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| Subject: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 3:56 am | |
| God
Red on the water A stark contrast Like her ivory skin against the dark night She wasn’t supposed to be there Something wasn’t right Her dark curls are damp with sweat She made a mistake She hadn’t meant to hurt him But, oh she had She smiled at the thought of his fair hair in her grip As she held him while the knife went farther in It wasn’t her place To punish him for his mistake But, if he could play God Why couldn’t she? |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:32 am | |
| 28:06:42:12
The familiar faces of Death surround you, You feel your bones grow weary, And your will to live dissipate As you look at their expressionless faces That somehow, tell you all you need to know
Time, your only enemy, has taken its toll Death, your best friend, offers his solace Life, your condescending superior, scoffs “Go on, do it. No one will miss you, you are insignificant.” He taunts, daring you to take the safety off.
You do. You cock the gun as an idea comes to mind, All living creatures die alone You’re not an exception to this philosophy, you realize You are not alone, yet You are insignificant.
Somehow, this calms you. Somehow, this brings you peace. Somehow, this gives you the push you need.
You smile as you put the gun to your head, You are not alone. |
| | | PriestessAmaya Being chosen by a kitty
Age : 31 Posts : 240 Join date : 2011-12-23
Character sheet Name: Priestess Amaya Age: 17 Affinities : Amaya has the ability to mess with the magnetic field. It is a very hard thing to do, considering the different dimensions of fields are basically what make up all matter.
| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 4:37 am | |
| I like it. (: And ohmigawd. I could never write something so long. >.< | |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:08 am | |
| Thank you, love. c: Ha, the second one was for school, but it was deemed 'inappropriate for class'. I had to write a whole new poem >sigh< |
| | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 8:55 am | |
| God: Wow. This piece is weird! I had to reread it many times. I don't quite get the idea behind, but the imagery is awesome. Vivid, distinct. 28:06:42:12: This made me reread it for it's pure perfection. Again, your imagery here is just nice, not too lengthy and also not too skimpy. Very beautiful and succinct piece of write. None of the lines can stand out without each other, rather all of them stand out in their own unique ways. I love how you create a whole new imagery I've never seen before. Just curious, could this be about seeking suicide by cutting yourself? I don't know, but it reads like one. And if it is, I pray you, get better! You make a difference! Even more so with your powerful writes. Live on! Your writes aren't too long, nor too short. In fact, I think your poem has as unique taste to it. It gives the reader some vivid images and tells a story, yet doesn't give away everything. It leaves the reader hanging at the end, to imagine. KUDOS! Keep writing dear! | |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:09 pm | |
| thank you so much ger >blush< actually, i was suicidal, but not cutting myself. i have severe depression, but i'm okay now. thank you though <3 |
| | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:12 pm | |
| It should be me who thank you instead! For sharing such beautiful writes. /bows/ Thank you!
If you ever feel lonely, remember to PM alright? I check it regularly. Don't die! I still want to read more of your writes! | |
| | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 1:13 pm | |
| Oh yes, and you look pretty (if that's you in your display picture). (: Appreciate yourself! | |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:15 pm | |
| that is me, aha. thank you again ger. >blush< and i'll be sure to PM you sometime <3 |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 2:19 pm | |
| Reaching
She feels it through her skin He’s cut her deep this time She knows she shouldn’t have let him in But, some things she can’t help Like the cuts on her wrist Those were a mistake A little bit of self hate Taken too far But, somehow never far enough Far enough away Away from the pain The pain that boils under her skin Her skin, painted with pink lines These scars, they tell her story A story of regret, anger and pain He’s hurt her this time A little too much She’s going under How can anyone reach her, When she can’t even reach herself? |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 5:49 pm | |
| Beauty
With grace she walks With care she talks She is beauty Or is it just an appearance? On the inside, she hurts On her wrists, she burns She is gone Gone into the dark She is falling Falling, falling apart On the outside, she is perfect On the inside, she is broken But one sees He sees her scars He reads into her lies He knows She slows Slows to a stop The world is still She waits, time to kill He comes, he talks She listens, she walks Walks home, alone She is tired of being alone Alone in this world So she leaves She is gone She is gone |
| | | JadeMarie Being Chosen by Nyx
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:36 pm | |
| Wow. All of your poems are touching. and I can picture them all. Keep writing. I do enjoy reading them. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 6:48 pm | |
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| | | *~Dreamer~* Combining your affinities to save the day
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sat Dec 24, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| Reaching is nice. Not that 'nice' persay, but touching, vivid and real. Good writing. Made me feel like I am her. Ouch!
