Bloody Kiss (closed)

I fekt her arms around me and i looked up at her. "Hi."

"Hi," I replied. "That's a pretty song."

"Thank you. I wrote it. Tho it isnt finished."

"Yeah, I could tell, its nice," I smiled softly at him. "Thank you for everything you've done today."

"Your welcome."

I kissed his cheek. "And thank you for the flowers," I said.

"Your welcome."

"You're much better to me than anyone has ever been," I said.

"I love seeing you smile. So that what i alway acheive to make some one who is beautiful smile and be happy."

"Well you're good at it. No matter what you know exactly how to make me smile after a bad day," I said then kissed him.

I kissed her back.

I smiled softly. "So your song, does it have a title yet?"

"No not yet."

"Hm," I replied.

I looked at her.

I sat on the bench with him. "Tell me about the song. What inspired you to write it, what do you intend it to be about," I said.

"Well it is like a story about a girl. Its pretty much a love song."

"OK, is there any sadness in it or is it all happy? You know, like you're trying to describe your relationship with her or the way you feel or perhaps the ride you're taking as you fall for each other. Or its about just her, not many love songs are like that but those are the best. And I'm asking this because every time I answer these questions and I know what I want people to get out of my song it helps me finish it and name it," I said. I was a strong believer in poetic titles so my songs were always named something like winter rain or whatever.

"Just about her." I said softly.

"OK, so the song has to portray qualities you've found out and maybe it can show her background," I said.

(So you know if you haven't figured it out. The song is about her.)

"how about you listen and see if you can figure out who it is about." I said. I flipped back the beginning of the song and started to play it again. And Sang the lyrics softly to her.

(I knew but I wanted to keep her oblivious so that's why I brought in the background because he can say something about it.)

I listened quietly to the song.

I got to what I knew about her background.

I smiled softly as he continued.

When i got to where i hadnt finished. I stopped.