Last Night *Warning contains Violence/Gore Read At Own Risk*

Chapter One
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Last Night Was My Last Night
Last Night Was The Night I Was Killed
Last Night I Was Slashed
Last Night I Was Burned
Last Night I Was Cut
I Was In A Bad State When My Body Was Found
My Soul Stayed On Earth
My Body Stayed In The Ground
My Killer Was A Sick Person
I Can Still Feel The Pain
I Can Still Feel The Knife Cutting Into My Body
I Can Still Hear My Screams

Cool!

Thanks
i got the idea for it from Jack The Ripper
Chapter Two
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Last Night I was Bloody and Broken
I Was Left To Die
My Killer Cut Me Open
Slashed My Wrists
And Watched As I Screamed In Pain And Horror
He Laughed He Thought It Was A Game
He Was Winning This Sick Game
I Don't Was To Play AnyMore But I Didn't Get To Win
All My Blood Drained Out Of Me
I Died

Sad

Chapter Three This one is in the killers view
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Another Night Another Victim
This One Was A Male
He Was Harder To Kill But I Got It Done
Sliced Open And Droped In The River
They'll Have A Hard Time Finding Him
He Put Up A Fight But In The End I Won This Round Of The Game But Their Are Many More Rounds
The Next I Hope To Be Female
I Love To Slice and Dice Them Up
AnyThing To Do With Blood Count Me In
Hahahahaha They Will Never Find Me

Scary!!!

yeah i try to make it that way its a Horror story i have more but i'm only putting up 4

Chapter Four
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I Screamed As He Slowly Killed Me
No One Could Hear Me Scream
I Cried Begging For Him To Stop
We Just Smiled And Laughed
He Cut InTo The Side Of My Cheek
I Cried Out In Pain Only To Hear Him Feed On My Pain
I Just Wanted To Die Little Did I Know My Wish Was Going To Come True
He Cut Into My Side Just Under My Left Breast And Licked The Blood
He Was Insane
No Normal Person Could Do This
He Had No Soul

oh wow

Thanks

No prob I love it

Good i'll put up 5

This Victim Is A Little girl around 6-7-8

Chapter Five
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I Woke Up Lying On A Cold Table
My Feet And Hands Bonded
I Looked Down At Myself My Feet Bonded To The Table
Someone Came In The Room A Male Black Hair Black Eyes
He Smiled It Was A Evil Smile
He Traced My Face And Said "Hello Little Girl"
Then He Took A Knife And Cut A Line From Head To Toe
I Cried Out No One Came Or Heard
He Smiled Again Seeing My Face Wrought In Pain And Fright
He Cut Me Again And Again Listening To Me Scream
Then He Had His Fun And Cut My Throat And Let Me Bleed To Death

Weird.... I like it but it's still weird.

It seems like you could actually have put this in the poetry section f you wanted.

Can I also make a suggestion?

Omg. Why so dark and scarry? But I like the poetic type of writting.

thanks it was going to be a poem but its like a poem and a story and what is it Marked?

What if you did a section from the perspective of a detective trying to catch the killer?

ooo i never thought of that i will have to do one of those

Oh. Okay, Lol. It is good though! Keep it up!

i will i'm writing it on deviantART thats where it started and i have about 8-9 chapters of it on there that i have to put on here but i'm still working on more

Yay!!! Cant wait!

yeah i'll post more and i can't cuz of my mum i put in a part in 6 when i womens dress got ripped off and she was nude and my mom fliped so sorry no to the rape and i don't want to put any rapes in it its based off Jack The Ripper and he didn't rape anyone

Chapter Six
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I Wounder Where I Was He Lead Me To A Small House Away From The City
I Was Starting To Get Worried
What Did He Want With Me?
I Was So Foolish To Follow Him
I Will Never Learn
I Will Never See DayLight Again
All Because I Was Foolish And Belived A Man I Didn't Know
After We Got In The House He Pushed Me In And Locked The Door

I Stood There Crying
I Was Frightend
What Did He Want?!
He Pushed Me To A Tabled And Straped Me On It
Then Got Out Knifes Lots Of Them
I Blacked Out

I Woke Still Straped To The Table
I Was Bleeding
I Felt Weak
I Was Dieing
The Last Thing I Saw Was His Grining Face

Chapter Seven (short one)
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Last Night I Was Killed By A Insane Man
He Had No Mercy
He Was Hungry For Blood That Night
And I Was The One Giving Him That Blood
I Was Torn Apart By This Monster
And I Hope No One Else Will Be
But SomeOne Will Fall Into His Grip Again

Chapter Eight (short one too)
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I Was Slashed
I Was Choped To Pieces
I Was Burned
This Happend The Night I Was Killed
I Was Killed Last Night
He Doesn't Know Pain, Know Mercy
He Is A Ruthless Man
He Has No Soul
He Is A Demon
He Is A Devil