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Kit Kat
saddiebaby96
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: I Gave You My <3 (tell me what you think)   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Jan 26, 2011 11:31 pm

I gave you my heart
I gave you everything
that meant something to me
You took and acted like you
loved me but then I found out
you were giving my worst enemy
more of your heart then
you gave me and she didnt
care about you at all
but when I found out
I knew, you shattered my heart
and you didn't care one bit.
But when she found out
she shattered your heart like
you shattered mine you know
how i feel but dont come to me
with your shattered heart
because I will never trust your
a$$ again. Plus I've moved on
maybe you should to!
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Happy Moments( tell me what you think plz)   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Jan 26, 2011 11:45 pm

all my happy moments are with you
every laugh i remember was with you
everytime I try to remember something
you're always there, it is like you were there
for everything even in the sad times... You were
always there for ME now I want and have
to be there for YOU!
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Jan 26, 2011 11:57 pm

The perfect man will tell you that your beautiful everyday no matter what.

The perfect man will stay by your side even in the worst of times.

The perfect man will hand over his coat to you when you are cold.

The perfect man will make you melt when you look into his eyes.

The perfect man can take your breath away with just one little kiss.

The perfect man will breath down the back of your neck to make you speechless.

The perfect man will tell you anything and try to never keep something from you.

The perfect man will stick by your side even if your pregnant.

The perfect man will always be there in your time of grief and cry with you.
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: pain(need help with some more ideas writing this poem)   The Perfect Man EmptyTue Feb 01, 2011 7:29 pm

The pain I feel inside is more then I can hide
I try to fall asleep tonight but all I can do is lay my head down on the pillow we shared and look at the empty space next to me and cry Tears
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyTue Feb 01, 2011 8:01 pm

The empty space was once filled with a guy I loved and now he is gone out of my arms and all that is left there is the nothing which hurts to even think of I had him once I lost him and now he is gone to me forever I wish I could take back what I did and what I said but nothing will change it

I cry myself to sleep every night so alone and afraid that I will never have a love like that again I loved him I did something stupid I messed up everything and I lost him.

It is hard to not cry when I hear what used to be our song playing on the radio or on my sterio. I would do anything to get the love of my life back into my heart and in my arms[b][i]
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:38 pm

i love ur poems!theyre pretty amazing!keep em comin!

looks like ur goin through a rough time sis!im sorry.
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:46 pm

yea i got in a fight with my bf but we all fixed up now Smile and thanks i got some others
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:50 pm

it is called the perfect man i have two more poems under that
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:55 pm

ok kool ill look
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:57 pm

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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 5:59 pm

i luv these so much!ur pretty good!
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:01 pm

thanks sis
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:04 pm

yo welcome!anytime, anytime.
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:05 pm

pretty good!
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:08 pm

thanks im probably gunna put more up soon
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:14 pm

good id like 2 c em
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: real me   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:23 pm

The real me is always bottled up
I feel like I am sificating
only people i trust know the real me
You think because you've known me
since i was little, you know the real me
but most likely not, you've known the pretend Saddie
but if you meet me now
if i feel like you will stick around
I mightlet you know me but when you
first get to know me i am shy... then
BOOM!! i am a total different person
see i told you, you dont know me
maybe someday you will Smile
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Moonwalker12


Female Aquarius Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19

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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:25 pm

Omg saddie!!!! Thats fantastic!!
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Moonwalker12
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Moonwalker12


Female Aquarius Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19

Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:27 pm

Keep them coming girl
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Kit Kat
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Kit Kat


Female Pisces Tiger
Age : 26
Posts : 91
Location : Can't say....They might take me away...Again..... O.o
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: Kaitlin
Age: 13
Affinities : Fire,Air

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:29 pm

ikr!i kinda like these!u need 2 make us some more! Smile
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:29 pm

thanks Ka$$
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Moonwalker12
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Moonwalker12


Female Aquarius Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19

Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:30 pm

Your welcom
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saddiebaby96
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
Telling your parents you are a fledgling
saddiebaby96


Female Cancer Rat
Age : 27
Posts : 78
Location : In Georgies Arms
Join date : 2011-01-25

Character sheet
Name: saddie
Age: 14
Affinities :

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:31 pm

ok will do Smile
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Trying to stop war
Moonwalker12


Female Aquarius Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19

Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:31 pm

Yea totally
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Moonwalker12
Trying to stop war
Trying to stop war
Moonwalker12


Female Aquarius Pig
Age : 28
Posts : 21316
Location : nowhere
Join date : 2010-07-19

Character sheet
Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

The Perfect Man Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Perfect Man   The Perfect Man EmptyWed Feb 02, 2011 6:32 pm

Yea totally
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