graciella's songs

I dont know if it's good but i decided to post it anyways.

Verse 1:We're just sitting here
and i'm wondering
what went wrong
with me
your so happy
and i'm so sad
we used to be alike
but things went bad.
Chorus:
My friend looked down and me and then she said
you can't take things for granted
you can't live life wrong just push your worries a side
and stand strong
people love you and people care.

Verse 2: I looked up at her and tried to smile
then I said
Life aint fairpeople hurt and people cry
I can't live life right
I tried so hard but I still failed
Life wasn't meant for me.
You just say people love and care about me
to try and make me happy instead of sad
but that's not true.

Chorus:

Verse 3: 5 years later
we're still there
at the cross roads between life and death
she starts to cry and I wonder
what went wrong now.
I look up at her and try to smile and then I said
Sissy dear what's wrong now. Who hurt you
They will be sorry cuz no one messes with my friend for life

Chorus:

Verse 4: I held her hand as she told me
What happened now I could see the tears in her eyes
as she said
Life aint fail.
Now it was my turn.
Choruss(but instead of she put I)

Verse5: But you are right
The world's not fair.
The world is wrong but so are we
We can't live in harmony
We're just sitting here
and i'm wondering
what went right
We both start to smile and then we say.
Chorus:(but instead of she we.)

its really good graciella keep it up!!

thanks.

i liked it =]

thanx. I'm thinkin bou writein another song just have to think of it first

okie dokie ^^

here's another one:

Will you hear me now,
when i call out.
I will call to you
when I cant go on.
You were the one
that I trusted
but you broke my heart in two.
Chours: Fix me please
when I call to you
I'm bleeding here
I wanna die but you wont let me go
but you love her.
Verse #2: What is wrong with me
why am I here?
What did I do wrong?
You loved her
but I'd never tell
that secretly I loved you.
You have broken my heart in two
Chorus:
Verse 3:My life is gone
nothings important
withour you
why can't you see me
like I want you to?
Chorus:
I say good bye now
farewell to you
you keep telling me
that you love me
but that's not true
you tell me what I want to hear
and not the truth
Chorus:

who i am:::::
verse 1: why do they say its wrong gross and wierd
judge me like nobody cares
why cant they see the other half of me
see me for who i am
and except me

chorus:for who i am
im just a girl living in this creul world
wishin for exceptance for who i am
not who im not not who they want me to be
but for who i am

verse 2: my fate is twisted turned around
wishin for love but look around
where did everybody go
did they dissapear when my secret showed

chorus

verse 3: why do they say they love and care
when in reality they cant except me
for who i am
they only see the half they want
not the whole
why cant they except me

chorus