Wood Elf Forbbiden Love

Subject: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:49 am

This is just the frist chapter and the start of the secod chappter. Enjoy!

Chapter 1

Life for me begins here at the village of wood elves. I have black hair green eyes my hair comes to middle of my back. I’m tall for my age among these elves. I wear a tank top like shirt but it was a like cut offs sleeves cut off to look like a sort of a tank top and cut off where you can see where the tattoo ends. The shorts I wear were cut offs as well they come up to mid part of my leg. I carry two daggers on my wrists. I have a tattoo of vines running from my neck down one of my arms to my stomach. I wear black boots that look gothic but aren’t. My name is Makia Silver. And I’m someone you don’t want to mess with.

“Makia, wake up girl you’re going to be late again.” My mother called up to my room. I shot up almost forgetting what today was. My mother knew about me and my boyfriend and today was our first year being together. I ran down stairs lucky my father was out and about today. I grabbed an apple and kissed my mom bye as I left. I snuck passed the wheat fields where I saw my father working happily.

I walked around my village looking for one thing in particular. Him, he was always on my mind. I ran out of the village and headed to the woods and to the pond where I meet him. He was corrupted but I didn’t care he was mine and no one else’s.

I saw him with a face I could not recognize. I walked up to him and we greeted each other with a kiss. When he pulled back I smiled up at him but yet he did not.

“James what is the matter?” I asked him rubbing his shoulders.

“Makia they will be starting a war. They also know about us.” He shrugged my hands off. He faced me I knew he didn’t want to lose me for any of this.

“Why?” I asked. I looked deep in his sweet green eyes of the forest where he use to belong. As I looked at him I took the time to look at his features. Tall blond hair, green eyes, handsome as ever with his corrupted outfit he was given, there was more to him about his past left with him but it was all lost now.

He hugged me close to him as we pressed chest to chest. “I’ll never know the truth about it yet.” He told me. “But I will fight to stay with the one I love very much. I will fight until I can’t fight no more to protect you.” He leaned down and kissed my gracefully as he always has. I kissed him back telling him I would fight with him if it comes down to it.

The kiss didn’t last as long as normal. I looked up at him hearing something come as well. They made a circle around us they were come for James. They took my arm with their strong grip that broke my arm that day. It made me crumble to the ground in pain I looked over at James. He got away from them and over to me. He took my arm and got it to be healed. As yet again we were separated. I heard the leader of this group.

“She will be perfect for the sacrifice for the wolf of the moon.” He said as I was thrown on the back of a horse. Away from James next thing I knew my daggers were taken from me. I was trying to get them back but someone held me back nearly knocking me out.

“Let her go she has nothing to with anything commander.” James told the leader. Then I heard something from James as I saw him collapse to the ground in pain.

I was worried about James so much I tried to run to him but they were holding me back. I heard the laugh again and the spell ended as James rose.

“Even better than a sacrifice.” He said before I was officially knocked out as I felt them carry me to the horse again. This was just the beginning of my advancer to free myself from being something I never wanted the life of. And my new life will be living in hell for life.

Chapter two

I felt being dragged to somewhere dusty and smelling like dead meat. I couldn’t bring myself to wake up at this time. I knew my life would end at some point of being here. Either starvation or being killed I hope neither. I heard a door unlock in front of my head as I was thrown in to the room. By the smell of it there was a werewolf about in here. I heard their laughs disappeared in the hall way until I couldn’t hear them no more. I opened my eyes as I slowly got to my feet. To regain my breath I took the time look around where I was at. The room looked musty and had roots from trees breaking the walls all around. Then I saw the fear of my dreams. The black werewolf of death I nearly fell back on my butt to see that this is not what I was expecting at all. He growled deeply at me I backed up till I could not any more. I knew he could about my fear of wolves since I was attacked by one when I was little.

He walked gracefully over to me sensing my fear. But he stops short when he saw who I was. I felt something in my mind. Makia do not be afraid your future is destined soon my sweet grandchild. I must have looked shocked and came from the wall and went over there and hugged him.

