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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
 Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
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Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sun May 30, 2010 1:13 pm | |
| The story (*~~No name~~*) can be found HereAwesome start. Not sure it there is enough information to help with the title but I would love to hear more of the story. Maybe if you gave us a prologue (is that how it is spelt?) we could help with the title. | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
 
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sun May 30, 2010 3:24 pm | |
| Heh, I'm not that good with prologues (Yeah you spelt it right.) I'm about to put up Chapter 3 and then 4 if that helps any. I'm thinking of calling it 'Normality' or something like that.... I'm not sure though. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sun May 30, 2010 3:25 pm | |
| Great, I will keep an eye out for it. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Tue Jun 01, 2010 5:51 pm | |
| Ok, waiting with anticipation. | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:17 am | |
| Chaper 3 is now finished. Sorry things have been going slow, I'll try to get Chapter 4 up by Monday.... | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| Ok, there is still not enough here to help with a title though. | |
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earth-spirit
Accidentally flooding a classroom with Water
Posts : 721
Location : Work
Join date : 2010-05-03
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Name: earth-spirit
Age:
Affinities : earth
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:37 pm | |
| Ok, there is still not enough here to help with a title though. | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 4:28 pm | |
| You are doing really great. Ehh titles are hard no matter how much information you give. They don't usually fit the story until almost half way through so don't worry. Anyway, I love it! | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 6:45 pm | |
| - StarksGirlAAF<3 wrote:
- You are doing really great. Ehh titles are hard no matter how much information you give. They don't usually fit the story until almost half way through so don't worry. Anyway, I love it!
Thanks so much! ^.^ Yeah, sometimes I know from the start what I want a story to be called, and other times I'm stuck. I'm glad you like it. | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:12 pm | |
| haha no problem... storys are hard to write I'm writing one too but its not very good lol... I love how you talk so badly about humans, and how all of it is true lmaoo anyway keep going o.O(hehe i love that face) | |
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Angel of Music
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 45811
Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about
Join date : 2009-12-08
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Name: Sierrah
Age:
Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:22 pm | |
| I love it! You could call it Imperfect | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:27 pm | |
| Your writing a story? Have you posted it?
Lol, yeah, it's not hard to talk bad about humans X3
I think I just insulted myself...
I just wrote a short prologue that I like, so I'll post it here in a sec, something to read while I try to finish Chapter 4. ^.^ (I love this smiley thingy) O_o (And this one) | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:28 pm | |
| - Gypsy Vampire wrote:
- I love it! You could call it Imperfect
Hmm.... I like that! ^.^ I might, just have to write a little more... | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:32 pm | |
| lol yea its posted... and haha I think you did just insult yoursef.... and me =D | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:40 pm | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:42 pm | |
| So you like it?
Sorry for insulting the human race XD Oopsie.
I'll look for your story. ^.^ | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:47 pm | |
| lol ohkay, and it's fine. haha and no i don't like it
I love it! lol | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:53 pm | |
| Lol. Thanks! I'll try to finish Chapter 4 on my laptop and post it ASAP.
I read your story, ^.^
I loves it! ^.^
Your going to keep posting, right? | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:58 pm | |
| lol really? and of course... I just hope I don't get writer's block | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:00 pm | |
| Yes, really. So original, I love originality.
Writer's Block will find you. O_o
Always....
It's a scary thing, that Writer's Block.... O_o | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
Character sheet
Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:04 pm | |
| lmaoo yes indeed it is... wow I so just sounded like a person from england a long time ago XD | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
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Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:11 pm | |
| Oh, oh, oh!!!....... Charles Dickens *giggles*
-Moment of immaturity-
Right'o good fellow! | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
Character sheet
Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:19 pm | |
| lmfaooo I just posted another part of my story. Check it out | |
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Shikyo
Freaking out
Age : 27
Posts : 59
Location : Hanging out with the Host Club
Join date : 2010-04-28
Character sheet
Name: Shikyo (Shi)
Age: 15
Affinities : Water
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:24 pm | |
| I saws it, and of course I loves it!!! It's coming along beautifully.
I can go ahead and post some of Chapter 4... | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 26
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
Character sheet
Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Comments (*~~No name~~*) Sat Jun 05, 2010 8:28 pm | |
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