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| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:43 am | |
| They're awesome, I write small not huge, good work |
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Angel of Music Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 45811 Location : A very dark place that nobody cares about Join date : 2009-12-08
Character sheet Name: Sierrah Age: Affinities : Mostly Spirit but i have power over all of them
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 9:28 am | |
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~♪Dark_Rose♪~ Trying to stop war
Age : 31 Posts : 25979 Location : I see hell in your eyes! Join date : 2010-05-13
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| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 10:51 am | |
| wow that was really good XD | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:15 am | |
| Thanks THey just come to mid and I writ them. | |
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~♪Dark_Rose♪~ Trying to stop war
Age : 31 Posts : 25979 Location : I see hell in your eyes! Join date : 2010-05-13
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| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:17 am | |
| thats cool i have to think to write poems XD | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:19 am | |
| This next one I really hope anything to this poem realt to any one because I just wrote it when I was sad about some thing.
(NO named)
Death is a hard loss. Death can bring Sadness. Death can bring many things. I take it like love or Friendship. Losing my friends is hard. Never to see them again. Only thing is left is Them forever with me. Forever in my heart. Forever in my life. Lossing Family is worse. But lossing Friends is like lossing family. Your heart broken forever. Forever in pain. Forever in loss of friends or family. | |
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~♪Dark_Rose♪~ Trying to stop war
Age : 31 Posts : 25979 Location : I see hell in your eyes! Join date : 2010-05-13
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| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 11:41 am | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 09, 2010 12:15 pm | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Jun 15, 2010 11:11 am | |
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The darkness Holds The dieing fire. The Sleeping Slumber fades in death.
I am Fading far from you. Th darkness takes me away from my love ones. Trying to free my self never works. I am dieing for my love ones life.
I can never return to you. I can never live again. I die of pain and suffering.
You are my Son forever. And you left me dieing. Forever We will never be. | |
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| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Jun 15, 2010 1:29 pm | |
| You know, your actually good or great something nice like that. |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Jun 16, 2010 11:25 am | |
| Thanks like I said they come at random times and it anoys me until I write them down. | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Jul 27, 2010 4:54 pm | |
| I will post more poemes in 5 days or so. | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:33 pm | |
| here are two poems I write when I was at dads.
Demon Stole My Heart
Demon You Surround me with Darkness, worsens with each minute. Life you take away is worce but you need the power. i have regreted you for takeing my soul.
Your Darkness surrounds me wherever I go. Whatever could have been? I will never know because your ways are all that you want me to know. Demon you stole my heart.
You have pulled me back into your world. But yet I wount let you keep me here forever. You may of caused trouble but you can never hold me here. YOu defencless. How pity. I will fight you again to the end. HOpe you will learn your lesson then.
With one touch my heart died, with the demons venom crawling threw my vein, a heart once made of gold, a diamond in the rough know ends in a never ending darkness, its there and it has stained my heart. with Dark, dark shadow.
I Have lost this battle, you have gain strenght more so. My life has ended for all entrnty. Take mylife away as you please. your free to roam this world. As for me I will be in a better place.
((Thats one out of two)) | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Thu Aug 26, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| Demon Stole My Soul.
The dark over comes my lifeless soul a Neverending darkness. I feel as though there will never be any light.
Oh Demon How forever you will be Danmed. You hurt my life, you will hurt many more. Oh Demon you want to be a leader well nice try I will never let you hold me down. Demon you stole my soul.
You Took what little chance I thought I had to get throgh this place. You really think I'm going to come to you? I thought I could truxt you to help me but I was wrong. You really think I'm Going to come back to you? NO! I Will fight you to the end.
Demon You have destroed my life but you cant destory me now. Even if you tried. Come on take my chalenge. You dont want to die now do you? Well you shouldent have stole my soul in the first place. Demon you have stole my soul.
Demon I am not longer yours you need to hear me out. You do not seem to understand where I am coming from. Just let me say that I would die before I would conform. Because I am finished with you now Since you stole my soul.
I will block your every try to take me over. I will stand up and defeat you, you will be left alone. I am Warning you now, you will not win. I will give you one Chance to back down right now. NO? You dont want to? Okay here we go.
Demon you have lost this battle. Relsae all the souls you have chapured. I hate to leave you here in this damed place. But you Shall be forever traped here and never relses. You will die in this place as you stay here. Never to return to the Earth Again.
((Theres two out of two. hope you like them))
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:06 am | |
| Calling Forth
I call to you. I feel the pain of deat all around. You call to me. Finding your way. All I want is freedom. From my darkness cell. Free from my death. Free from the evil encounters. My soul will be traped. My body will be freed. Myself will be forever traped. I will die if my soul is gone to long. My Warrior I call forth to you. Live to free us all. Live to help others when they need it. My warrior dont fail me. Nor others. Free my soul or I will die. Do what it takes to get me home. As I live forever in a new world.
((That wasnt writed down but it poped in my head hope its ok.))
