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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: The Poetry War Mon Jan 02, 2012 5:42 pm | |
| Hi everyone, *PrincessofDarkness*, ashestoroses (ash) and I (Ger) have seen that many of you here have the talent to write. Thus, we have decided to to hold a poetry contest for everyone of you on this board. This contest will be held on a monthly basis and we hope that all of you will send in your valued entries. some really simple rules: each member is entitled to a maximum of three poems, no more. You can choose to only submit one. You are to ensure all works are clean -- error-free. Poems with errors will be judged not to your favour. We hope that this contest can become a regular contest for everyone! This is the competition timeline: the thread will be opened for 3weeks (until the third week of the month) for entries to be submitted, after which it will be closed for judging. Results will be posted in hall of fame and the winner will receive a graphic to add in the signature. ( Graphic will be sent to the winner via PM). There is a possibility for having second and third place as well, if the poets are really good. If you have any queries or what-not, feel free to PM either of us! Graphic for the Winner: LAST DAY TO SEND IN ENTRIES: 24th JANUARY 2012, Follow GMT +8HRS
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ZoeRedbird Mod
Age : 28 Posts : 9363 Location : Somewhere wearing a Deadpool costume Join date : 2011-02-28
Character sheet Name: Dock Age: 18 Affinities : Telepathy
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Mon Jan 02, 2012 6:16 pm | |
| ((I'll submit a poem I have recently made (: ))
Affinities
True sight see's what others truly are, Darkness controls you by giving you scars. Water washes misery away, Spirit keeps bad thoughts at bay. Earth gives strength and Air soothes the mind, Fire draws power to keep from fighting blind. Affinites can help in one way or another, So use them wisely and stay on the path of the mother. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Wed Jan 04, 2012 10:02 am | |
| ((Thanks. We need more entries and more people! D:)) | |
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Midnight Demon Trying to stop war
Age : 26 Posts : 23496 Location : Take a guess ; ) Join date : 2010-04-10
Character sheet Name: Rosalina Age: 15 Affinities : Writing Poetry, Dream Walker
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Wed Jan 04, 2012 8:50 pm | |
| Were You Belong
One step closer... Before I fall Who knew I could be so lost Longing to see you once more You disappeared to a different world, One that I can’t go to till the end It pains me to not be able to visit you
This amazing world, Your every desire comes true It takes away the blues Flowers bloom Music is played Laughter fills the air I want to share it all with you But, you are gone…
It’s impossible to make you leave It’s maddening to see you gone The place where you are now… Is where you are meant to be isn’t it? With new sight you watch over me You smile your angelic smile You are at peace now
I know it’ll be okay… and maybe one day I’ll see you in my beautiful world The one I escape to avoid pain
This isn’t the end I'm aware Though this new beginning is something I can't bare Just so you know I care Hopefully, someday I'll understand Beautiful Creature
Meaningless words Come from your voice You would be a fool To believe it.
Poisonous kisses that Could kill you slowly
Strong arms you held her in That could crush her so easily.
Love that was never true Breaking her inside She is nothing but a hollow shell now
Slowly, she died because of the poison She was a fool when it came to loving you With her last breath you crushed her in your arms Proving to her what monster you were
How do I know such thing? I was that girl falling for the beautiful creature now look At me now.
I’m dead. A Promise
Life’s passing by so quickly You are afraid to blink. Heart races one moment Then breaks the next You are afraid to love. One good thing one moment The next it’s gone You are afraid to trust Please don’t be afraid… you still Have me. I may not fix it the problems But I’m here to support you In this crazy world and that is a promise. Until one day I break it that is.
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:00 am | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:22 am | |
| Love or Hate
Love I cared. You treated me before like you love me. Now you hate?
I cared about you my whole life. Then you treated me like you hate me and love someone else.
You love me I hate you All those years ago you let go. I did not I held on forever.
You want to care for me again. Think again. I will never love you again.
I treated you like crap before this happened I loved you. Now you treat me like crap. We are even now.
Happy? I will still not love you. I still will not love anyone other and never again.
Love me? Hate me? It is mixed up you can’t decide to love me or hate me.
Love you? Hate you? Still a mix still no decision either or of the two
you leave me. I leave you. I will never forget this. You will never forget this I know it.
What is your decision? Love or Hate.
Hate is forever and you will never see me again.
Love; well that is a different story. You will always see me.
So what is it? Love or Hate. You chose.
Dark Love
Every day, you hid something from me. When you say you love me you walk away saying Dark Love.
I am not scared of you not even when you try scaring me.
I know sometimes you think I am dark. I figured out where you got the saying Dark Love.
You know I come only in the night time. And I don’t go to school like you. That is where the dark part is coming from. Love is obvious we love each other.
I figure it out in two days. Soon after you started saying it
sometimes you say I am cold. Some time you say look out.
When I run I am faster than you. You are scared of me. I can smell it. You fear me but you love me.
You know when you love a vampire. There are consequences sometimes.
Your promise is that if I die. You would kill yourself for me.
Your last words you said to me before you died were, "Dark love I love you." That was my nickname.
I am writing this poem for you. You will always be my Dark love.
