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Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Me and You for Eternity? Sun Apr 17, 2011 3:41 pm | |
| This story is about a girl, Lilli Mae Vandom, who has found the love of her life, Ollie Sykes. Lilli Mae is involved in a car crash. She was on her own, and the person who hit her drove off straight after. When the Ambulance and police arrive, her body is no where to be found. When Ollie found out, he locked himself in his room, crying. He stopped eating, and drinking, he cut off all contact from the public. At night, he kept seeing Lilli Mae. He thought he was going crazy, but he still loved her, and thought that it was a sign that she still loved him, even though she was no longer alive. He saw her night and day, in the exact same outfit, same hairstyle, she looked exactly the same as always. But he would never see her again. This is the story from before the accident; Chapter 1 Lilli Mae I sat in the park with Tina and Flissie, my two best friends. We were chatting and giggling. I had a great day with Ollie that day, we walked down by the beach, then bowling, then lunch in one of the best restaurants in town. He always liked to treat me, i loved him for that. I loved him so much, i wanted no one else, ever. I was telling the girls about the day we had. "I am so happy you found Ollie, he is the one for you" Tina said to me, her bright blue eyes were glinting in the setting sun, and her blonde hair looked ginger. It often went ginger in Autumn. "He is such a fine lookin' guy." Flissie added with her okie accent. She moved from Oklahoma five years ago, a green eyed, brown haired girl, who is now my best friend. "I love him so much, i don't want to lose him" I told them "You won't lose him, he's the perfect guy." Flissie said to me, hugging me. Tina joined in the hug. "It's getting late, we should go home now" I said to the girls. We walked out the park, and said goodbye before going our separate ways. I walked along the path, it was dark now, and i didn't have to be home for another hour, but i kept to my usual route home. I checked the road before crossing. |It was clear, so i walked. I was on my feet one moment, the next, i was down on the ground. I had been hit by a speeding car, i didn't hear it. Everything went black. I couldn't hear, see, feel, or smell anything. I was dying. I was going to lose Ollie. I couldn't lose him, not now, i loved him too much to lose him right now. I fell unconscious.
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| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:54 pm | |
| Ollie I sat in my room after an amazing day with Lilli. I loved her so much. It was good to have a proper day together and not just an hour or two. It had been a great day, my favorite part had to be bowling, we laughed, kissed, cuddled, and had fun. I would never forget today. I would treat it like our last, i was always told to treat each day like my last, so i always do. I sent her a message Hey Lil just wanted to say i had a great day with you today, one of the best ever. I wanted you to know that i love you, and i will always love you no matter what. I added loads of kisses at the end of the text too. I put my phone down on my bedside desk and fell to sleep. I couldn't wait to see her again. | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Mon Apr 18, 2011 7:50 am | |
| Part 2 Lilli Mae I don't know what happened to me. I remember been close to death, then i woke up. I was Alive! But i didn't feel human no more. Something was wrong. I had an aching thirst, and my body felt different. I guess i'm in a coma. I tried breathing in, my nose hurt slightly, but i could smell more than ever before. i could feel air against my skin. I felt unusually warm, which was annoying me. I could hear the quietest whispers. I opened my eyes to a bright light. I shut them again soon after, and got up. I wasn't in a coma, where was I? "Careful" I heard a voice. I didn't recognize it. "Who are you?" I asked, my voice was shaky, my throat hurt more. "I am Donovan Carlson. You can call me Don." He had Blond hair and greyish eyes. He was tall. "What did you do to me?" I was scared, as he moved toward me "I found you out in the street, dying, losing a lot of blood. I wasn't sure if you would survive if i changed you..." "Changed me!?" I shouted, then brought a hand to my throat, it hurt badly. "You are now a Vampyre Fae. You are no longer human. I changed you because i wanted you to have a second chance in life. I rarely change people. I have only changed my