Owen's Poems (Would Appreciate Feedback TY)

Hey Guys, I am gonig to try and self publish a book of poems, and I would like some feedback abotu what should be put through for a second draft


(Need A Title For This Poem Help!)

I saw a ghost today, a ghost of my past
A faded apparition, too real to last
I looked at it, it looked at me,
and memories enveloped me
He showed me years of fun and games
Hours spent walking, my first love hand in hand
He showed me days I'd lived and loved
The days I got picked on, taunted, and shoved
He showed me my life, and left on the wind...

That is reaaally good ! I love it ! And myabe the title should be something like Past Ghost or something

(THanks)

My World

My writing is a place that belongs to me
It has no form, and eveytime you enter
There are new corridows
Some lead to riches, beauty and love
But third on your left could be a giant door
A precursor to hatred, bloodlust and gore
Each hallway enters to a new world
Millions open, billions to explore

I Love Both Of Your Poems =) If You Still Need Help On A Tittle For The First Poem I'll Will Be Thinking

Keep Writing You Got Talnet =)