My last words would be if I died before you blocked that attack would be. "I am here for you forever."
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 1:37 am | |
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♥ Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 29 Posts : 83 Location : uranus~ Join date : 2012-01-04
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 11:31 am | |
| Keep up the great poetry you guys! ♥ | |
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FallenInLove Trying to break up a fight
Age : 30 Posts : 1630 Location : sitting in a corner, crying, wishing I could be in your arms :/ </3 Join date : 2011-11-29
Character sheet Name: Michelle Wherry (before marking: Allison Jackson) Age: 15 Affinities : Air, Fire, Water, Earth, Soul, and can feel when people close to her are injured
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 7:23 pm | |
| To the love of my life; First kiss, First boyfriend, First person to hold my hand, First person to care, First Person I have ever truly loved.
Even through my flaws, I know you will be right there, Standing by my side, Encouraging me to keep myself safe.
After you’re out of High School, I know we will be super close, I can't wait until after college, We really do love each other.
My dad thinks we're going to be on and off, But I know we won't, I know you're going to talk me out of anything stupid, You try your best <3 !
I love you, weirdo, You are my weirdo, Always will be, But that’s why I love you.
You own my heart, I can prove it: All you have to do, Is ask me one question, Say one word, And I will instantly perk up. The sound of your voice, Is wonderful to me, It makes my head spin round, I go head over heels.
I trust you with my life, Heck, - I'd trust you to feed me. I'd trust you with anything, I trust you to keep me from doing stupid things, I know you can talk me through anything, Because you know me better then I even know myself! You know my weaknesses, My strengths, The things that make me laugh, Everything, You can read me!
I love you, Always will.
Love, Allison | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Thu Jan 05, 2012 10:35 pm | |
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nightstar Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 25 Posts : 89 Location : U.S.A Join date : 2011-10-31
Character sheet Name: Sky Age: 14 Affinities : Water,Air
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Fri Jan 06, 2012 12:55 am | |
| Cancer kills The pain I see you go through everyday I just wish it would go away. The sorrow in your eyes, Scare me because you can die Any day, Any minute, Any second I want to make every second with you count But when I think of losing you I just want to shout. The pain is killing you. It’s also killing me to. Not as much It just gives me an adrenaline rush. I just know when I look at you my heart is in pain. The feelings are too much to contained Sometimes it’s hard to sleep at night. The emotions run wild and cause me such fright. All you can do is sit helplessly in your chair. The pain of seeing you like this is a lot to bear. I know the cancer will take over. And you will be gone forever. Now you’re gone before my eyes. It hurts like a piercing knife. But I know you’re in a better place. Just my heart has an empty space... < /3 I love you always have and always will...
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:43 am | |
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«Ñ¡té-T¡mé £ºvér» Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 4923 Location : In Mi Mind Join date : 2010-02-28
Character sheet Name: She'Quan Age: 17 Affinities : Earth
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Fri Jan 06, 2012 8:14 pm | |
| Brutality of Facebook I tag the faces of those who hate, Poke at the ones that think they can tear me down. Yet I just upload the new software to get ride of their voices. Screams and shout can't be heard; For I deleted them out of my life. I add their cries and pleas onto my charts. No one has yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen. I tag the lifeless and those that don't breath. I tag them into my world of hatred and poise, Poke at the way they fall apart. I upload a lifeline for a rescue squad But I don't plan to share it. I deleted all that was pure and good, replaced it with pure evil and grim. I add firery flames to the mix to creat a gret explosion. No one has yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen. Tagging life throughout the years; Poking around in things unclear. Uploading the images of death and sorrow; Yet nothing is ever fair when it comes to facing tomorrow. Deleting the thoughts of joy and happiness Replace them with added thoughts of pain and wiry; Share your words through silent tears. No one had yet to report the brutality of the scares unseen. Fantasy Kill Screams of horror fill the house as the dramatic music builds for the climax. I brace myself as excitement fills my body. Nothing makes me happier than watching someone get brutally murdered. It fills me with joy and I want to watch it again. The killer does a sneak attack and slits her throat. Oh! That gorgeously, marvolus throat of hers Sprays blood everywhere as she gasps for air. He takes his long blade and licks the blood clean. I let my soul sore into the screen and explore the depths of the murder, And feel my body hunger for that same thrilling factor.[/size] [size=12]I set out to fufill my hearts desire and start my own movie. The fear and cries for help feeds my longing soul and I advance in my makings. I sit and watch over and over the work of art I've created until it's not enough. New victim every month, maybe every week, until I'm bored. I get bolder in my actions, and go to the extremes and begin to play with the corpse. Their heavy metalic blood, thick on my lips, Slides down my throat like ice cream. The bodies become boring so I work on a new master piece. Day-by-day it's starting to come together perfectly, until the blood runs dry. My body has become my new work of art, and I'm very well pleased. Defeat Inside my mind there's secrets untold Inside my eyes there's hidden sorrow. Inside my mouth there's truths untold. Hidden behind my smile there lies a frown. Deep waves of regret Hot streams of sin Firey shots of guilt And hard punches of anger. Trying to hide Trying to run No where to go No where to escpe. Trapped in the world with no hope of freedom Grief and unforgiveness takes over. Standing waist deep in tears of rage Walking stomach deep in fires of anger Breathing only makes it worse Living only make it unbareable. Smiling only weakens And laughingonly angers. No fighting No trying No running away No changing Stand against it Look beuond it Frown upon it And evolve it Stand alone Stand strong Stand tall Stan firm Be with one Be with light Be with greatness And be with strenght . For you shall not be DEFEATED. | |
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Moonwalker12 Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 21316 Location : nowhere Join date : 2010-07-19
Character sheet Name: Kassidy Age: 16 Affinities : Fire and night
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Fri Jan 06, 2012 9:18 pm | |
| ~Hiding behind my big brown eyes~
Do you even see the real me? The one who wants to be happy? The one whos tired of feeling helpless? I want to be seen, heard.... Remembered. But it seems I just fade away...
