EmoAngel's Poetry

Hiya ummmmm im not very good at writing poems but i figured it'd post em so heres one of em

~*Sitting By The Water*~

As she sits there by the water
Reflecting on what she's done
She listens to the wind
Hearing the faint sounds it carries
Wanting to take the plunge
Wanting to dive in and break the silence
She wonders if she should
Take her own life
Would that do any good?

She watches the water
Still and quiet
Wishing she could just dive in
And never come up
Let her life continue
On the other side

That one is amazing,
It is good.
You are good at writting peotry

thanx this is another. its strange

~*The Angel Is Coming*~

The angel is coming
To take me away
To bring me to a place
Where pain is no more
Some where that I wont be alone
A place where I wont be
The outcast that I am now
A place filled with people like me

The angle will help me
He'll bring me to a place
That I can be free
A place where I can be me

The angle will free me
From the prison I am in
He will break my restraints
And carry me away
He tells me he can save me
From all the pain and suffering
And all I need to do is let go
Let my spirit fly from my body
Let it fly
True and free
And then I can be me

See all your poems are good.
I like this one too

thanx i have more but im debating if i wanna post em

Yes post them

*sigh* they arnt good but fine

~*Her Final Night*~

She listens to the screams
As they run through her head
And she joins in
Laying in her bed
She tries to cry out
Hoping someone will hear
But it is too late
For no one is near

Her heart beats faster
As the terror sets in
And she lies there dying
Wanting to give in
She feels the pain
Surging through her veins
She fights for her life
But her life slips away
Who would have thought
That this would be the day

As her souls begins to leave
And head toward the light
She hears someone calling
For her?
This can't be right

She is getting sleepy now
Knowing it's alright
She feels her eyes closing
As she utters her last good bye
She heart is beating slower now
She's ready to give in
And soon she let's go
Her soul is now free
No longer trapped inside that cage
No longer is she filled with terror and fright
On this
Her final night

~*Slowly I Die*~

Slowly I die
Every day my heart breaks more
No one see's the real me
The one hidden behind all the anger and pain

Behind this dark shroud
Is a girl who needs to be saved
A girl who needs someone to love
Anyone to care for her
Someone to rescue her
From the demons that are trying to steal her away
From the horror she faces every day

As the thoughts flow into her head
She tries to hide it
She tries to be brave
But as day turns to night
And summer turns to fall
The nights get cold
And she drifts away
Slowly fading
Her conciseness slips away
Until the scared girl
Is no more

these are really good

thanx

~*I'm Already Dead*~

You yell and scream
And I run and hide
You start to hit me
And I start to cry

Im terrified
Hidden under a blanket
The thought of you
Scares me to death
But it doesn't matter
Because Im already dead On the inside
And in my head

No one can revive me
For I am to far gone
My soul will wonder forever
For my dream are all crushed
And my hope for love
as ripped away

As i lay in my bed
Waiting for my final day
I know there's no use fighting it
Because I'm already dead
On the inside
And in my head

~*A Life without Me*~

I sit in my room
Alone Scared
My cries so willed with heart ache

The scars are endless
Not on the outside
No there is no evidence

As the beatings get longer
And my cries get softer
The pain begins to fade

The more you hit me
The less hit hurts
And my heart gets ripped out

You tell me I'm worthless
That I don't belong
And as I lay in my bed
Drowning in sorrow
I know I'll be dead
Maybe not tomorrow

The thoughts run threw my head
I wonder how it will be
For you and all my friends
A life without me

omg thats was really good.! keep writing.

well this is my last one so far but ill probably have more tomorrow

~*All This Hell Over Me*~

My heart is broken
Beyond repair
My life is shattered
But you don't care
All you do is scream and yell
And tell me
Im going to hell

All this because I'm different
All this because I'm odd
But I'm going to embrace it now
No, I won't be a fraud

My friends all accept me
Some more then others
So why can't you
You, my own mother

So if hell is truly where I'm headed
Then so be it
Because if that is my destiny
Then it is because I'm being me
And not the girl your trying to make me into
So all this hell is over me

~*So You Can't Hurt Me Again*~

It was a mistake
Me falling in love with you
Because the last time we spoke
You tore my heart in two

You were the only person who understood me
I gave you everything
My heart and soul
But when it came down to it
You ripped them apart

You said you really loved me
And I dreamt about you every night
But when you ended it
I cried myself to sleep

When you ended us
I died inside
Because you were my only love
But now I am getting over you
You were my first love
But you are not my last

You try and make it up to me
You try to get me back
But I ignore the messages
So you can't hurt me again

It looks like your life's pretty stormy? Just like any rebellious teenager (like me!), no doubt. Falling in love (maybe it was a crush), and hating our parents like heaven knows what.

Yeah, parents are irritating at times, but I came to appreciate their presence, but why would a person give birth to a child who belongs to hell? Ever thought she could mean something else? Maybe she just doesn't know how to phrase herself well enough? Idk, but it sure does create a sense of fury when someone claims you come from hell, especially someone like your own parent(s).

Anyway, ever heard 'Family is the closest strangers'? We see them everyday, but they barely know who we are. In fact, our friends know more about our inner worlds than our family members do. Sometimes it's just that it has became a way of life... Seeing each other, striking shallow conversations, being lame. Actually, we don't really know why we are with these people we claim as family. Imagine if we all exist alone... Won't these people just be one of the many strangers who dominate this world? Those who belong in our neighbourhood, and those further out in other countries. If we know the name of the person, that person is a friend... So actually, family members are just friends... and parents are just those who feed you and watch you grow up.

And love, why be sad for someone who cannot appreciate your beauty? Why tear for someone who abandon's a wonderful soul like you? It's okay if you cannot love others, it's okay if you DON'T love others, just love yourself, for who you are, because it's the love that you give yourself that makes you strong and able to withstand all bane. Love yourself, my friend. (:

thanx

They are amazing. See I told you they are good.

Wow, your's are really good

thanx

~*Tears In My Eyes And Blood On Your Face*~

You crying out for help
Lying there in pain
I run to your side
Tears in my eyes
And blood on your face
I don't know what to do
How can I help?

The first time I saw you
I knew my life would change
Was it a good thing
Or would I again
Be looking at a friend
Tears in my eyes
And blood on your face

I couldn't stand the pain
I couldn't stand the sight
Of looking at you
Tears in my eyes
And blood on your face

This one sounded a little repetitive :X Sorry if it offended you, but I don't like packaging myself with a beautiful wrapper, I think it's what's inside which makes it real. I do hope you don't take offence though.

This poem is otherwise, a pretty simple, beautiful write. The question felt as if you're posing it to the reader, demanding an answer you'll never hear from them. Thumbs up for that.

no offense at all. its good to have constructive criticism

Good you think so too.... Some don't I suppose..

Wow. These are amazing! Keep it up.