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PostSubject: Star's poetry!   Star's poetry! EmptyMon Dec 14, 2009 11:57 pm

This one's called " Never Alone. "
Please feel free to comment and feedback is appreciated!
PS: I know it's not that good, cause I didn't write a poem in so long, so sorrrry!

I was told that someone watched over me.
It is present
Yet, I do not see it.
I do not feel it, nor do I feel it with me.
I seem to ask myself who that shadow walking behind me is.
Does it help me through my endless pain?
Or does it laugh at me and watch me fall.
In troubled times I seek for help.
I hear no whisper.
When tears plummet down my face
It is I who would wash them away
I bathe in my sorrows
As I drag them wherever i go
I sleep thinking the void in my chest will never be filled
And wake up numb
I try not to ponder in the past
But dwell on what the future may hold
i was told that someone was watching over me
So i go out and walk the streets alone
My head clouds up with questions
I’m waiting to unfold.
I’ve longed for the truth my whole life
But i already know the truth.
Somebody was watching over me
She watches me cry
Watches me sleep in pain
Watches me bathe in my sorrows
Watches me fall
And pushes me to get back up again.
She may not say anything
But she can describe more than words could ever describe
She’s my angel.
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PostSubject: Re: Star's poetry!   Star's poetry! EmptyWed Dec 16, 2009 4:15 pm

I really love it
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PostSubject: Re: Star's poetry!   Star's poetry! EmptyWed Jan 20, 2010 5:03 am

Hidden in lies

I remember the first day we met
You were so kind
How could I forget
When you started to lie
And all the friendship we had was over
As regret filled my eyes

Sorrow shot through me
I felt my knees shake
As you leave me alone
Everything we had was fake

I could almost feel the knife
backstab behind me
I wanted you out
out of my life

You were hiding all along
Behind those dreadful lies.
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PostSubject: Re: Star's poetry!   Star's poetry! EmptySun Feb 07, 2010 6:42 pm

Both poems are great. Good job.
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