wife, and two others." "Where are they?" I said, then i heard footsteps and looked toward the door. The two women and the guy who walked in were beautiful. I didn't belong here. "This is my wife Lucinda." He said as a dark haired and dark eyed woman walked toward him. She had pale skin, like the rest of them. "Hello, nice to meet you" She said with a gentle smile. "Hi" I whispered. "I'm Amelia" A tall blond hair green eyed girl walked toward me with a huge grin on her face. "Whats your name?" "Lilli Mae" I replied. "Nice to meet you, call me Ami" She said back to me. "And this is Jackson." Don motioned over to a tallish brown haired blue eyed guy. "Hi." He said deeply, not really paying much attention. "Thanks for saving me and nice to meet you all, but i best be going home now." I said to them all and got off the table. "You can't go home, your family and friends think your dead. They now think your body is at the morgue. You need to return there tomorrow morning for your funeral. You must lay in the coffin, then, before they lock it, get out and we will bring you back here." "I can't go back home?" I wanted to cry now, but i couldn't. "I'm afraid not." Don said to me. I couldn't see Ollie ever again. That was going to kill me. I couldn't bear not seeing him. Ami moved forward to comfort me. "Here, you need to drink this" She handed me a glass with blood, i drank it, and it tasted good to my surprise. "Ami, take Lilli to her new room, we will introduce her to her new life after the funeral." Don told Ami. I followed her up the stairs to a huge room, it was white, and there was a king size bed, walk in wardrobe which seemed to go on forever, and a work desk. It was huge. "All our rooms have everything we need. I will take you shopping for clothes, shoes, make up, hair stuff, everything you want for your room. Come to mine tonight, we can watch tv, dvds, and get to know each other." "Okay" I smiled and followed her. I think i will get on well with Ami, but i was still upset.
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| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Mon Apr 18, 2011 11:17 am | |
| Ollie It has been five days since Lilli died. I haven't stopped crying, I have barely slept. My heart has been ripped out my chest, never to be returned. I haven't eaten, drank or spoken to anyone. I have been in my room since i found out about Lilli's death. I ignored texts from those who text me, i ignored calls too. I refused to let people come in to see me. I will attend the funeral. I wanted to say a proper good bye to Lilli. All i wanted was to see her once more. I know that is impossible, but i have to. I wanted to get out of Nashville, it was driving me crazy. I wanted to leave with Lilli but i can't, she is gone from my life forever. I will leave soon, on my 18th birthday, in a couple months, with her in my memory forever. I would return each year on her birthday to visit her grave, leave flowers for her, tell her i love her. I will always love her, she is my girl. I lay back on my bed, crying my eyes out, wanting Lilli to be with me so i can hug her, and tell her i'll be fine. | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Apr 19, 2011 1:01 pm | |
| Lilli Mae Part 3I walked into Ami's room, it was bright pink with cream curtains and bed sheets. She had the same stuff as me, and a huge flat screen tv, it must be 50" at least. there was a dvd player, surround sound system, book shelves full of old and new books. there was a balcony, that looked out over a forest. "This is my room, its unusually tidy for once. Choose a dvd to watch and i've got us some blood or we could just talk if you want to." Ami said to me. "Can we just talk, i'm still scared and confused about this new life." "Where shall we start?" "What are we exactly?" I asked. "We are Vampyre Fae. Thats a type of Vampyre with unusual abilities. Like me, i can move things with the power of my mind, like this," She looked at the tv remote, and it rose up into the air we both watched it move round the room. It landed on the bed beside her. "I wonder what mine is" I murdered. "It could be anything, do you feel attracted or always wish you could do something?" "When i woke up, i felt overly warm." "We feel warm all the time, we can't feel the cold." "Yeah but i felt like a roast turkey, and my fingers felt like i'd burnt them." "I think yours is for fire. It is possible. If you are attracted to the elements, that is kinda rare. Not many people have them. I met one person with one before you, he had a gift fo Water, and it was magnificent."
