Little Red
Appointing your friends to your council
  
Age : 27
Posts : 2768
Location : In the forest with my packmates
Join date : 2012-10-28
Character sheet
Name: Red
Age: 16
Affinities : Can talk to canines and she is a werewolf/lycan
 | | Subject: Comments for Circus Life Sun Dec 09, 2012 6:36 pm | |
| Circus Life is about a girl who ran away from home and went to the circus...now you would think its easy...but it's not... especially if your a teenage werewolf girl. Circus Life | |
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ZoeRedbird
Mod
 
Age : 29
Posts : 9363
Location : Somewhere wearing a Deadpool costume
Join date : 2011-02-28
Character sheet
Name: Dock
Age: 18
Affinities : Telepathy
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Sun Dec 09, 2012 7:47 pm | |
| This is brill! I'm loving it already, I love your style of writing. Please keep going  | |
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Little Red
Appointing your friends to your council
Age : 27
Posts : 2768
Location : In the forest with my packmates
Join date : 2012-10-28
Character sheet
Name: Red
Age: 16
Affinities : Can talk to canines and she is a werewolf/lycan
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Sun Dec 09, 2012 8:06 pm | |
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Sak-Chan
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 28
Posts : 77791
Location : First Year of collage here I come
Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet
Name: Maria Silversong
Age: 16
Affinities : Air. death.
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Fri Dec 21, 2012 4:48 pm | |
| Keep going its really good. | |
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Little Red
Appointing your friends to your council
Age : 27
Posts : 2768
Location : In the forest with my packmates
Join date : 2012-10-28
Character sheet
Name: Red
Age: 16
Affinities : Can talk to canines and she is a werewolf/lycan
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Sun Dec 23, 2012 2:49 pm | |
| Awe thank you! I'm working on chapter 2. | |
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ZoeRedbird
Mod
Age : 29
Posts : 9363
Location : Somewhere wearing a Deadpool costume
Join date : 2011-02-28
Character sheet
Name: Dock
Age: 18
Affinities : Telepathy
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:24 am | |
| A good start to chapter two! I can't wait for you to update it  | |
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Little Red
Appointing your friends to your council
Age : 27
Posts : 2768
Location : In the forest with my packmates
Join date : 2012-10-28
Character sheet
Name: Red
Age: 16
Affinities : Can talk to canines and she is a werewolf/lycan
| | Subject: Re: Comments for Circus Life Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:33 am | |
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