xAmber
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
  
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Join date : 2010-09-22
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Name: Amber
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire, Water, Music
 | | Subject: Amber's really weird spontaneous poems Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:05 am | |
| Hi, I'd like you to read some poems that pop up in my head x] They're usually kinda depressed... I also want to write poems about the elements and rituals and stuff, but at the moment the only thing I can write is depressed. Oh, and right, since English is not my common language, I'll definately make mistakes. Sorry for that, if you can correct them, that would be cool x] No title
My tears of sorrow
don't run dramatically slow
sequentially down my cheeks.
But scarlet red tears
of pain, anger and sadness
trickle from the wounds on my body.
The wrenching pain I feel only in my heart
as wounds from a knife that tears everything open
and leave nothing left of me.
The wounds that cover my body
used as emotional feelings
are numb, boundless,
and, well sh*$#^@, forever.
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xAmber
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 29
Posts : 88
Location : Right here!
Join date : 2010-09-22
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Name: Amber
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire, Water, Music
| | Subject: Re: Amber's really weird spontaneous poems Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:07 am | |
| Also no title...
There's her body, on the floor of the bathroom.
Beside her a knife, a rope and a pair of scissors.
Her dress red, dark, damp and sticky.
Her hair red, dark, damp and sticky.
The floor is red, dark, damp and sticky.
Her wrist with the inside facing up.
From a deep wound in her wrist,
every two seconds a liquid drips.
Red and dark.
Every two seconds.
Red and dark red and dark.
Her chest still and motionless.
As motionless as the quietest place on earth where nothing lives, where nothing grows.
Her eyes closed.
Still and motionless.
A smile on her face, slowly fading.
The smug smile of her last thought.
A smile, which fades together with the last drops of her wrist. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Amber's really weird spontaneous poems Mon Sep 27, 2010 9:39 pm | |
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xAmber
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Age : 29
Posts : 88
Location : Right here!
Join date : 2010-09-22
Character sheet
Name: Amber
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire, Water, Music
| | Subject: Re: Amber's really weird spontaneous poems Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:38 am | |
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