This is seriously good! i thouhtit as a generation dead story but this is really good!
Mommy Raschel Admin
Age : 35 Posts : 1010 Location : Corpus Christi TX Join date : 2009-09-22
Subject: Re: Comments- The Kiss of Death Fri Apr 23, 2010 5:05 am
Tell you one thing...it catches the eye with the title XP
I have issues with correcting grammar sometimes...but I'll leave it be, you could go really far with this story...by telling his background or by making her to be his mate or something XP
Nightchild Mod
Age : 27 Posts : 16373 Location : Sweetie, I don't think so Join date : 2010-01-18
Character sheet Name: Destiny Jez Fall Age: 13 Affinities : Can't miss what I aim at, Spirit and Earth..
Subject: Re: Comments- The Kiss of Death Fri Apr 23, 2010 12:48 pm
I liked it!
Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
Subject: Re: Comments- The Kiss of Death Fri Apr 30, 2010 11:19 am
I love this so far.
earth-spirit Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721 Location : Work Join date : 2010-05-03
