThu Sep 15, 2011 6:37 pm

As she walks to meet him she smiles
She believed he could change
She thought he did
She waits
She’s waiting, waiting…

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My heart snaps in half
I’m loved no more
I cry
It doesn’t help
Can’t breath
Won’t breath
My life slips away

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In the forest
is silent
No birds chirp
No leaves rustle
A cry breaks the silence
Can't find the path
Can't help them
The silence rests once again

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As the car flipped over
I thought of him
Will he ever know I loved him?
Did he ever love me?
The car flipped
again and again
Glass flies
Tears flow
I feel my life slipping away
I still have him
He was my last thought
Then my life, my world,
went black

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The wind brushes
My hair sweeps away
I wait for him
He never comes
He is cruel
He broke my heart
I walk away
The tears flowing
We are no more

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Spring is here
She smiles
The wind whispers
Birds sing
She hears a crack
A gunshot!
She runs
The animals
help, sacrificing themselves
She screams as they fall
one by one
at her feet
He grabs her hair
She screams again
He does not
let go
She is carried back
Her world undone
He will hurt her again
She dies inside

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The wind screams
The trees shake
The heart breaks
He swore
he would come
He lied
Now
She cries

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She is alone
The night is here
She waited
The clock struck the hour
Her world tips
Her heart breaks
The trust disappears
Thunder rolls overhead
The rain pours
Her tears
spill
Salt and rain mix
The lightning strikes
She dies inside

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just!! waaaw!!! really i liked them
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PostSubject: Re: Gothic poems. please read!   Gothic poems. please read! EmptySat Sep 17, 2011 1:29 am

U r really good keep riting more
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PostSubject: Re: Gothic poems. please read!   Gothic poems. please read! EmptySun Sep 18, 2011 12:37 pm

Hope
There but hidden
A wall of darkness
engulfs it
Squeezing it
Killing it
And then
it is gone
Darkness reins
Another life
lost
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