some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think)

me and my friend wrote this together

i'm sick of weeping over someone who hurts me, he says he cares but i dont see it
he says sorry but doesnt mean it


does he hear me when i call or just sit there wondering why?
can he see my tears fallin when i see him
does he notice me at all?


You saaw me cry, you just walked by
you saw me hurt you didnt care

you see me when im at my worst,
you dont do nothing but stare

do you notice me when im here?
or only notice me when im not

can you see im more than than quiet?
i try to talk you just walk, can you see?
theres more to me than meets the eye..

love hurts, love bites
it manipulates all
will you let take control or
will you fight for what you want?
ima a lover not a fighter
but ill fight for what i love
will you do the same or
let it take control?

i love them!!!!!! keep writting more plz!!

thx! lol. i wrote those yesterday. haha didnt think anyone would like them

i did!! lol

well thank you!!! lol

They are really good.I love reading poems they let you get to know people without all the meaningless small talk.

i know..lol. its hard for me to let out emotions soo i just write them down..

how do i fell when im asked why im quiet? i fell like an outcast an outsider a freak,
will i ever be treated as normal? i want you to seee the real me

not the quiet weird girl
but the sweet kind and shy girl
i want you to know the truth

ive been broken hurt and teased , but
its lead me to where i am today,
strong and what makes me unique

cant you see i never wannna change?
i want to meet one who understands me

will i ever find him? becuse until i do
my life is cold dark and lonely

will it ever be changed?


here i am, sitting alone, wondering why im never noticed

those who do notice, donr matter to me
the only one who matters is you

you act as if i dont exist
what can i do to get you to even look at me/

i want you to know me
but i dnt think youll ever try, you never will

you expect girls to come up to you
not the other way around

will you ever change that?
i wish you would,
maybe even acknowledge that im here at all

its hard for me to express my feelings
can you understand that?



i see all these kids mingling and talking and
think to myself will this ever be me?

im quiet and shy but im still like any other person
i want people to understand thats who i am
the real me not the fake one

its gets harder each and every day,
do you think pl asking me why im so quiet helps any at all??

thats me i may not fit in anywhere
but thats good right?

lol thxx

tis true~(:

thnk you much tamodotchi lol

thanks you skye xD

These are really good! Keep it up, Soul Sister!

thx!! i have some written but not done with them yet so theyll be up hopefully soon!

Yay!

wow, they are good

thx!! xDD ive got more thatll be up soon

I love poetry too. hope you keep at it.

thxx, im entering a poem contest at my school lol

Darkness found me and i esponded,
it dragged me in without warning,
To depths of the sea i went alone,
where it was waiting silently and cold.

I failed to overcome what life had to offer
i stayed amazed and didnt even bother,
Being in its hold made me not worry,
About all the drama that as unfolding.

Once i was there my worries were gone,
Bt i silently thought what am i doing,
Why would i sink so low just to be happy,
when everyone else was surely suffering.

My mind reconnected back to reality
it felt like a dream but i know it asnt
Through my ps and downs i should have known,
Not everything comes easy o you just gotta deal.
When everyone else was surely uffeing.