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PostSubject: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptySun Jul 18, 2010 1:53 am

I walked in the puring rain down the steets of LA I walked till i reached my house i mounted the stairs and pushed the door open. "I'm home!" i shouted closeing the door behind me and takeing my jacket off "Oh hun where have you been all night" My mother said stagering into the room she mustr be drunk...agian. "Out walking" i said walking past my mom "Deja dont talk to me like that" I turned around and looked at my mother "Mom your drunk agian ever since Patrick left you youv'e been getting drunk every night mo its been six months straighten up" i said heading for the door I grabbed my jacket "I'll be back home when your sober for once" i walked out the door in fury i went inot the garage and saw that my car was still intact at leats she hasn't driven yet i sighed getting into the car i started my car and pulled out of the drive way. I headed for the only person i could trust Ion. I texted him on my cell Ion: Hey moms drunk agian im comeing to your place for the night see you in an hour i clicked the send botton as i was driving i thought to myself about my life i didnt know i was crying till i looked at the rearveiw mirror is all i could see was a high cheek boned girl with perfect lips and two big green eyes full of tears witch were slightly covered by my messy black hair. i shook my head and rubbed my eyes as i pulled into Ions driveway. I got out of my car as Ion opeaned the door "Hey girle" he said jogging out in the rain and gave me a big hug "I havent seen you in two days where you been" he said swinging me around in a big hug i laughed "Ill tell you if we go inside" i laughed as he sat me down He nodded we headed in his house as i walked i saw that their were four other men and three women their "haveing a party of some sort and i wasnt invited" i laughed till i saw what was on the table i looked at Ion he just looked at me "what" he shrugged i shook my head "Ion you seriouse" i said angerly grabbing a baggie off the table "Meth Ion" i walked up to him i shoved it in his face "uh drugs up the nose i guess i dont know you anymore" I mummered tears falling down my face "Deja no its not.." "Oh its not what i think well it pretty sure looks the hell like it five me three girls most likely sluts all here for a little drug party Im out of here" i pushed past him I looked down and tightened my jaw "Ion I thought you were the one person who loved my and whom i loved but that it i guess dont ever expect to hear from me agian" i ran out into my car and pulled off I drove for hours crying what the hell was wrong with my life i reached a park god who knows where it was but i parked my car and cryed even harder i locked all my doors and crawled into the back seat and cryed myself to sleep.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptySun Jul 18, 2010 4:12 am

My eyes fluttered opean when the sun shone in my eyes i rubbed my eyes and sat up i looked at my phone i had several messages from Ion
Ion:come on Deja i can explain please come back
Ion:Deja where are you come back youve got know where else to go
Ion: Deja its three in the morning im worred were are you
Ion:Deja where thee hell are you im freaking out i miss you and its six in the morning please come back i just wanna....
I closed my phone not want to read more I put my jacket on and grabbed my keys i got out of the car and locked my doors I looked at my phone agian is was tweleve in the afternoon I shook my head i bet i look a mess i walked around the park till I reached a pair of swings a sat on the swing and swade back and forth ooking at the ground I lost track of time till i Heard someone say aomething "What?" i asked looking up to see a guy standing infront of me he looked about my age 17 he had shaggy black hair and blue eyes he was actually real handsom "Are you okay?" he repeated "oh ya im fine why do you ask?" he sat down on the swing next to me "well for starters you look a little sad or disappointed and by the way the Names Kaden" he smiled "Nice to meet you Kaden im Deja and oh i do sorry" "hey what are you sorry for their has to be a reason why your sad?" "well their is but you just met me you wouldnt care" I said standing up " No its fine i would like to help" i looked down at him as he stood up "let me buy you a cup of coffee." he smiled walking towards the exit of the park i stood their not knowing what to do.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyThu Jul 22, 2010 1:18 am

I love this!!! I hope you write more.
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyWed Jul 28, 2010 4:28 pm

cool definatly keep writing
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyTue Aug 17, 2010 10:26 pm

{thanks XD}

"Coming" he smiled turning towards me I nodded and jogged up to him and we continued to walk "If its not rude to ask why did you come up to me im little weird looking " i said looking down he put his hands in his pocket "not weird different and i like different" he smiled I looked away and stopped "Thanks but really you shouldn't have to lisean to my life its boring"
"No i bet its interesting and you do need to tell someone you looked stressedd and lost id like to help you"
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Female Aquarius Pig
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyTue Aug 17, 2010 10:56 pm

keep going Pleaze
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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyTue Nov 30, 2010 7:46 pm

I Looked up at him and saw that he was serious "your serious aren't you?" i asked as i started to walk again he nodded "I am lets put it this way i am the therapist and your the patient i will not say anything but uh, oh, and how do you feel about that?" he smirked jokingly i couldn't help but laugh "See i had already made you laugh." his smile was big and full of joy. I took a breath to control my laughter then spoke "Fine you can listen to my life story but you gotta buy the coffee." i smiled as we rounded a corner. "Okay deal but if i laugh or look like i'm about to cry just leave me" he smirked as we walked up to the Cafe door he held it open for me "Ladies first." he smiled i walked in "why thank you kind sir." i laughed "No problem Ma'am." he mocked in a British accent.I smiled at his mockery of the British accent we sat down in a both and i ordered a coffee then as soon as the waitress left it was then I realized that Ion was sitting two tables from us. I looked straight down hoping that Kaden wouldn't notice but he did "Deja whats wrong?" he asked as he looked around. "its nothing just a friend I don't get along with." that was then Ion noticed me "Deja!" he nearly screamed as he got up and walked up to the booth "where have you been i have been worried sick about you." then he looked over and saw Kaden sitting their with a dumbfounded look. " and who is this guy?" Ion asked more furious I squeezed my hand into a fist and then stood up my face only inches from Ions "Its not of your business and you don't care i know it, it was not my fault that your using meth just leave... wait no I will." i pushed passed Ion as Kaden stood up "Buddy i don't know what your problem is but i can clearly see she doesn't like or need you and your drug habits." Kaden said with a dirty look I grabbed his arm "Come on don't bother with him" i tried to pull him but he would not budge they both were glaring at each other "You wanna say that one more time" Ion said as he shoved Kaden that is when i saw Kaden's eyes turn from their pretty blue to a serious dark ruby red color he shook his head looked up with a smirk on his face "Oh I would sir but if i do i know that in fact that you will punch me in the face then i will fight back and in the end i will have defeated you and have also embarrassed you in front of all these Ladies in this room and i am to much of a gentleman to fret these ladies and deja so in the end i will have to reject and I do hope though in the end we do meet up again." Kaden smirked and nodded to me and we headed out the door that last thing i saw of Ion was the pure intense anger on his face as we walked down the street back to my car in pure silence.





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PostSubject: Re: ~Saved~ {temp}   ~Saved~ {temp} EmptyWed Dec 01, 2010 7:51 pm

if you could whoever reads this i would like you guys to tell me what to fix and what need to betaken out etc i need true criticism i will not take it to heart i need help with this please and thanks you
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