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PostSubject: Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden   Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 4:46 am

The story forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden can be found Here


I like the last part, good way to end.

Is this the prologue?
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PostSubject: Re: Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden   Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 2:28 pm

thanks! uh i havent decided yet i just randomly started writing in class so im not sure Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden   Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 2:29 pm

It's alright, but it sounds like a prologue :X

Well, good way to begin. Way to go, keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden   Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden EmptySat Sep 19, 2009 3:55 pm

This is really good so far! I hope you decide to add more to it!
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PostSubject: Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden   Comments - forbidden love should stay just that...forbidden EmptySat Oct 10, 2009 7:16 pm

if anyone wants i have more
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