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PostSubject: deliqueena's poetry   deliqueena's poetry EmptyMon Nov 02, 2009 11:55 pm

This poem is inspired by Zoey's first Full Moon Ritual (I think), where she comes in dancing to Enya's "Aldebaran".

A girl dances;
She shimmers
And twirls;
Like magic
She dances,
Shines like
Diamonds
And pearls.

Enveloped in darkness,
Smothered with light;
A dream called forth
And out of the night;
Spinning in circles she
Holds out her arms,
And calls in desire,
Lust and romance.
Oh to behold her!
This wonderous bright
Magic-filled Nyx-sprite
A present from Night!
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PostSubject: Re: deliqueena's poetry   deliqueena's poetry EmptyMon Nov 16, 2009 3:28 pm

I love how you based it on a certain part from Marked. Only bad thing I have to say is it isn't long enough! I think you could add another stanza although what you've got is actually brilliant already Smile
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