I want people to see who I am.. Not just some girl with unreadable brown eyes. Who feels ugly and unworthy to be loved. I wanna be held and promised things that people won't break.
I wanna see you smiling at me because you're proud. Or am I asking for to much? Is it possible I stop feeling empty? To stop these tears that burn my cheeks..? Or am I just unlovable? Unimportant? Was I ever important?
That's what is hidden behind my big brown eyes. Wishes that won't come true.. And a heart that broke to soon. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sat Jan 07, 2012 6:19 am | |
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~♪Dark_Rose♪~ Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 25979 Location : I see hell in your eyes! Join date : 2010-05-13
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sat Jan 07, 2012 5:17 pm | |
| ~Fooled~ I love you. Do you love me? No you don't its a lie. I can see it in your eyes, your a fool and I'm a jewel. So don't break me you'll be fooled. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Burn~ Burn baby burn For the fire is hot, And you cant take the heat, I hear your screams As tears fall down my cheek But its what you get When you betray The ones you love For those they hate. Be bathed in fire and flam Endure the pain, And think of your betrayal This was your fate To be burned in the inferno Burn baby burn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Insane~ Take time just to listen to the voices screaming only to find out there not real It seems I'm going Insane Sane? Insane? and its Almost Easy | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:34 am | |
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~♪Dark_Rose♪~ Trying to stop war
Age : 30 Posts : 25979 Location : I see hell in your eyes! Join date : 2010-05-13
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:39 am | |
| (lol You welcome daughter!) | |
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DaughterofNyx101 Finally mastering Fire
Age : 34 Posts : 633 Location : Home Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Hecate Age: 19 Affinities : Earth
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 22, 2012 2:32 am | |
| Anam Cara
Silence in the clearing. A white wolf crosses my path. She is my guide, my companion. She is the lamp that lights my path. I am her and she is me. We are one.
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Silent Words
My language is silent. No hearing only seeing. My fingers fly through the air, Creating images for the mind. The world is my canvas, My hands are the paintbrush. My language is for the eyes. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 22, 2012 12:56 pm | |
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FallenInLove Trying to break up a fight
Age : 30 Posts : 1630 Location : sitting in a corner, crying, wishing I could be in your arms :/ </3 Join date : 2011-11-29
Character sheet Name: Michelle Wherry (before marking: Allison Jackson) Age: 15 Affinities : Air, Fire, Water, Earth, Soul, and can feel when people close to her are injured
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 22, 2012 1:32 pm | |
| (when are entries stopped being taken?) | |
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Allyson Accidentally causing an earthquake with Earth
Age : 33 Posts : 900 Location : in my own wonderland <3 Join date : 2010-04-18
Character sheet Name: Allyson Age: mommy age :) Affinities : Dreams
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:26 pm | |
| AMBROSIA
Like ambrosia the gods, Liquid crystal clear, Sharp and brilliant A taste to purify all immortal souls A taste beyond the taste of heaven
Like paradise to the mortals, Unreachable, untouchable Bliss and joy A place to forgive all sins A place to redeem all souls
Like the air to humankind, Necessary, eternal Survival depends on it A gift to those who live A gift to help us live
You are all these things You are everything And more. | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Mon Jan 23, 2012 12:08 am | |
| (24th of this month ( | |
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*~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 28 Posts : 2240 Location : Place where I can be away from loneliness. Join date : 2009-07-14
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| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Mon Jan 23, 2012 3:49 am | |
| Entries posted after this post will not be taken into consideration.
Sincere gratefulness to all who have so kindly sent in your entries for this competition.
Finally, thank you for your patience while the judges decide upon the winning write. Please check the hall of fame regularly, the winning piece and poet will be posted in the hall of fame.
From judges. Princessofdarkness, Ash and Dreamer. | |
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FallenInLove Trying to break up a fight
Age : 30 Posts : 1630 Location : sitting in a corner, crying, wishing I could be in your arms :/ </3 Join date : 2011-11-29
Character sheet Name: Michelle Wherry (before marking: Allison Jackson) Age: 15 Affinities : Air, Fire, Water, Earth, Soul, and can feel when people close to her are injured
| Subject: Re: The Poetry War Fri Mar 30, 2012 8:16 pm | |
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