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*~Dreamer~*
Combining your affinities to save the day
Combining your affinities to save the day
*~Dreamer~*


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Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness.
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PostSubject: Comments -- Anna's Story   Comments -- Anna's Story EmptySat Dec 24, 2011 1:19 pm

Hi dear, interesting piece of writing. But I had this impression at the start that she was hallucinating instead of actually being in a party and really having people talking to her like that.
Aww, that's harsh. And it hurts badly. Faced that before. But /shrugs/ it's over anyway.

Looking forward to more of it. Keep writing!
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