My Poems ((Hope they are ok))

Hope you like it it might be long but it is a good poem.


Love or Hate

Love I cared.
You treated me before
like you love me.
Now you hate?

I cared about you
my whole life.
Then you treated me
like you hate me
and love someone
else.

You love me
I hate you
All those years ago
you let go.
I did not I held
on forever.

you want to care
for me again.
think again.
I will never love
you again.

I treated you like
crap before this
happend I loved you.
Now you treat me
like crap. We are even
now.

Happy? I will
still not love
you. I still
will not love
anyone other
and never again.

Love me? Hate
me? It is a mix
you cant deside
to love me or
hate me.

Love you? Hate
you? Still a mix.
Still no destion
eather or of
the two.

You leave me.
I leave you.
I will never forget
this. You will never
forget this I know
it.

What is your
destion. Love or
Hate.

HAte is forever
and you will
never see me again.

Love, well that
is a differnt
story. You will
always see me.

So what is it.
Love or Hate.
You chose.

here is a poem that I tryed but the ending is not as good as I wanted to be.



Dark Love

Every day, you
hid something
from me. When
you say you love
me you walk away
saying Dark Love.

I am not scared of
you not even when
you try scareing me.

I know sometimes
you think I am dark.
I figured out where you
got the saying Dark Love.

You know I come only
in the night time. And
I dont go to school
like you. That is where
the dark part is coming from.
Love is ovious we love
each other.

I figure it out
in two days.
Soon after you atarted
saying it.

Some times you
say I am cold.
Some time you
say Look out.

When I run I am
faster than you.
You are scared of me.
I can smell it. You
fear me but you
love me.

You know when you
love a vampire.
There are consqences
sometimes.

Your promiss is
that if I die.
You would kill
your self for me.

Your last words
you said to me
before you died
were,"Dark love
I love you." That
was my nickname.

I am writing this
poem for you.
You will always be my
Dark love.

My last words
would be if I died before you blocked that
acctack would be."I am here
for you Forever."





Sorry if that ending was lame but I tryed

wow. both very powerful poems. and i liked the ending lol

thank you those are my first two poems i wrote

Keep writing that good and you'll go far

thanks for some reason I just write love poems I dont know why

I love it Sak.
The end on the secdon one.

those are both sooo good! (:
ive attempted poems,. not so great,,
and the ending on the second one was not even close to lame!

thanks guys I am sorry I havent ;post in a while but I think I have another poem... lol

(no title)

Night is forver.
Day is never here.
I am lost no one to guide
me through the night.

Darkness Srounds
me every day no one
to trun to. Lost forever
what wat to turn.

Lost forever and
never found. I was
destoryed in light but
killed in night.

I still lay there.
Waiting for the
kiss of life.

I lay there for
the love of night.
To raise me.
To let me live
in the night
Forever.

well what you guys think.

Man no one likes it If not I will just redo it......

Why does any one post what they like about my new poem????

I love the poems sis! I like the meaning behind them keep it up!

Thanks sis.

No prob

Can you ask some friend to check this out for me please.

Sure will!

Thank you a bunch sis.

Angel of Death (Sak) wrote:

Hope you like it it might be long but it is a good poem.


Love or Hate

Love I cared.
You treated me before
like you love me.
Now you hate?

I cared about you
my whole life.
Then you treated me
like you hate me
and love someone
else.

You love me
I hate you
All those years ago
you let go.
I did not I held
on forever.

you want to care
for me again.
think again.
I will never love
you again.

I treated you like
crap before this
happend I loved you.
Now you treat me
like crap. We are even
now.

Happy? I will
still not love
you. I still
will not love
anyone other
and never again.

Love me? Hate
me? It is a mix
you cant deside
to love me or
hate me.

Love you? Hate
you? Still a mix.
Still no destion
eather or of
the two.

You leave me.
I leave you.
I will never forget
this. You will never
forget this I know
it.

What is your
destion. Love or
Hate.

HAte is forever
and you will
never see me again.

Love, well that
is a differnt
story. You will
always see me.

So what is it.
Love or Hate.
You chose.

its beautiful i love it

You know theres two others rave??

New poem

Angel of Death

As the sun rises,
My eyes shine.
I sparkle in the
sun. The Spark
of Death. I'm
With the Angel's.
The Angels of Death.

No one can Free me,
No one can See me,
All is left is me
in the sky with the
Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

You may of Heard
me, but thats all.
I see you walking
to school. I see
you Sad. I Know
you miss me. I
write you those
notes, but you ingore
them. I'm with the
Angel's. The Angel's of
Death.

I follow you
every where you go.
You never see me.
you never hear me.
I can feel you sad.
I can hear that
you want to be
with me. But
I'm with the Angel's.
The Angel's of
Death.

I live longer than
you. These heart braking
years with out you.
I see your last mintues.
You sufering and dieing.
I wanted to save you.
But my fellow Angel's
held me back. I'm with
the Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

As the sun sets,
I shine no more.
I dont sparkle any more.
The spark of Death gone.
I become the dangerus
thing at night. I'm with
the Angel's. The Angel's
of Death.

Hoped you like that one.

OMG that is so great but it is also so sad I love it

Thank you thats how it is sopuse to be. sad and cool at the same time.

ANy one else??????