Love you <3 and your writes too! Pretty, beautiful, sweet, deep. | |
| | | Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sun Dec 25, 2011 3:17 am | |
| i, too, love you ger <3 and, >blush< thank you. |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Sun Dec 25, 2011 3:19 am | |
| Live and Live Well
Death’s lustful glare follows you, You don’t have long before His glare becomes a gleam of victory. So, live and live well.
Death’s cold veil hovers above you, Threatening to cover you. Soon, gravity will play its part And the veil will come down. So, please, live and live well.
As Life finally leaves you, You smile at Death because, You have lived and lived well. |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Mon Dec 26, 2011 2:29 am | |
| This is... I am at loss for words. It makes me tear, really. How you fight death till the end, and even though you knew he had won, you put on a smile because you know he didn't take everything from you. You smile cause you still hold something that he didn't manage to take from you.a bitter struggle, but it is the end that makes all the more touching.yes indded, we have to to 'live on and live well'. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Mon Dec 26, 2011 5:05 pm | |
| Exactly! You really understand me, Ger. >blush< Thank you <3 |
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Mon Dec 26, 2011 5:09 pm | |
| A scene from an idea i had for an epic poem.
THE TRADEGY OF CALISTRO, KING OF NOTHING.
EXT. HILLSIDE PASTURE - MIDDAY A pasture with sheep grazing. Shepherd is herding sheep further down the hillside. [Enter CALISTRO, stage left, out of breath from running, sits down amongst flocks of sheep.]
CALISTRO: (sighs) On this day, in the nineteenth year of my birth, I, Calistro, King of Esthena, have lost everything. Nyx! My goddess, my mother, have you forgotten the son you birthed only nineteen years past? Or, have you chosen to ignore my cries? For it was you and my father Who have caused this terrible plague cast down upon me! Not I, Calistro, king of beggars, no I have done nothing to offend the gods. Have I not sacrificed a plump lamb in your honour each month, Mighty Zeus? Have I not plowed the ground and sowed your seeds, Gracious Demeter? Have I not praised you, grey-eyed Athena, for Watching over my sisters? I have! (stands up) That Is why I did not believe the old beggar, Sofanor, on the many occasions he Told me of your anger. But, once I was thrown from my castle, I knew it was true. You have forsaken me, Athena! Why? It was not I who had stolen Nyx from Pasicrates, it was my father! And, what punishment has he received? A quick death by sword and Payment to the boatman? That is no punishment! As for my mother, Nyx, What punishment has been chosen for her? Nothing! (slowly sits down amongst the flocks) But, for me, Calistro, King of sorrow, you have chosen my punishment. You took my father from me when I was barely a man, Leaving me to care for his seven daughters, And his grieving wife, Polyssandra, whom, Overcome with grief, took her own life soon after. I became king of Esthena, father of seven, and a man All in haste. As I grieved my father and his wife, you and only you, Athena, plagued each of the seven sisters of mine You once protected. You killed one of them each month, Until summer and autumn had both passed. Your wrath Was strong against even young Alithea, A child of only three, drowned right before these eyes (claws at eyes). And, when I thought the gods had taken everything from me, Your wrath was stronger still. You took my home from me, My kingdom from me, you turned my people against me, Athena, Yet, still, I have not forsaken you. I, Calistro, king of nothing, wonders if your wrath is stronger still. (reaches into robes and retrieves a dagger, proceeds to stab himself in the chest).
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| Subject: Re: Ash's Poetry <$ Tue Dec 27, 2011 3:21 pm | |
| Haha. Interesting. Sounds like her wrath wss strong, making him kill himself after taking everything from him. Nice one! | |
| | | chey2012 Going to the House of Night
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