Poems for Saddness,Love,Heartache,Hope,Dreams,and Death

I'm not an angel,
just the oppisite.
I bring pain and despair,
not peace and Hope.
I am Darkness,
cold and empty.
My tears forever frozen,
my pain eternal.
I don't want to hurt you,
not anymore.
You don't need me,
you never have.
I don't wnat you hurt anymore,
please understand.

Closing my eyes,
Thinking back.
Remembering,
Regreting all that time wasted.
Open my eyes,
wishing it was only a dream,
a nightmare.
Fooled by kindness,
his smooth lies.
Looking back,
I regret the trust gave.
The tears I cried.

Open my eyes now,
thinking of my love.
My life,
my everything.
Glad it's real.
I'm gonna close my eyes,
hoping this ain't a dream.

Showing tears is weakness,
I've heard it time and time again.
To be strong you must not show weakness,
tears hard to hide.
I am not weak,
I am strong.
Real strength,
nothing is hidden.
Tell me?
Is it those who cry that are weak,
maybe those who don't are.
To show feelings makes you strong,
wearing a mask means you're weak.
Tell me?
Am I weak?
The one who masks,
just so no one is in pain.
The one who thinks before acting,
knowing one false move will be her doom.
Tell me just this,
one simple thing.
Am I weak?

If you break my heart,
I won't cry.
Not a single tear.
If you cheat on me,
espceallywith my bestie.
Be prepeared,
you crossed the line.
Diss my fam,
Better pray I'm not wearing heels.
Glad we are long over,
my life is great.
Bet you reget,
losing me.
Too bad,
so sad.
I'm happy now,
free from you.
Hope you suffer,
cry your soul out.
Maybe then,
you'll know.
Only a fraction of pain I felt,
maybe you will know then.
Once a cheater,
just like you.
Alway a cheater,
that should rot.
Dying lowly in pain,
Forever in Hades.

Pale as moonlight, stark white skin,
Upon me descended, my life to begin.
With flash of white and crimson,
Drops rain upon the snow,
And with this taste I once was yours,
But now how motionless you lie.
How many more, the tears I shed
To your fatal beauty?
But with your Death,
Your deadly kiss, which once had set me free,
Leaves me here in the dark,
For now all I feel is pain.
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By: Gabriel Rider 1/9/11

Love,
gives a reason to protect.
It breeds, Hate.
Hate,
can lead to war.
War leads to
Vengence.
Vengence,
a cruel thing.
It leads to Pain.
Which is all caused by wanting,
nedding to protect them.
The ones you love.
It's a cycle,
a miserble one at that.

the last poem is touching. And I love the second stanza the most.

'a vision of heaven,/ finally.' Very nicely-written.

and the fourth stanza, really bright!

'the Devil does lie,/ but so does fate'

The whole poem gives a feel of a jig-saw puzzle in which the last piece is finally fitted in after many years. You finally get to see the perfect picture, and you finally see the complete smile on the face of the character in the jig-saw.

Very creative and light-hearted piece of write. To add on, it's simple but really makes the reader smile for you-- for you getting what you want.

'he's finally mine' really feels triumph. Even if the reader isn't driving at the same issue you are, but that line... it is a line that appeals to anyone... because 'finally mine'. Idk how to explain, the feeling of winning, feel of dominating, feel of... idk? just over the moon i suppose? That's something everyone can feel.

cool keep up the good work>.<

A whisper in my ear,
music without melody.
"Give in to the desires."
A shiver runs down my spine,
cold yet it's warm.
Looking around,
no one up.
Who could it have been?
My soul knows,
my mind denies.
Shingami do exist,
this one is following me.
Another whisper in my ear,
music without sound.
"Give into the desires."
A twisted part of me,
my heart now clouded.
This demon tricks,
trying to steal me.
Shinigami following me,
I will lead you to doom.
The voice no longer whispers,
words without thought.
"Give into the desires."
The notebook of death,
the pain it causes.
Burning in the flames,
turning to ashes.

your an amazing writer hun

Friends betraying you,
laughing as you fall.
Talking trash,
making you feel stupid.
Outside you pull a brave face,
masking so well the hurt.
Only inside do you seethe,
inside you scream and cry.
Your first two friends at a new school,
really not friends at all.
Spiteful and cruel,
they now hope you fail.
Both have large egoes,
almost as big as Raito's.
Yet I try to stand tall,
when inside I want to fall back against the wall.
It causes pain.
They cause you to cry mentally,
physically you sleep and eat.
Overwhelmed,
both Emotionaly and Mentaly.
Will they try to hurt me?

your really an amazing writer hun

Thanks. I just pulled that one from what I was feeling. It's not really that big of a deal poem.

trust me hun i know but it is still really good

thank you.

nothin but the truth