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Leah Redbird
Finally mastering Fire
  
Age : 30
Posts : 605
Location : Heartbroken ville, why are boys dumb?
Join date : 2010-10-03
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Name: Leah Redbird
Age: 18
Affinities : Affinty for all the elements plus visions, aim, physic and high priestess in training
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Sat Jan 29, 2011 6:43 am | |
| These are really good. Keep up the good work. | |
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gamer
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 30
Posts : 31096
Location : somewhere
Join date : 2010-12-20
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Name: Mike
Age: 16
Affinities : Air and Earth
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Sat Jan 29, 2011 8:15 am | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Sat Jan 29, 2011 2:00 pm | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Wed Apr 20, 2011 10:06 pm | |
| I stand breathless in the cold night wind,
The air whips around me as I take my final Step.
I step into the shadows, Where darkness overcomes.
I never knew it would consume me, but I thought wrong.
I wraps around me like a blanket, I think I can stay safe, and have no worries.
Only soon do I realize, It's just a mistake, Reminding me of how many I have Done.
I take one step away, but it doesn't release,
Icry out for help, but noone hears me,
Is this what it feels like to be isolated?
To know nothing but the Darkness that consumes me?
Not but a few steps in front of me a path appears,
It splits at the end, Left or right?
One is for Light and the other for Dark,
Where can i go whenI am entangled with Darkness?
Can i find my own path?
Or keep straying away?
Only one can decide,
And That one is me.. I just wrote this at the top of my head... I hopwe you like it,  | |
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~!Psycopath_Angel!~
Appointing your friends to your council
 
Age : 31
Posts : 2755
Join date : 2011-04-21
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Name: Mari Storm
Age: 18
Affinities : Electricity and ice
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:28 pm | |
| WOW!!! These are amazing Im glade I read them keep up the poetry there were all just WOW!!!!  | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:31 pm | |
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~!Psycopath_Angel!~
Appointing your friends to your council
Age : 31
Posts : 2755
Join date : 2011-04-21
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Name: Mari Storm
Age: 18
Affinities : Electricity and ice
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:37 pm | |
| lols No prob just speaing the truth!  | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:39 pm | |
| lol, | |
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JCP1987
Eavesdropping on her conversation
Age : 33
Posts : 3971
Location : In Kalona's closet.
Join date : 2011-03-31
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Name: Haruhi Yuki
Age: 16
Affinities : Sword/Judo/Tai quan do
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:40 pm | |
| Your poems are really very good, you should publish them. | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri Apr 22, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| Thanks. I've thought about it, but I wouldn't kow where to get them published. | |
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Zmirazz
Temporary Mod
 
Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri May 06, 2011 6:19 pm | |
| hey! you really are good!! i love poetry a lot and when i read your poems i remembered why:D:D lol keep writing:) | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Fri May 06, 2011 6:51 pm | |
| haha, well thanks! I don't think there all that good, but i really appreciate, | |
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Zmirazz
Temporary Mod
Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Sat May 07, 2011 2:55 pm | |
| lol ur welcome!
My fav is : Darkness found me and i esponded,
it dragged me in without warning,
To depths of the sea i went alone,
where it was waiting silently and cold.
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really liked it!! | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Mon May 09, 2011 6:55 pm | |
| Lol, Thanks, I read that one in front of my english class, xD | |
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Zmirazz
Temporary Mod
Age : 33
Posts : 7494
Location : somewhere! i'm lost
Join date : 2010-09-23
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Name: Demona
Age: 20
Affinities : fire,air,earth and spirit
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Tue May 10, 2011 2:47 pm | |
| waw! i'm sure they loved it!! | |
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*PrincessOfDarkness*
Trying to stop war
Age : 30
Posts : 12345
Location : nashville TN. boringest place ever i know
Join date : 2010-04-24
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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas
| | Subject: Re: some of my poems.(new at this so tell me what you think) Tue May 10, 2011 5:50 pm | |
| Lol, Thanks, | |
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