My poem (I might give it to my bf...IDK)

The kiss on my lips,
The touch of your finger tips,

The warmth of your smile,
Its something I will remember for awhile,

The feeling of holding your hand...
Takes me to a diffrent land,

The feeling of your hug,
It keeps me nice and snug,

Before I met you,
I didn't know what to do,

I always cried
And there was apart of me that died,

There were times I had a knife,
And was so close to taking my life,

When I saw you I changed,
It was something new and strange,

I was no longer sad,
I was always glad,

I remember that day you asked me out,
I almost passed out,

Now I hope we stay together,
.....Forever

(This is a poem that happen to me my Sophomore summer and I am a Junior) I know it might be bad but I tried the best I could

i think its really good

Beautiful poem.

thank you

Is pretty good, full of emotions. That's what poetry is all about. Keep the good work up.

I like it..well done =]

its really good. cant wait to see more.

thank ya'll

Poetry arnt just words they are ones meanings to life

Awww... that's so cute and beautiful! Awesome work!

peoms dont have to make since to mean something you. though yours is really good. i can really related to your poem because i did too was lost and wanted death and came soo close to it and then i found my hubby. yeah. i loved it. i think that you should give it to your boyfriend it good to fully know what someone you love feel for you.

well Im not dating the person that I made the poem for but I still like it

SHELBY its amazin ur good at this. you should def give them to him

Roses are red violets are blue
I know I would go crazy without seeing you,

You are the one person I care about,
That is no dought,

I love the touch of your finger tips,
And the passionate touch of your lips,

The way that you make me smile,
And that feeling lasts a while,

Looking in his eyes,
Clor of all skies,

Whenever I have a frown
He knows how to turn it upside down,

Thins is something that is not a myth
You are someon thatI want to grow old with

This is for my recent boyfriend

omg thats good u should give it to him. im for realz here

Ok Gracie Lu Ill give this one to my boyfriend

kk good for u