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Alice.
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PostSubject: No name.   No name. EmptyTue Oct 13, 2009 11:50 pm

Okay, so I wrote this a few days ago and I want a little help from ya'll, tell me what you think, I might post more!


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Gabriela had always been a great dancer, and singer. So she didn't regret coming home at ten o' clock at night from the ballet stuido.

She was actually happy of this, because she got to have a peacefull walk back to the farm her Grandmother, Mary-Lenette, live in. It was a very long walk, a mile, two at the most, but it was very peacefull. Not that many people out in the country took a walk out here, rumor that some kids had gone missing kept them inside with the doors locked.

So, Gabriela was deeply suprised when she saw a little blonde girl perched on one of the posts on the fence of a coral of some farmer's farm. She was extremly pale, and her blonde hair was pulled back, into a bun. The little girl reminded Gabriela of Tinkerbell, they looked very alike, same blonde hair, plump little face, small petite body, and the same bangs on their forehead. The moonlight seemed to make her body glow, making her already beautiful face look god-like.

Gabriela quickend her pace, and was shocked to see that when she got there the little girl was actually glowing, a glowish glow around her.

"Uh, hi."Gabriela said, putting her hand on her shoulder."Are you okay?"

The little girl looked up, revealing large, blood red eyes, covered with longe black lashes. Her pale face looked...scared?No...worried?Gabriela relised with a shock that the pale little girl looked hungry.

She took an automatic step backward, her body giving a violent jerk and the warning bells inside her head screaming for her to run, but Gabriela's eyes were locked with the pale girl's maroon eyes. She couldn't move, she couldn't speak, she was trapped.

Gabriela starred and starred until she started breathing hard, looking into the little girls eyes was hurting her, she knew she had to run, but she couldn't, she wanted to cry out and run as fast as her strong dancer legs could take her, but she couldn't.

All at once the little girl jumped down from the post, she was very short, probably four feet, but Gabriela's attention was all on her face, slowly the sides of her mouth turned up into a smile.No, a jack-o-lantern grin, revealing her white little teeth. Then slowly they extended, extended into fangs.

That's when Gabriela was swallowed by darkness.



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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Combining your affinities to save the day
Alice.


Female Gemini Rat
Age : 28
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13

Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition

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PostSubject: Re: No name.   No name. EmptySat Oct 31, 2009 5:43 pm

Okay, well here's first chapter, took me a while cuz I got Tempted and my Math teacher had to rip it out of my hands before I realised I hadn't do ANYTHING but read. (The book is AWSEOME) So here it iz XP

HOT AND COLD
Selena

If Victoria was nicer maybe I'd like her."Aliza, a Fire Witch, was saying, she flipped her red layered super straight hair and smiled."Not that I want you to tell her."

"It's okay."Selena said, smiling evily."I woun't tell."

Selena watched her cring slightly at her girn, she knew how she looked of course, evil and vampireish. Oh puh-lease! They weren't that scary, vampires were actually quite peaceful people, sort of.

"Well, anyway."Selena said, smiling normaly."Sterling was ticked off earlier and I need to go find out why."

Aliza nodded, stopping infront of a purple door."Okay, I'll see you later Selena."

"Wee wee."Selena muttered, continuing down the hall. The huge mansion had diffrent colored doors from the second floor up, mostly because it was acupied by Fire, Water, Earth, and Air Witches who wanted there own personal color. So, annoyed, Victoria, Jinx's only guard, had agreed. Not one witch had the same color, not one, Selena was a "messenger" so her door was like all the guest room door's. Black.

She sighed as she remebered her "misson". She was supposed to find twins who were in this town and shared a soul. How weird was that? Not very weird when she had seen their crappy life. She wasn't a phsycic, she was just able to see someones past by touching a belonging of that person, and she just happened to have Alison's (one of the twins) bracelette.

They were pretty girls, Selena had to admit, but there was something definitely wrong about them. All Selena knew was that she, Sterling, Aspen, Phillip, and annoying Alexander, the tag along healer, were supposed to find those twins and protect them. She also knew (by a reliable fay, a fourtune teller) that she only really needed to save one of the, because Max and Tatiana and Teal (Other "messenger's" gone bad) needed the other one, who know's for what.

Selena shook her short dirt blonde Tinkerbell hair, she did look like Tinkerbell, only her eyes were the only wrong thing. It was pretty cool that the famouse fairy could actually be her mirror-like twin, but it wasn't pretty nice being teased about it by Phil, Mr.I'm-to-hot-for-this-shirt.

Selena stopped at the bottom of the stairs that led up to the third floor. Alison. Alison. She knew that name, but from where? She'd heard it in someone's head, she knew that, she was sure of that, but who's? Selena continued up the stairs, bitting on her pink lip. Alison...Alison..so familiar it was at the tip of her tounge.

Oh. She thought, I remeber, it was that girl on my way here. In Texas. Last night when I caught her in the middle of that dirt road, while I had darnk her blood I had been touching her, making my pshycic power stronger and being able to read her thoughts straight out.

She continued down the hall, half of her brain looking for that single black door and the other half thinking. Obviously, that girl, Gabriela, had been relaided to Alison, the girl she was looking for. Then that was a powerfull weapon, in her tiny delicate looking head she had all of Gabriela's memorys, there for she knew exactly why Alison was so crystal clear in Gabriela's past.

Selena almost past the door if Sterling hadn't been waiting for her, leaning against the wall outside.

"Listening again?"She asked, rolling her large, babyish maroon eyes.

He grinned, "It's there, annoyingly." He said,"Anyway, so you know where Alison is?"

"If I didn't, Phil could have tracked her down in a nano second."Selena said, squinting annoyingly at Sterling.

He shrugged and glanced down the hall behind her,"Aspen's coming."

Selena turned around at the same time the beautiful, tall, curvy red headed girl rounded the corner, looking feral even with the corn in her red hair.

"I hate this place!"She snarled,"I hate Phil, I hate Abby, I hate Tammy and Mckayla!"

"What happened?"Selena asked, frowning sourly.

Aspen but her hands on her hips and shook her head, catching onto the mood quickly."This place is rainning with discovery, what happened?"

Selena stared hard at Aspen. She had to be the most beautiful vampire, ever. No one could have the same, natural long layered red hair as her, each layer pushed back nicely (and naturaly) like a birds wing. Her maroon eyes were scorching, blazing with anger, her long strong nose and full ruby colored lips, and her curvy sixteen-year-old body could have been rapped around like a nun's and she would have been gorgeous."We know and found Alison."She said after a while.

She raised her eye brow,"Okay, so now what do we do? We found one, but where the other one?"

"Alison is ours."Selena said, pursing her lips."She has to be."

((Forgot to mention it's still not done, I have LOTS of catching up to do and may take me a while))



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