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Mari-chan
Trying to stop war
  
Age : 29
Posts : 8899
Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥
Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet
Name: Breeann
Age: 17
Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| | Subject: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 14, 2009 1:06 am | |
| The story No Name can be found HereO_O!!!that is amazing! Please post more!!! | |
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ishane
Freaking out
Age : 28
Posts : 74
Location : anywhere
Join date : 2009-07-21
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:14 pm | |
| Wow!! Please add on to it soon! | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
Character sheet
Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:36 pm | |
| Ali it's awesome..I looove it can't wait to read more =] | |
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Namine
Admin
 
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Oct 18, 2009 7:56 pm | |
| This is great! You have amazing details, I could almost see the little girl in my mind. Very few people I know can make me do that (even Stephine Meyer couldn't nor P.C. Cast).
Oh one little thing:
She was actually happy of this, because she got to have a peacefull walk back to the farm her Grandmother, Mary-Lenette, live in
Shoudn't that be her Grandmother, Mary-Lenette, lived in? Other than that there were no mistakes. | |
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DaughterofNyx101
Finally mastering Fire
Age : 34
Posts : 633
Location : Home
Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet
Name: Hecate
Age: 19
Affinities : Earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:43 pm | |
| This is great! Wonderful Description! | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Mon Oct 19, 2009 9:37 pm | |
| Thanks! I didn't think it was that good! OMG, thank you sooo much Namine, that means a lot coming from you since your story so far is REALLY good! I'm working on Chapter one, and it might take a while before I post it, thanks on the comments though!
(P.S, yeah, I see my mistake, thnx Namine XP) | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
Character sheet
Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 1:43 pm | |
| XD It's amazing...I can see the little girl in my head too...Kind of reminded me of Jane XP
Keep writing..look forward to reading more =] | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:27 pm | |
| Your very welcome, yay! Chapter 1!
That's what I was thinking Rose, a tinkerbell Jane. | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
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Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:28 pm | |
| Yeah...and how you described her eyes...just made me think Jane XP | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:26 pm | |
| Really? Twilight Jane? O.o I don't really like her...when Bella met her in New Moon I didn't really pay attention to her, but alrighty XP. | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
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Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:31 pm | |
| Dunno, she's just a little girl and that was a little girl, and their both nice I'm assuming. Plus they're both might be vamps.
Last edited by Namine on Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:06 pm; edited 1 time in total | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 7:50 pm | |
| No...This one isn't evil. | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Tue Oct 20, 2009 8:06 pm | |
| I said nice can't you see look at my post. XD | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 21, 2009 12:53 am | |
| Nice try! One the bottom it says "Last edited 1 time in total" read it and weep missy!XP | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
Character sheet
Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 21, 2009 3:28 pm | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 21, 2009 4:18 pm | |
| - Alice[: wrote:
- Nice try! One the bottom it says "Last edited 1 time in total" read it and weep missy!XP
Only because I acdently spelled nice e-v-i-l. | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
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Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 21, 2009 4:20 pm | |
| Lmao Namine...hilarious XD | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Wed Oct 21, 2009 8:44 pm | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
Character sheet
Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
Affinities :
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:49 pm | |
| Wow....Brilliant can't wait to read more XD
((Got TEmpted today...a couple of chapters in..I'm trying to multi task lol)) | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
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Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:58 pm | |
| ((Lol, omg you'll LOVE IT, trust me. I actually kind of like Aphrodite now, she's a meany(b word) but she's also a great person once she has real TRUE friends around her)) | |
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Rose
Trying to stop war
Age : 31
Posts : 32419
Join date : 2009-07-18
Character sheet
Name: Rose Fletcher
Age: 17
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| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:02 pm | |
| ((XD I liked Aphrodite anyway lol..but it's nice to know she's still being mean but nice...if that makes sense)) | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
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Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:02 pm | |
| ((It dose XD. No offence but putting the )) at the end of ever comment I post on here is kind of annoying...if THAT makes any sence)) | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
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Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:19 pm | |
| ((I don't know why but putting things in double parinthacies makes me feel like I'm whispering. Anyways, I love the chapter, toattly amazing!)) | |
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Alice.
Combining your affinities to save the day
Age : 27
Posts : 2202
Location : Lala Land
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Alice
Age: 15
Affinities : Precognition
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:34 pm | |
| ((IKR! I'm like "I'll stop putting them" but then the people I'm RPing with ask if that was meant to go with my post and it's all AGHHH! and omg I just saw a couple of the New Moon trailers, Alice looks AMAZING, Jasper looked kind of scary when he wanted to attack Bella [...not that their's anything wrong with that] and the Volturi is really super cool too. Edward is well, hot amazing super cool Edward.)) | |
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Namine
Admin
Age : 26
Posts : 11978
Location : Hogwarts School of Withcraft and Wizardy
Join date : 2009-07-13
Character sheet
Name: Arwen
Age: 16
Affinities : Water and Air
| | Subject: Re: Comments - No Name Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:36 pm | |
| ((Jasper's knew hair makes him look like a lion in my opion. And the Voulturi remind me of racoons for some reason.)) | |
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