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darkdaughter741852
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PostSubject: Lindsay's Poetry   Lindsay's Poetry EmptyFri Jan 01, 2010 11:39 am

Okay this is my first poem. I tried to make it related to HoN so I hope you like it. Smile

A Beautiful Red

Immense pain, endless fear
Memories rushing in my head
Darkness all around me
But my body covered with red
I hear loud sirens
I see flashing lights
As I try to speak
Pain keeps my mouth tight
Two people carrying me
But the darkness does not fade
They try their best to fix me
Soon enough they just lay me in the shade
Someone please wake me up
Tell me it was just a dream
I want to see my mother
Not hear her scream
The darkness grows stronger
Yet I see a single light
I hear Nyx's voice
A voice as peaceful as night
Perhaps I will return here
But not with blue marks on my head
No, these marks will be different
They will be a beautiful red

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PostSubject: Re: Lindsay's Poetry   Lindsay's Poetry EmptyFri Jan 01, 2010 3:41 pm

Wow, I like it!
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PostSubject: Re: Lindsay's Poetry   Lindsay's Poetry EmptyFri Jan 01, 2010 3:47 pm

wow it is great i luv it .
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