A look in the mind of Brittni

Step by Step
Word by Word
You seperate yourself from my world
Sunshine makes ur blue eyes glow
As you beg for me to let u go
You're asking me to let my heart fall apart
To watch you walk out of my life
Looking like a tragic peice of art
I take a breath that feels like daggers at my neck
I touch my throat just to check
You taking away your love can not harm me
Atleast outside of the skin...

I love it :]
my favorite parts are the last 4 lines <3

I love it.
Awesomaticoolio.

hehe thank you guys =] I appreciate it.

Inspire me
Give me something to strive on
Show me a me that im suppose ta be
Give me a reason to keep going strong
Show me a way
Give me a reason to stay
Show me that theres no lengths to far
Give me a wish to put upon a star
Show me how to reach and bend
Give me a reason...why this shouldnt be the end...

Seriously! You have an amzing talent for poetry!
I like that one alot.

hehe aww you made me smile =] lol
thank you so much.
tehy come from the bottom of my heart and the top of my head...
OOOOHH thats good for a new poem =]

I have a fire burning inside of me
brighter then the blazen sun and warmer than a boiling sea
If you touch then you will be burned
Consider your lesson learned
I will shine brightly even if you try to take away my internal flame
I will put your childish efforts to shame
The more you fight against me, the more I will shine
The fire inside of me will always be mine

Love them! =]
Keep it up. I want to read more

=]

Amazing.
You have a great talent.
=)

hehe u guys make me blush lol thank you.



I was dead before
On the darkedened shore
Covered in the sands embrace
I travel abroad looking upon myself
I wish to remain at my resting place
There is a light
But I will fight
I will not leave my resting place
This place is mine where I had my final breath
It shall always be mine even after death

Sing me to sleep
With ur soft breaths
Give me peace
Better than sweet painless deaths
Be my surrender, let me be contempt in ur arms
Let me not worry
With you I am safe from any harms
Let me not be sorry
For letting myself love again
It would be a tragedy
To let this magic end

Both really good.
I like the first one a little better, though.
But, they're both great.

thank you so much =]

Dancing in the darkness
Sweeping around like a swift caress
A golden light surrounds you
A mesmerizing glowing hue
I try to get close, just enough to touch
And you slip away giving me a firey rush
As I stare at you as you danve in the dark
A golden warmth feels my heart
If I could only have you at my finger tips
And press ur golden aura to my lips
I could steal ur glow that would never end
I would keep ur light my firey friend

Bridgett Faye

I've never seen a tragedy look so beautiful
The tears in your eyes have never looked so wonderful
They glisten more than the stars on the most magical of nights
Such sorrow being brought to you just isn't right
The innocence I fought to protect
Was taken from you; as I listen I sit erect
Like a gaurdian I seek to take your pain
Take it away and in my own heart it would remain
Anything to protect whats left of your heart
I promise, beautiful tragedy, we will never be apart
I will stand by your side no matter what you do
Its the weight of the world against me and you


((this is a poem for my best friend.))