The Three

amazing? id say the story is in the middle of good and great at best

so when will you post more? just out of curiosity.....?

i only have a little bit more so it'll be a while sorry

ok i still can't wait for more!!

me too...i want to read what you wrote and i don't really care if that's only 2 sentences

he swolowed "ummm...i like you too?"

"i knew you were going to say something like that!" i got up and started to walk to the door but then turned around "you know what? i should have never trusted you. but i said that knowing you wouldnt like me back!" i started to cry, i couldnt help it "im so stup-"

"your not stupid" nick stood up and walked over and hugged me. which is not something i expected

"you just cought me by surprise thats all"

then i did something i never thought i'd do : i kissed him. and he kissed me back! i mentanly squeed yay!

(sorry but thats all i got atm)

Oh My God!!!!! it's great

thank you

thank you

I love the story your writing

i have more but i cant post it now coz i dont have the book with me
it will be posted soon though

a cough interupted us and we jumped apart. it was simon who coughed

"what happened to 'giving us some privacy'?" i asked annoyed

"i said i was going out the door. i didnt say for how long"

"yea well go away, we're no finished yet"

"no we need to figure out what we're going to do about what that guy did to us"

"way to spoil my good mood simon" i rolled my eyes

Nick P.O.V

that was was the best thing thats happened to me...so far i thought not paying attention to what vitani and simon were saying im probably going to feel bad about this later but i want to do bad things to her i thought for a second yep i feel bad now

(ill post the rest tomorrow i have to go to bed now)

here's the rest

i decided to tune in to what they were saying when vitani was saying something about her mood, and i had no idea what she was talking about

"wha...?" i asked her

"nothing" she replied looking annoyed

"but we really need to figure out what we're going to do" simon repeated

vitani sighed "yea your right" she put her sunglasses back on "lets go"

"ummm..where are we going exactly?" simon and i both asked

"simons house"

"i dont think tha-" simon started saying, but vitani cut him off

"come on. put your sunglasses on. lets go"

we followed

Vitani P.O.V.

"i really dont-" simon tried again and again to get me to not come to his house, but i wasnt going to budge

"no. we're going to your house and thats that"

simon grumbled something i couldnt hear


at simons house as soon as we opened the door, his mother was there

where that hell were you?!" she screamed

(im going to post all of it in a few little posts so it dosent hurt you eyes to read it all at once)

simon goes from confident teen to scared 5 year old every time he seen his mother. and thats only when shes yelling at him

he was paler than ever "get in here!" she got a handfull of his shirt and pulled him in the house. we followed before she could slam the door in out faces

it was a pig sty, and it smelled like on too. there were beer cans and bottled everywhere

"who said you could come in here?!" his mother yelled at us

"nobody but we came in anyway" i said

"get out"

"make us" i never did like simons mom. even before his dad said he was going out for a drive and disappeared. i think he drove right out of town personally.

no one knows what really happened to his father except for me and nick. simon always tells people that his parents got divorced and hasnt seen him since then

simons mother looked like she wanted to hit us

"go ahead, hit me" i said calmly "then i can tell everyone that you abuse yours and other peoples children"

the look went away "fine. you can stay. just stay in this room" she said to us, to simon she said "i need to speak to you"

"well maybe i dont want to speak to you" simon said (lol) defiantly

she smacked him across the face "you will listen to me young man! now come!"

simon followed with his head down. then he suddenly stopped and said "you know what? im not listening to you anymore"

(thats all i have atm but more will be up soon)

Wow!
His mom is a B*tch!

lol shes supposed to be

1 will once i write more

me too...just keep writing,i can't wait for more

LOve it keep it up

i have writer's block