“Grandfather we all thought we lost you long time ago.” I told him as he licked my face. I laughed quietly. “What do you mean my future is destined soon?” Let me explain dear child of the wolves. Your father and I have the genetic of being a wolf from a young age to today’s life. You will to soon become the wolf of the night and the corrupted elves plan to use our power to defeat our own family. “No I won’t let that.” Child quiet they will hear you and kill you on sight; you must do what everyone says or you will end up dead in front of me understand young one? “Yes Grandfather I do understand.” Good now tonight is the full moon your time has come to be the wolf of night to destroy what is our enemy for tonight will be victory for the corrupted elves.

He then moved away from my side as James came in the door. I ran up to him and hugged him tightly as it was good to see him again.

“Makia you alright?” He asked.

“Yes I am. I’m alright for now.” I said and looked up at him into his eyes again. As he kissed me once then was pulled him away from me again.

“My son you should know better than that to love such disrespected people of the south.” His father said as he walked in with a whip. I started backing up now as my grandfather came to my side to defend me. “Oh please old man you can’t defend every little elf who enters this dungeon now can’t you?” I will defend who I wish but she is my grandchild harm her and you’ll get it. “Oh please old man you can’t even defend your own life and yet you will defend hers.”

“He isn’t lying father she is the wolf’s grandchild.” James told his father. Then I heard the whip cracked and I jumped and stayed by the wolf.

“I will not be over ruled by my own son!” He said. He walked over to me grabbed my already broken arm. Grabbed by the shoulder and pulled on it so hard I couldn’t bare the pain. I drop to my knees clutching my arm trying to hold back the scream that build up in my mouth. I heard his laugh it was deeper than the “Commander’s” laugh. I could tell which side he held the whip the next thing was unexpected by all. I was lifted up by James father by my bad arm that hurt like hell. And was taken out of there to see the one person I wish I never met.

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:44 am

Heres yet my next Chapter. Chapter 3 enjoy!

Chapter 3

I struggle to get myself freed from James father. But it was always a fail from me. He held a strong hold on me. I was taken from the dungeon to the throne room in matter of minutes. The throne room was filled with pictures of each person who of her past was showing. One of them is showing her mothers who had been death for years. Her name was Mary Silver. Her sweet blue eyes filled the room with light and joy. Her black grayish hair filled her personality. I found another one that was my fathers. Alex Silver was his name. His fierce green eyes told everyone he was ready to put up a fight. I looked away from those paintings they reminded me to much of the past. As I still looked around I saw a boy no older than I he looked up at me with an expressionless face. I saw who he was his baby blue eyes reminded me of my mother. I looked again it was my little brother Ayden! He looked up at me he was to surprise to see me as well. Then he looked over at the person I was being taken to.

“My lord I bring you the last of the Silver family, Mary and Alex Silver’s girl Makia Silver.” James’s father told the man in the chair not far from us. The backing of the chair also known as the thrown for a king had a dragon design of death.

“So we finally get the last of the family. Excellent, bring the boy here.” Ayden was forced to his feet and was placed next to the corrupted leader as he was forced to his knees. “You have served me well Ayden and brought to us your sister.” His chains where released and he got to his feet as he had shown everyone around him that he was a bit of corrupted. How could I not see it at first? I felt sorry for him I wished I could have known he was alive and could have saved him easily.

As he made his way over to me with his guard he walked up to me and whispered so quiet only I could hear him. “I’m sorry sister I wished this never came to be.” Then he was taken away for the execution like mother and father had. I had to face what was left to face. I looked up and was ready to face what was thrown at me now. The king got up and walked towards me. He at first looked at James then to me.

“It seems we have what is known as forbidden love on both lands of corrupted and wood elves.” He said I was not at first expecting that. He took my head so careful and gracefully I snatched my own head back. He laughed. “Feisty like your mother aren’t you?” He walked away. “The full moon is tonight my friends let’s see how well our little wolf here does to the change of her life.”

Then after he said that I was taken back to my grandfather and my brother. After the guards left I got up and over to my brother and hugged him. We were both happy to see each other before our lives had to be ended for good. I looked at him again how much he had changed from the sweet little brother to the almost dead frustrated little brother.

