Poetry by ShadowPhoenix

Elemental Magic
Nature has 4 elements to be Found
Though to each other they are Bound
Fire blazes through the Night
As Air moves without being in plain Sight
Eath runs deep through out the Ground
While Water rises without a Sound
Though no one knows what to Say
Each is magical in their own Way


A Life Time Decision
No one knows who will go or Stay
People change each and every Day
Trying to find your someone True
Is sometimes not an easy thing to Do
The first step you might as well Start
To align the struggle between your mind and your Heart
Your Mind leads you down the road of Reason
As the weather changes for each Season
To decide which are right or Wrong
is like trying to decide on a Song
Your Heart leads you down the path of Care
To determine if that person will always be There
Love and Trust are good quality Traits
As are many things as you try to Debate
Choose carefully when you Decide
Who you want to always have by your Side

The elemental poem is good, so is the poem following it, "A lifetime..."
Maybe "As Air moves silently, out of sight," is better than "As Air moves without being in plain Sight" It seems a little long, it sort of threw me off, but the elemental poem is otherwise a good write.

As for "A lifetime..." I like the way you link the mind to a rational and reasoning person while your heart is a person filled with compassion and love (easily deceived in other words).

Fav line: "To align the struggle between your mind and your Heart"