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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:58 pm | |
| So, I wrote this, out of the blue. (x This is the first time I've written poetry outside of a school assignment. I can't remember what it's called, but it's similar to something I learned in middle school, but I sort of twisted it. Yeah, don't be too harsh. Hope you like it. (:
~This is for my best friend, Lilly and for one other person, you know who you are. ^^~
Even though we're far away... I'll always be here I'll keep wishing I could help you more And, I will never forget you Even though I can't be there... I will always be waiting to talk to you Always thinking of you And hoping you're not hurting And even though we're far away... It won't always be that way I'll see you, someday, somehow Until then, you'll always be here In my heart.
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Lilly Trying to stop war
Age : 27 Posts : 9129 Location : You first~ Join date : 2009-07-12
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:14 pm | |
| *Huggles* Loved It! It Expressed How Friendship Is A Deeper Meaning To You, It's Nothing You Can Find Just Anywhere~ Great Job! | |
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VampyreFreak Admin
Age : 34 Posts : 16563 Location : why do you wanna know??? Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Karena Drako Age: 19 Affinities : Writting and Death
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:39 pm | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:43 pm | |
| Thanks Lilly & Emily~ -hugglesemilyback- ^^ | |
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VampyreFreak Admin
Age : 34 Posts : 16563 Location : why do you wanna know??? Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Karena Drako Age: 19 Affinities : Writting and Death
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:43 pm | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:52 pm | |
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VampyreFreak Admin
Age : 34 Posts : 16563 Location : why do you wanna know??? Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Karena Drako Age: 19 Affinities : Writting and Death
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Sep 16, 2009 11:52 pm | |
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Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 32419 Join date : 2009-07-18
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Thu Sep 17, 2009 11:45 am | |
| It's awesome Ami =] I liked it, *huggles* | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:48 pm | |
| Thanks Rose~! -hugglesback- | |
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Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 32419 Join date : 2009-07-18
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Thu Sep 17, 2009 4:51 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Fri Sep 18, 2009 5:57 pm | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:43 pm | |
| Sooo I actually wrote more poems. >.> I don't think they're that great. And I will probably go back and fix them at some point. (x But for now...here ya go~
They aren't titled.
Why does this happen to me? I want to stop crying I want to be hurt I want to see my skin broken Watch the blood flow I can pretend it helps I can pretend it's over Make my heart stop beating So it will stop breaking apart I can't stop loving you But the more I do the more it hurts I know you'll be happy with them I know it's them you want and not me So I'll erase myself Stop the pain Shut off my thoughts I'll dissapear.
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You're all I have You're all that matters And everything I gave Feels like nothing
Put the words on paper Try to erase the pain Wishing it would stop
You're gone from me They've taken you Entranced you with their love Filled you with a feeling I could never give you
I can't be what you want I wish I was what you need I try to pretend it won't matter I try to pretend I don't care.
I hope you like them. I was sort of in a...bad...mood when I wrote them. xD But yeah...>.> Thanks~ | |
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Spencerr Accidentally burning down a tree with Fire
Age : 31 Posts : 541 Location : The library, booty-dancing with my boys (: Join date : 2009-07-12
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:59 pm | |
| Kayla...*huggles tight* I'm sorry, love. | |
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VampyreFreak Admin
Age : 34 Posts : 16563 Location : why do you wanna know??? Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Karena Drako Age: 19 Affinities : Writting and Death
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:11 pm | |
| they are beautiful...*huggles* | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Sun Oct 11, 2009 10:16 pm | |
| -huggles Spence and Emily back- Thanks you guys. And it's ohkay bbygurl... Well... Yeah. /: | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Sun Nov 08, 2009 4:58 pm | |
| I cant get you out of my head Eveywhere I go Everything I do Just makes me think of you And it hurts so much To hold it all inside And know there will never Be anything I can do To make you love me again
Yeah... | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:36 pm | |
| Why can't you see... Why can't anyone Am I that invisible? I can't go on forever Faking happines...
Why does everyone look for love? Love can only cause pain It never matters how much you love them They still leave you They still hurt you
Just because you love someone Doesn't mean they will in return It doesn't matter how much I love you You still used me You lied, you cheated So why don't I hate you? Why do I miss you so much... | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Mon Nov 09, 2009 5:41 pm | |
| What do I do on my own? You were my light You left and my world changed Fading into the night The dark should comfort me But it's not, it tears me down I can't fight back Theres no point in fighting anymore Theres no more reason
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Everyone says I shouldn't feel this way I'm nothing without you You gave me everything And then ripped it away... You dissapeared into the darkness... You left me hurt, bleeding And only you can make it stop But I know that won't happen So I'll wait to bleed to death... | |
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vicky Seeing the Tracker
Posts : 21 Location : london Join date : 2009-11-09
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:20 am | |
| your poems are really good i love the one about frienship. | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Nov 11, 2009 11:42 am | |
| Haha thank you. I dont really think theyre good at all. >.< They just help me get out what I'm feeling since I cant actually say it. >.> | |
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VampyreFreak Admin
Age : 34 Posts : 16563 Location : why do you wanna know??? Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Karena Drako Age: 19 Affinities : Writting and Death
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Nov 11, 2009 2:56 pm | |
| they are really good Amii...*huggles tight* | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| Thanks Emily. -smiles and huggles back- | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Tue Dec 29, 2009 4:53 pm | |
| Words They mean nothing if not folllowed by actions And actions mean nothing If the words that follow are untrue Silence And the emptiness that follows The gravity of words unspoken Things left unsaid Hollow Like every word you ever said Your actions show how you truly feel And it hurts to know I mean nothing. | |
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Mari-chan Trying to stop war
Age : 29 Posts : 8899 Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥ Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet Name: Breeann Age: 17 Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Tue Dec 29, 2009 6:42 pm | |
| I like it, especially "words" | |
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Amii~. Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 5585 Join date : 2009-07-20
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| Subject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (: Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:23 pm | |
| Thanks. ^^ It was just something I wanted to get out~ >.> | |
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