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PostSubject: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 9:58 pm

So, I wrote this, out of the blue. (x
This is the first time I've written poetry outside of a school assignment.
I can't remember what it's called, but it's similar to something I learned in middle school, but I sort of twisted it.
Yeah, don't be too harsh. Hope you like it. (:

~This is for my best friend, Lilly and for one other person, you know who you are. ^^~

Even though we're far away...
I'll always be here
I'll keep wishing I could help you more
And, I will never forget you
Even though I can't be there...
I will always be waiting to talk to you
Always thinking of you
And hoping you're not hurting
And even though we're far away...
It won't always be that way
I'll see you, someday, somehow
Until then, you'll always be here
In my heart.


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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:14 pm

*Huggles* Loved It! It Expressed How Friendship Is A Deeper Meaning To You, It's Nothing You Can Find Just Anywhere~ Great Job! 
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:39 pm

*huggles* beautiful ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:43 pm

Thanks Lilly & Emily~
-hugglesemilyback- ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:43 pm

^^ tis the truth
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:52 pm

Thanks, hun~
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Sep 16, 2009 11:52 pm

^^
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyThu Sep 17, 2009 11:45 am

It's awesome Ami =]
I liked it, *huggles*
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyThu Sep 17, 2009 4:48 pm

Thanks Rose~! -hugglesback-
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyThu Sep 17, 2009 4:51 pm

No problemo xD
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyFri Sep 18, 2009 5:57 pm

tis a good poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 9:43 pm

Sooo I actually wrote more poems. >.>
I don't think they're that great. And I will probably go back and fix them at some point. (x
But for now...here ya go~

They aren't titled.

Why does this happen to me?
I want to stop crying
I want to be hurt
I want to see my skin broken
Watch the blood flow
I can pretend it helps
I can pretend it's over
Make my heart stop beating
So it will stop breaking apart
I can't stop loving you
But the more I do the more it hurts
I know you'll be happy with them
I know it's them you want and not me
So I'll erase myself
Stop the pain
Shut off my thoughts
I'll dissapear.


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You're all I have
You're all that matters
And everything I gave
Feels like nothing

Put the words on paper
Try to erase the pain
Wishing it would stop

You're gone from me
They've taken you
Entranced you with their love
Filled you with a feeling I could never give you

I can't be what you want
I wish I was what you need
I try to pretend it won't matter
I try to pretend I don't care.


I hope you like them. I was sort of in a...bad...mood when I wrote them. xD
But yeah...>.> Thanks~
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 9:59 pm

Kayla...*huggles tight* I'm sorry, love.
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they are beautiful...*huggles*
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptySun Oct 11, 2009 10:16 pm

-huggles Spence and Emily back- Thanks you guys.
And it's ohkay bbygurl... Well... Yeah. /:
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptySun Nov 08, 2009 4:58 pm

I cant get you out of my head
Eveywhere I go
Everything I do
Just makes me think of you
And it hurts so much
To hold it all inside
And know there will never
Be anything I can do
To make you love me again


Yeah...
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:36 pm

Why can't you see...
Why can't anyone
Am I that invisible?
I can't go on forever
Faking happines...

Why does everyone look for love?
Love can only cause pain
It never matters how much you love them
They still leave you
They still hurt you

Just because you love someone
Doesn't mean they will in return
It doesn't matter how much I love you
You still used me
You lied, you cheated
So why don't I hate you?
Why do I miss you so much...
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyMon Nov 09, 2009 5:41 pm

What do I do on my own?
You were my light
You left and my world changed
Fading into the night
The dark should comfort me
But it's not, it tears me down
I can't fight back
Theres no point in fighting anymore
Theres no more reason

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Everyone says I shouldn't feel this way
I'm nothing without you
You gave me everything
And then ripped it away...
You dissapeared into the darkness...
You left me hurt, bleeding
And only you can make it stop
But I know that won't happen
So I'll wait to bleed to death...
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 8:20 am

your poems are really good
i love the one about frienship.
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 11:42 am

Haha thank you. I dont really think theyre good at all. >.<
They just help me get out what I'm feeling since I cant actually say it. >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 2:56 pm

they are really good Amii...*huggles tight*
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyWed Nov 11, 2009 9:12 pm

Thanks Emily. -smiles and huggles back-
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyTue Dec 29, 2009 4:53 pm

Words
They mean nothing if not folllowed by actions
And actions mean nothing
If the words that follow are untrue
Silence
And the emptiness that follows
The gravity of words unspoken
Things left unsaid
Hollow
Like every word you ever said
Your actions show how you truly feel
And it hurts to know I mean nothing.
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyTue Dec 29, 2009 6:42 pm

I like it, especially "words"
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PostSubject: Re: Amii's poetry?! (:   Amii's poetry?! (: EmptyThu Dec 31, 2009 7:23 pm

Thanks. ^^
It was just something I wanted to get out~ >.>
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