Wish upon a shooting star [~>] [X]

Star: I woke up as we hit a pot hole. I looked up groogily. We were on a dirt road. We must be close. I heard about the awsome cabin. I so loved my friends. They are really cool. "I used to live in a cabin in New Jersy. Our back yard was the woods. And in the back yard of our across the street neghbors there was a lake. The lake had mountians on the other side. It was awsome. But I'll never swim in a lake again because it had alligators in it and my mom didn't tell me." I said.
(that acctualy really did happen to me!)

i took a left and went up a hill.

Star: "Yeah it was scary after I knew." I said tighning my musles. I hated hills they were like roller coasters. I hated the adreniline rush.

(huh?)

((He is saying that he would be hot AKA spicy and they would like a sweet treat better. He's calling her sweet and himself hot))

(ohhhhh sorry)

i gave him the finger and opened my bag to get my Night World book ()

"hey be nice to each other! and there are no alligaters." we were on the flat part of the hill now.

i shook my head and took the last turn.

i turned down the driveway to the cabin.

Jake: "Awsome cabin!" I commented trying to break up the fight. They could be annoying some times.

i parked and shut off the van. i unbuckled and got out.

Star: I unbuckeled and waited for every one in front of me to get out. The only down side to being in the back. As soon as I got out I took my stuff and ran to get the room with the best veiw. The one of the forest montains and lake. I loved to sketch land scapes. This is going to be an awsome vacation I thought to my self.

Jake: I got out and sorta waited for Star. I followed her in so I could be in the same room.

i grabbed my stuff and went to the room i always stayed in. well it wasnt a room... it was more like a private loft.

Star: I went out side and grabbed the rest of my stuff I kinda only brought my purse, I wanted the room more than my I actuly cared about my stuff.
(is there a shed or something with cots and furnature?)

I stepped out of the van and pulled my big bag over my shoulder.

(um......sure. there can be a closet with extra beds and furniture)

i put my backpank on my back. i had a wardrobe and everything here. so i only needed a small backpack of things and my laptop and i-pod.

Star: The first thing I didwas check all of my online stuff. Nothing new posted yet so I made up a poem and posted it. I liked making poems. I went to see the others and if they setled all ready. I took my lap top though because my laptop was my life I had a sketch pad on there and every thing. I just had to make sure it didn't get damaged.

i laid down on my bed. i needed a nap....i drove the whole way...