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Ann Discovering you have an affinity for Air
Age : 32 Posts : 259 Join date : 2009-09-05
Character sheet Name: Abby Isabell☆ Age: 19 Affinities :
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:32 pm | |
| Your really good Sak! I can SO relate to your first poems.Losses are hard and hurtful:( | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:42 pm | |
| Thanks Ann | |
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Ann Discovering you have an affinity for Air
Age : 32 Posts : 259 Join date : 2009-09-05
Character sheet Name: Abby Isabell☆ Age: 19 Affinities :
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:45 pm | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Sep 07, 2010 12:07 pm | |
| NEver Here.
Stop calling me I dont want to talk to you. You want me again. No. you always ruin my life. Your never Here for me. Your never Here for yourself. Let it go and Follow my trail. Save me if you wish. Your NEver Here!
((Really short poem the shortese on I have. which is fine.)) | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Sep 08, 2010 11:16 pm | |
| True Warrior A Warrior starong a breave to protect his Lovely Goddnes. A Warrior true and brave To see the light to help the one. As She will help him when When he needs it. Some one Strong, caring, And true to his goddness. Will be the one to help many more. Warrior of the East. Shine as you wish. But only show the one you Truely need to sureve. As you help the young high Prestes(Sp) To live as long as she can. ((Hehehehehehe random poem yet again. This is kinda rpesting my Warrior Fallen_warrior )) | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Wed Sep 22, 2010 11:50 pm | |
| I wish you were with me by my side. I wish you could be here. These days will be rember.
For some one I love and care for. You will be always there for me.
((Ahh My first non dark poem yes I have a boyfriend now and this what came to mind)) | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Thu Apr 14, 2011 8:56 pm | |
| Death and Sadness
Deep thoughts, Dark nights But what Fill the day Breaks? Sleep sounds fill happiness to the Ones of the dead. Happiness only Comes every so often.
Sometimes when I sit here, Waist deep in thought Feeling so lonely Bad things rush through my head I don't know what to do And it makes me sad.
My days are ending short. As I sit here letting Blood Drip. I won’t my life end Like my Family and friends. I Beg for hope and Happiness. Even the One I love tries to make Me happy. But death Rushes in my head.
I watch the people Hunt him to death. Tourchering Him. I wanted to help but I stayed and watched.
I made them pay for what They did. Was I the only one? Left in this world? Why did they Run and scream Vampire.
Lord I pray for hope For an end to my cause. No one responded. As I Was Left to die and hope to See everyone in the after Life.
I was wrong. Hope responded To me to someone who I loved Walked to me and got me slowly Back to happiness. | |
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Zmirazz Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 7494 Location : somewhere! i'm lost Join date : 2010-09-23
Character sheet Name: Demona Age: 20 Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Mon Aug 08, 2011 2:54 pm | |
| - Sak-Chan wrote:
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Night is forver. Day is never here. I am lost no one to guide me through the night.
Darkness Srounds me every day no one to trun to. Lost forever what wat to turn.
Lost forever and never found. I was destoryed in light but killed in night.
I still lay there. Waiting for the kiss of life.
I lay there for the love of night. To raise me. To let me live in the night Forever. I liked it a lot the last paragraph is my favorite though your last poem is beautiful but too dark!! that's my opinion anyway.lool keep it up girl | |
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Sak-Chan Trying to stop war
Age : 28 Posts : 77791 Location : First Year of collage here I come Join date : 2010-02-25
Character sheet Name: Maria Silversong Age: 16 Affinities : Air. death.
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Aug 09, 2011 1:14 am | |
| Lol thanks. Sorry I'm a bit of a dark poem writer. lol I have another one this one is about my life I'm going thorugh right now with two boyfriends. Title: Thousand Words can Describe your death
Poem: Thousand words can describe your death. Thousand things can be told about your death. Have your way of life when you know its death to you soon. Your life is my food for the one person I love. Your heart, your soul, all of it will belong to him. Thousand words will kill your life and you will be with no one ever again. I’m here to end my suffering that leads me to you and all the things you brought with you. I’m ready to bring an end to my love to you. And go to the one I truly love. But I know I can’t do that to both of you. I don’t know who to truly love at all. There’s a thousand ways to my death that only one maybe both will follow. I don’t ever want anything to happen to either of you. To special to lose either of you, my heart belongs to both of you forever. Come to night to see who’s truly the one who loves me more, or all three of us will die together. I rather die than make the choice between you both. I will never have my choice ever. You both mean something to me to lose, let me live here or die with me.
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Zmirazz Temporary Mod
Age : 33 Posts : 7494 Location : somewhere! i'm lost Join date : 2010-09-23
Character sheet Name: Demona Age: 20 Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| Subject: Re: My Poems ((Hope they are ok)) Tue Aug 09, 2011 12:02 pm | |
| waw! that's a strong one!! i really liked it but i'm sry that you are so confused! never leave the one you love for the one you like.think about it before acting!good job! | |
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