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Ageless Vampire
Appointing your friends to your council
 Posts : 2711
Location : California
Join date : 2009-12-05
Character sheet
Name:
Age: a time of life (usually defined in years) at which some particular qualification or power arises, such as...
Affinities : Fire & Equestrian
| | Subject: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:16 am | |
| The story It's All About The Blood-Offical title can be found HereI think your story has a great start, it feels like at the end you are rushing and you lose some details...I think you should really write more and see where it takes you. Good luck!
-Ageless
Ps. Don't worry about spelling and grammar and all that ...until you are finished. A great tip I recently received is to just get your thoughts onto the paper/screen and then go back to fix/add/whatever to it. | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
 
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Sun Dec 20, 2009 11:25 pm | |
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Katie-la
Discovering you have an affinity for Earth
Age : 27
Posts : 862
Join date : 2009-07-20
Character sheet
Name: Michiko
Age: 15
Affinities : Sound, Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:47 pm | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 28
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet
Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Wed Jan 27, 2010 11:41 pm | |
| ohh plz write more your awesome at it | |
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Azaizall
Seeing the Tracker
  
Age : 31
Posts : 14
Location : Dacula
Join date : 2009-10-23
Character sheet
Name: Azaizall Hollow
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire,Earth,Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:03 pm | |
| I had gotten up to chapter 5 but my sister deleted everything off my computer and i havent had the time to start writting again because i just newly formed a wiccan coven and its been taking up alot of my time srry guys i will let you know when there will be more  | |
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Zoey Redbird
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 32
Posts : 7265
Location : somewere dark, beautiful were the moon is shining waitting for you to come
Join date : 2009-08-01
Character sheet
Name: Sarah Belle
Age: 18
Affinities : spirit, water, earth, wind, and fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:07 pm | |
| it was great!! keep writting more please!! | |
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Azaizall
Seeing the Tracker
Age : 31
Posts : 14
Location : Dacula
Join date : 2009-10-23
Character sheet
Name: Azaizall Hollow
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire,Earth,Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Fri Apr 16, 2010 9:12 pm | |
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twizzlers
Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
 
Age : 29
Posts : 501
Location : somewhere warm ^_^
Join date : 2009-07-26
Character sheet
Name: Rhein
Age: 16
Affinities : water, telekineses, teleportation , singing
| | Subject: Re: Comments - It's All About The Blood-Offical Title Wed Apr 28, 2010 9:06 pm | |
| ah!!!!!! you have to keep writing and im sorry about the whole delete everything part!! thats awful hope you can remeber everything!! plz write more, cant wait to read it!! | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Comments - Message Wed May 19, 2010 3:22 pm | |
| Wow, I really like your story. Hope you get the time to write some more soon. | |
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