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| | | vampirechild Accidentally blowing your friends over with Air
Age : 26 Posts : 340 Location : turn around, im right behind you Join date : 2011-03-28
Character sheet Name: Sita Age: 12 Affinities : water, fire
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Apr 19, 2011 10:03 pm | |
| wow that's really good. remindes me of my story. hope u write more. | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Wed Apr 20, 2011 6:11 am | |
| thanks and i'll write more soon | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Wed Apr 20, 2011 1:07 pm | |
| Ollie I was severely depressed right now. I got out my blade, and dragged it across my veins. I had been doing this since the day i found out Lilli had died. It didn't ease the pain, but it made me feel better. I only had to go through tomorrow, been outside in public, then i would be back in here, alone. I preferred been alone. Last time i let someone in my room, last night, was my mom. I threw the food back at her, and told her i would rather starve. It turned into a bad argument and i told her i wanted to die. She ran out crying. It really didn't help, but i kept hitting the door in anger. I was so upset that i lost my girl. Nothing could bring her back. I would do anything just to look into her beautiful chocolate brown eyes, run my fingers through her soft silky midnight black hair, kiss her cherry red lips. I can't do any of those things again. Ever. All i want is just five minutes with her again. | |
| | | vampirechild Accidentally blowing your friends over with Air
Age : 26 Posts : 340 Location : turn around, im right behind you Join date : 2011-03-28
Character sheet Name: Sita Age: 12 Affinities : water, fire
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:56 pm | |
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| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Fri Apr 22, 2011 6:58 pm | |
| Thank you i will write more when i get the time | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Mon Apr 25, 2011 1:29 pm | |
| Lilli Mae Me and Ami sat talking all night. She told me that we were able to go out during the day, nothing affected us. That we do need blood to survive, but as long as drink blood regularly, we can eat and drink like a normal human would, and that we stay the same age for eternity. It hurt to think of a life without Ollie for Eternity. I could never survive. "I need to go out, i need some air." I said, i felt dizzy, thinking of a life without Ollie "Okay, let's go for a walk" Ami replied. We walked down stairs and out the door. We were in the house in the forest. It looked old and worn down on the outside, so no one bothered coming here. "Get ready to run" Ami grabbed my arm and we ran. It was faster than i had ever ran before, an impossible speed. I tried running myself, and it was amazing. We stopped in the Park. I had been here not so long ago with Tina and Flissie. I missed them too. I wanted to see Ollie one last time. "I need to see Ollie, just one more time." I said to Ami. "Who's Ollie?" "My boyfriend, i miss him and i need to see him." "I can't let you do that, its too dangerous." "Didn't you go see your loved ones after you Changed?" Ami looked down "Yeah i did, i went to see my husband and my parents. They thought they were mad and they were seeing my ghost." "But nothing too bad happened, right?" "Right. Okay, we will go, but if sees you, and thinks your real, we are so undead." "Okay i got it." We started walking to Ollie's place. We kept hidden so people didn't see me. When we got there, i walked round to his window. I set off up the tree outside his window, and sat on a branch. I saw him crying, and covered in scars. It hurt me to see him like this. It hurt that i couldn't cry either. I saw his head turn, and i sat as still as i could. | |
| | | vampirechild Accidentally blowing your friends over with Air
Age : 26 Posts : 340 Location : turn around, im right behind you Join date : 2011-03-28
Character sheet Name: Sita Age: 12 Affinities : water, fire
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Mon Apr 25, 2011 6:09 pm | |
| Oh my gosh, I wonder what happens next. | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Apr 26, 2011 5:23 am | |
