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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Mar 23, 2010 11:23 am | |
| Hope you like it it might be long but it is a good poem.
Love or Hate
Love I cared. You treated me before like you love me. Now you hate?
I cared about you my whole life. Then you treated me like you hate me and love someone else.
You love me I hate you All those years ago you let go. I did not I held on forever.
you want to care for me again. think again. I will never love you again.
I treated you like crap before this happend I loved you. Now you treat me like crap. We are even now.
Happy? I will still not love you. I still will not love anyone other and never again.
Love me? Hate me? It is a mix you cant deside to love me or hate me.
Love you? Hate you? Still a mix. Still no destion eather or of the two.
You leave me. I leave you. I will never forget this. You will never forget this I know it.
What is your destion. Love or Hate.
HAte is forever and you will never see me again.
Love, well that is a differnt story. You will always see me.
So what is it. Love or Hate. You chose.
Last edited by Vampwolf (Sak) on Mon Sep 06, 2010 12:27 am; edited 1 time in total | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Mar 24, 2010 11:44 am | |
| here is a poem that I tryed but the ending is not as good as I wanted to be. Dark Love Every day, you hid something from me. When you say you love me you walk away saying Dark Love. I am not scared of you not even when you try scareing me. I know sometimes you think I am dark. I figured out where you got the saying Dark Love. You know I come only in the night time. And I dont go to school like you. That is where the dark part is coming from. Love is ovious we love each other. I figure it out in two days. Soon after you atarted saying it. Some times you say I am cold. Some time you say Look out. When I run I am faster than you. You are scared of me. I can smell it. You fear me but you love me. You know when you love a vampire. There are consqences sometimes. Your promiss is that if I die. You would kill your self for me. Your last words you said to me before you died were,"Dark love I love you." That was my nickname. I am writing this poem for you. You will always be my Dark love. My last words would be if I died before you blocked that acctack would be."I am here for you Forever." Sorry if that ending was lame but I tryed | |
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Altair1992 Sneaking off campus to Utica Square
Age : 32 Posts : 1550 Location : Fort Gordon Join date : 2010-02-23
Character sheet Name: Altair Age: 26 Affinities : Air, Water, Fire
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Mar 24, 2010 2:15 pm | |
| wow. both very powerful poems. and i liked the ending lol | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Mar 24, 2010 9:04 pm | |
| thank you those are my first two poems i wrote | |
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Altair1992 Sneaking off campus to Utica Square
Age : 32 Posts : 1550 Location : Fort Gordon Join date : 2010-02-23
Character sheet Name: Altair Age: 26 Affinities : Air, Water, Fire
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:33 am | |
| Keep writing that good and you'll go far | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Thu Mar 25, 2010 12:36 am | |
| thanks for some reason I just write love poems I dont know why | |
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Sharon_the_Warrior Getting new tattoos
Age : 37 Posts : 2385 Location : woundering around looking for home Join date : 2009-07-14
Character sheet Name: Ella Raven Moren Age: Unknow to herself Affinities : Earth,
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:16 pm | |
| I love it Sak. The end on the secdon one. | |
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Rileey[; Being Chosen by Nyx
Age : 27 Posts : 25 Location : somewhere purttttty.(: Join date : 2010-03-28
Character sheet Name: Riley Age: 12 Affinities : spirit, earth
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Mar 29, 2010 3:24 pm | |
| those are both sooo good! (: ive attempted poems,. not so great,, and the ending on the second one was not even close to lame! | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:25 pm | |
| thanks guys I am sorry I havent ;post in a while but I think I have another poem... lol | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:32 pm | |
| (no title)
Night is forver. Day is never here. I am lost no one to guide me through the night.
Darkness Srounds me every day no one to trun to. Lost forever what wat to turn.
Lost forever and never found. I was destoryed in light but killed in night.
I still lay there. Waiting for the kiss of life.
I lay there for the love of night. To raise me. To let me live in the night Forever. | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Apr 14, 2010 8:50 pm | |
| well what you guys think. | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Apr 26, 2010 12:30 pm | |
| Man no one likes it If not I will just redo it...... | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue May 04, 2010 8:49 pm | |
| Why does any one post what they like about my new poem???? | |
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Angel of Music Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 45811 Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet Name: Sierrah Age: Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Fri May 07, 2010 12:49 pm | |
| I love the poems sis! I like the meaning behind them keep it up! | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Sat May 08, 2010 8:49 pm | |
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Angel of Music Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 45811 Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet Name: Sierrah Age: Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Sat May 08, 2010 8:52 pm | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon May 10, 2010 8:24 pm | |
| Can you ask some friend to check this out for me please. | |
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Angel of Music Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 45811 Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet Name: Sierrah Age: Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon May 10, 2010 8:47 pm | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue May 11, 2010 11:11 am | |
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raven night Going about a regular day
Age : 30 Posts : 5 Location : kentucky Join date : 2010-03-30
Character sheet Name: raven Age: 16 Affinities : earth
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue May 11, 2010 12:26 pm | |
| - Angel of Death (Sak) wrote:
- Hope you like it it might be long but it is a good poem.
Love or Hate
Love I cared. You treated me before like you love me. Now you hate?
I cared about you my whole life. Then you treated me like you hate me and love someone else.
You love me I hate you All those years ago you let go. I did not I held on forever.
you want to care for me again. think again. I will never love you again.
I treated you like crap before this happend I loved you. Now you treat me like crap. We are even now.
Happy? I will still not love you. I still will not love anyone other and never again.
Love me? Hate me? It is a mix you cant deside to love me or hate me.
Love you? Hate you? Still a mix. Still no destion eather or of the two.
You leave me. I leave you. I will never forget this. You will never forget this I know it.
What is your destion. Love or Hate.
HAte is forever and you will never see me again.
Love, well that is a differnt story. You will always see me.
So what is it. Love or Hate. You chose. its beautiful i love it | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue May 11, 2010 12:28 pm | |
| You know theres two others rave?? | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue May 18, 2010 12:05 pm | |
| New poem
Angel of Death
As the sun rises, My eyes shine. I sparkle in the sun. The Spark of Death. I'm With the Angel's. The Angels of Death.
No one can Free me, No one can See me, All is left is me in the sky with the Angel's. The Angel's of Death.
You may of Heard me, but thats all. I see you walking to school. I see you Sad. I Know you miss me. I write you those notes, but you ingore them. I'm with the Angel's. The Angel's of Death.
I follow you every where you go. You never see me. you never hear me. I can feel you sad. I can hear that you want to be with me. But I'm with the Angel's. The Angel's of Death.
I live longer than you. These heart braking years with out you. I see your last mintues. You sufering and dieing. I wanted to save you. But my fellow Angel's held me back. I'm with the Angel's. The Angel's of Death.
As the sun sets, I shine no more. I dont sparkle any more. The spark of Death gone. I become the dangerus thing at night. I'm with the Angel's. The Angel's of Death.
Hoped you like that one. | |
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Crystal Rose Trying to stop war
Age : 32 Posts : 18160 Location : In the cemetery hating everything I ever loved Join date : 2009-07-19
Character sheet Name: Star Light Age: 18 Affinities : Spirit,and Darkness
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed May 19, 2010 7:23 pm | |
| OMG that is so great but it is also so sad I love it | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed May 19, 2010 7:24 pm | |
| Thank you thats how it is sopuse to be. sad and cool at the same time. | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:32 am | |
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