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| | Subject: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:31 am | |
| kay so , yeah ;
With grace she walks
With care she talks
She is beauty
Or is it just an appearance?
On the inside, she hurts
On her wrists, she burns
She is gone
Gone into the dark
She is falling
Falling, falling apart
On the outside, she is perfect
On the inside, she is broken
But one sees
He sees her scars
He reads into her lies
He knows
She slows
Slows to a stop
The world is still
She waits, time to kill
He comes, he talks
She listens, she walks
Walks home, alone
She is tired of being alone
Alone in this world
So she leaves
She is gone
She is gone
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 29
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet
Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:43 am | |
| i like it. good job. *thumbs up | |
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Sak-Chan
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 27
Posts : 77791
Location : First Year of collage here I come
Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet
Name: Maria Silversong
Age: 16
Affinities : Air. death.
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:43 am | |
| I love it.  | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:47 am | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 29
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet
Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:52 am | |
| i can somewhat relate to it. it really good in my opinion | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:57 am | |
| a lot of people can i think , , [x |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 29
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
Character sheet
Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 12:58 am | |
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| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 1:02 am | |
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Namine
Admin
 
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 1:39 pm | |
| Goodness you almost had me in tears. Usually I'm not fond of reading poems but that was awsomazingtastic. | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:27 pm | |
| haha , aww , thanks Nami [: |
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Amii~.
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 31
Posts : 5585
Join date : 2009-07-20
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| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Wed Jul 28, 2010 9:17 pm | |
| Awwwe. I love it, babygirl. (: You're amazing. | |
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graciella
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 8897
Location : stalking you...no not u.....u!
Join date : 2009-11-05
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Age:
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| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:09 pm | |
| i luved it it was really good | |
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Guest
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| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jul 31, 2010 10:34 am | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
Character sheet
Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: like , these are gonna fail . ]x Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:12 pm | |
| Spencerrrrr !
Your poem is amazing
Like, it totally didn't fail ;D
Maybe you should change that title of yours [x | |
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