| Ollie I turned my head to the window, as i felt something, a presence. I looked, and there was Lilli> I stared for a minute, she was upset. It must be her ghost, she died, so it can't be her. I turned to put the light on but when i turned round again, she was gone. I was sure it was Lilli's ghost. She was too pale to be real, but she was still beautiful. She will always be my beautiful, sweet, smiling girl, no matter where she is. Tonight, i will go to sleep remembering that, and thinking of Lilli. I had to stop hurting myself, she must have been watching me do all this. I will stop for her, I will do anything for her. I turned my light back off, then laid down and fell to sleep. Thinking of Lilli, like always. | |
| | | ZOEY AND STARK FOREVER Discovering you have an affinity for Water
Age : 26 Posts : 680 Location : And why do you need to know??? Stalker much!!! Join date : 2010-11-03
Character sheet Name: Alexandera( alex for shortz(or ally) Age: 16 Affinities : vision, can see the dead, & can tell if someone is lieing
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:21 pm | |
| This is really good keep it up!?! | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Sat Apr 30, 2011 7:06 am | |
| "What's wrong, what happened?" Ami asked when i got back down to the ground "He saw me, he just stared for a few seconds then turned to get the lights, i took my chance to leave then before it lead to more. I know he can't be in my life no more, but i can't not see him ever again" "I'm afraid thats how it has to be" "No, no i can't do that, no one can make me" Ami sighed, we began running back to the house "I guess you will probably go see him again, but if things get too much, don't let him know you are still sort of alive." "Okay, he won't find out, i am good at keeping quiet." We got back "How are you feeling?" Lucinda asked, i think that was her name. "I... I'm good now" I smiled at her. "Ah, i see, you Ollie, the guy you don't want to let go of." My eyes went wide when she said that. "How do you do that?" I asked. "I can read thoughts and," She smiled at me I can project mine or in other words, talk to your mind "That is just amazing" I said in awe of it all. "Thank you" her eyes twinkled "I am surprised you have one for Fire, i have never met someone quite like you. I wonder if you can control any others. If so, then you must be one of the most talented Vampyre Fey we have in existence." She was still reading my thoughts. "I don't know" i focused on air, thinking of a breeze drifting round me, the soft touch of it. "Wow!" Ami squealed in excitement. Even i couldn't believe this. "This is amazing, Lilli, you want to try any more or would you rather rest up for the night. We can practice more tomorrow" "Um, i'll practice what i have for tonight, then tomorrow we could try more." | |
| | | Emo Kitty Admin
Age : 30 Posts : 13422 Location : Cross Academy Join date : 2010-04-14
Character sheet Name: Luna Moon Age: 19 Affinities : Fire, Darkness
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Mon May 23, 2011 7:24 am | |
| I returned to Ami's room with her "You are amazing, Lilli" She said, her eyes wide and in thought "I wonder if you can control all the elements" "I don't know about that, i mean, i guess i got lucky tonight" "Its highly likely you will be able to control them" A voice said, it was Jackson, stood in his doorway. "How do you..." I said but got cut off "I see the future. I can see yours, depending on what you choose to do. The future's not set in stone, it is simply waiting to be chosen." "Wow, i didn't think it was possible to see the future." "Yes, it is possible. A rare ability too. Only 2 others are like me in the world. Powerful vampyre Fey Coven's have tried convincing me to join them, but they now i will turn them down, i prefer the quiet life here. Where i belong." "If anyone tried doing that to me, i would rather stay here on my own" I said to him. "Be careful of others. There are others more dangerous than us, the kill humans for fun, torture them, and do worse things. You can tell if someone is a Dark Vampyre Fey by their eyes. They are usually blood red and deeply hypnotic. Never look into them." "How do you know things about them?" I asked "I used to be one" | |
| | | vampirechild Accidentally blowing your friends over with Air
Age : 26 Posts : 340 Location : turn around, im right behind you Join date : 2011-03-28
Character sheet Name: Sita Age: 12 Affinities : water, fire
| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:48 pm | |
| this is really good. I hope you write more. | |
| | | Moonwalker12 Trying to stop war
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| Subject: Re: Me and You for Eternity? Tue Jul 05, 2011 6:24 pm | |
| This is really good, cant wait to read more | |
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