Chosen to die

For many years now children have been given away to the vampire kind, to be eaten. In 1973 humans made a deal to the vampires, for them to choose 4 children every day from school to be killed. Some were chosen to live, but i was chosen to die. Name, Julia Ryder. Plan, to survive.

I ran to class hopeing to not be late, if I was, I will be a dead girl. I sat on my seat and grabed my biology book out, the girls around me were scared, even the guys, i look out the window, they were all staring at the window, i turned around, meeting his red eyes i was frightened as well. He stared and pointed at me, mouthing 'your next'. The bell rang, everyone sat down, and the vampires came in, they were lurking around our class. we were never aloud to make friends, because it would be to sad for them to go. "Julia" the teacher calls and points next to me, i turn around and see my vampire that was waiting outside. "lets go" he says, on my way out the teacher put a red rose on my desk. It was my turn.

(i wont make more unless you want more)

Keep on going!

That's really good!!

We Both walk outside, he throws me into a truck with 3 other kids, 2 boys and one girl. we were all scared. "hey it will be ok" one kid says, "no" i say "were all going to die". the truck starts to move, and we were driven to a camp. "oh crap, i heard about this place" the girls says, "this is a storage room, this is were they keep the humans until they die" i gulp. we were taken out of the truck and put into rooms, well that's what they called it, it was really a jail cell. all together now, all alone, we needed to make a plan.
(g2g any ideas for this?)

Yeah I got on how about ur man Charcater plans to escape with the other kids the one girl and two boys...and come up with names for them:)

This is really,really good!

(you can name them, i suk at that....tell me what i should add in the story,(anytime you want) thanks for help :](

((No problem and the girl could be Anna,and the boy 1 can me Ryan and boy two could be Owen ))

this is really AWESOME i can't wait for more!!!!!!!

(will write more this weekend)

Kaay

I like it! you should really continue

This is awesome. You should really continue. Really! Write more! xD

"im julia" i tell the others to calm them down "Hi! im Anna" the girl says, "names ryan" the boy says and "im his twin, owen!" we were all the same age and getting along. we all fell asleep, "whats that!" owen asked, "its nothing" ryan replys, "no,no i heard yelling" we heard the voice of a girl screaming, we all woke up and watched her get dragged out of the jail cell. "poor poor kid" says anna hugging her knees with her eyes staring at the wall behind us, "they are taking her to the grave" we all stare at her "the grave? whats teh grave?" i ask. "its were they kill you, then throwing your copse in a pile of dead people, feeding your body to the rats" we all gulp, the girl was out the double doors and gone. for. good.

i like it keep it up!?!

(whats with the ?)

xD it was probably a mistake or something.....

I like it, keep writing :DD

:/ okk

I really like it, keep writing

This is good Never keep it up!

Are you going to write more?

soon , im just stressed now)

okay, if you don't write more, I'M going to die and be eaten by rats.

im wondering if you are still writing Never...?