“Oh Ayden how much I missed you, I thought your fate at first was the same as mother and fathers but it seems I was wrong.” I said all too quickly.

“Yes sister so did I at first, but they wanted to find you. So James’s father followed James a couple of times down to where you guys meet and that’s how you ended up here now.” He said so glad to see me again.

I sighed and sat down. I didn’t know how our fate was going to end now it was just the three of us. My Grandfather, My brother, and I we can’t take on almost hundred solders at once. So we sat and wait to see what will happen at the full moon where mine and my brother’s fate lies at this night

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Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:43 pm

I'm glad you posted on my story because I already have read this and completely forgot to post! bahaha. I'm so sorry.

What I meant to say was:
CONTINUE...Now? Yeah, now. xD It's great! I don't really have any critique yet. Just continue and I'll try to find something.

Also, I love the name Aiden, and the way you spelled it looks so awesome! Well, that's it. Can't wait for more!

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:53 am

THanks

I'll try to work on chapter 4 tomorrow when I wake up. Cause I get bored in the morning. So I'll type chapter 4 and maybe 5 as well. We will see.

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Mon Aug 22, 2011 12:51 am

I can't wait to read it! This story is really good!

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Tue Aug 23, 2011 10:54 am

Heres what you been waiting for. Chapter 4 Smile

Chapter 4
We were all taken to the roof of the place and the moo shown high and mighty. My grandfather and Ayden were chained down and I was held away from them. I struggled to get free but they held me tight. The moon was o both my brother and my grandfather. The next sounds of pain I wish I didn’t hear or see. I looked at my brother in the most pain than my grandfather. This was his first time changing into the wolf. It was painful. I could not bear watching it. But it was my brother for god sakes. I tried to get to him but I was held so tight I wasn’t allowed to get over to him.

After a while of pain from my brother, he was getting weaker. I felt tears in my eyes I wanted him to survive this. Brother please hold together please. I thought to him, I knew he got it because he started gaining strength from the moon and anything else helping him. Everyone around us was surprised and yet knows what was going on. After time past and my brother were calm they took him back to the dungeon and left grandfather up here with me and everyone else. I was moved from the shadows to where my brother was and just set me there without chains my grandfather was next me.

We were there for a few minutes and I felt the pain like my brother did. I couldn’t stand it as my grandfather was there trying to confort me. I felt every change inside of me as the wolf in me came together. First the organs moving around to the right place and then the fur of the wolf and everything with it. By the end of all that pain. I laid there in wolf forum trying to relax from all that pain. But my grandfather was taken away from me and I was lifted up and over to the edge of the castle top we were on. I looked at it then stood growling at them as they ran away in fear.

We were moved back to the dungeon after getting back to normal forum. I got there before my grandfather and I ran over to my weak brother.

“Ayden are you alright?” I asked him.

“No sis. That just took a lot out of me.” He said weakly.

“Just like his father.” Someone said. I turned around to see who it was. As I kind of figured it was James’s father.

“Just shut up! You know nothing of my family.” I kind of yelled at him with tears in my eyes. He laughed and slapped my which I lost my balance and landed on my butt next to my brother.

I said nothing more my grandfather came in after I was slapped and went over to me and Ayden. Then James came in telling his father that the king called a meeting. Rich left leaving his son here. I sighed and got up. I hugged James. I needed him to relax me some more than before. This was the night I didn’t want to remember. The next thing I knew I looked over at my brother and he started not being able to breath. I went over to him tears again but it was too late he was gone. I just cried I knew James came over and pulled me into his arms. Ayden was my brother and only one. I was the only child left of our silver family and my grandfather was also. He came over to me and James telling me it would be alright. When I knew it wasn’t.

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Tue Aug 23, 2011 1:33 pm

[[this is amaziiinngnggggggggg]]

Subject: Re: Wood Elf Forbbiden Love Tue Aug 23, 2011 5:23 pm

Thank you! I'm trying to think for the next chap.

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