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~EmoKassidy~
Trying to stop war
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Female Pisces Buffalo
Age : 27
Posts : 10590
Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat
Join date : 2009-12-16

Character sheet
Name: Karin Maaka
Age: 17
Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts

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lol yeah
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 09, 2010 11:01 pm

Yesh like. . . finishing this story thingy.
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Female Pisces Buffalo
Age : 27
Posts : 10590
Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat
Join date : 2009-12-16

Character sheet
Name: Karin Maaka
Age: 17
Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 09, 2010 11:02 pm

yup and school and friends and.....idk -.-
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 09, 2010 11:03 pm

I know~! Going to that Paramore concert! x33
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Female Pisces Buffalo
Age : 27
Posts : 10590
Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat
Join date : 2009-12-16

Character sheet
Name: Karin Maaka
Age: 17
Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts

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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 09, 2010 11:04 pm

OOOOOOOO I LOVE PARAMORE!!!!!
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They're da bomb. xDD
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Female Pisces Buffalo
Age : 27
Posts : 10590
Location : Haveing Tea With The Mad Hatter and Cheshire Cat
Join date : 2009-12-16

Character sheet
Name: Karin Maaka
Age: 17
Affinities : Spirit and i can see ghosts

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lol g2g
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Aug 09, 2010 11:09 pm

Awww Sad
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Time to write.
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Name: Kassidy
Age: 16
Affinities : Fire and night

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i like its really good
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Thanks~! x33
I've started to work on the next bit.
I just don't have the time.
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyWed Aug 11, 2010 12:32 am

Since I'm so lovable I'll give a small bit. Of what happened recently.Also after this there's a really big thing that you won't know till I'm done with it! x]

Skye was still smiling at me, when Markus our guy friend came up. “Hey ladies.” He said coming to a stop and grinned. “Ello love.” Skye said smiling, she spoke British at times. Since we were beautiful britts. But I knew the real reason Skye was like that. She’s liked Markus since the day they first met in 2nd grade.


I smiled at them. “Hello person.” I said to him. He frowned. “Yeah yeah.” I said quickly before he got mad. I nodded. “I’m gunna go to class Skye, later!” I said walking to my first class.
I don’t know what happened after I left. Both Skye and Markus refuse to tell me. I’ll force it out of one of them later then.
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptySat Aug 14, 2010 10:52 pm

Woah, this didn't take that long.

I giggled, only a week later did Terri find out what happened. But it went something like this;

Markus took a deep breath. “I thought she’d never leave.” He said laughed a bit.

I raised an eyebrow. “What?” I asked, batting my eyes a bit. “You don’t like my lovable sister?” Markus chuckled nervously. “She’s fine but I wanted to talk to you alone.” He said looking at me in the eyes. I looked at him back, my heart was pounding I was so excited but I didn’t know if he was gunna ask. “Annnd?” I said wanting him to ask so badly.

He laughed a bit and ran his hand through his hair. “I was wondering. . .” He started to say but trailed off. “What?” I said almost dying. He sighed. “I was wondering if it was okay with you if I ask out Terri.” He said. I blinked and felt tears coming to my eyes. I looked away, he just broke my heart and killed me.

Markus blinked, “what Skye? What’s wrong?” He asked franticly, I closed my eyes and ran away, from him, from me, from everything. Tears were falling, I collapsed and cried my hear out. I gave myself to him, my all, and he asked my sister out! My sister! I cried until I couldn’t cry anymore. I was nothing, not even to my best friend who I’ve known since I was a little kid.

I heard footsteps, I wiped my eyes and looked up to see who it was. “Go away.” I said between hiccuping sobs, to Markus who followed me. He stayed, even dared to sit next to me and put his arm around my shoulders. “Hey Skye, what did I do?” Markus asked gently. “I-- I--” hiccup, “you wanna ask out my sister.” I managed looking down.

Markus chuckled softly. “Really Skye? I was joking, I meant you.” He said making me look at him, I met his gaze evenly. “Really?” I asked, “your not lying?” I asked, expecting him to say, “no I’m just messing with you! Of course I’d rather ask Terri!” If he did I was gonna die.

Markus nodded. “I’m not. Now Skye Hasting,” he paused. “Will you be my girlfriend and maybe go on a date with me?” He really asked, my eyes widened and I blinked. “I will.” I said smiling and hugging him squeezing him tight.

“Thank you.” I whispered into his ear. I felt Markus hug me back. I pulled back. “What now?” I asked blinking what tears were left away. He didn’t say anything but leaned in close, his breath was slow and clam. I smiled, and closed the distance kissing him and wrapping my arms around his neck. He kissed back, holding me close to him. I pulled back and smiled at him, “what do you wanna do now?” I asked again. It took him a few seconds. “Hmm go to class? I’m sure you don’t want to get in trouble again.” Markus said.

I rolled my eyes. “I don’t care about that. But your right, come on.” I got up and pulled him with me. “Come on boyfriend.” I said dragging him to class. I just had to smiled. Terri gave us a weird look as we came in.
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Female Aries Buffalo
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyWed Sep 01, 2010 10:32 pm

Awesome, awesome, awesome. *dances around the room* I love it! Please continue!
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I will when I have time.
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Location : With the Goddess
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Name: Eternity
Age: 16
Affinities : Has an affinity for all five elements and cats

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So awsome!!!!!! more more more Smile
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Age: 16
Affinities : Air. death.

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ohhhh Keep going
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Omg! Natalia! It's a amazing! I love it! =D I can't wait until you write more!!
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Sep 27, 2010 12:34 am

:DD I did it~

I smiled, that day was the worst/best day of my life. Wait my worst was was when Terri died. I sighed and opened her journal again reading where I left off.

I saw Skye and Markus come back in, they were all happy and all like something big and good happened. I smiled and wrote a note to Skye. “What happened?” I sent it to her, when she got it she looked up and smiled a bit, then looked down and scribbled something. “I’ll tell you at the right time.” It said when I got it, I smiled and put it away.

I sighed and took notes and wrote down my homework. But I couldn’t stop thinking of James, he was nice, new, and cute. Everything I’ve been looking for, I hope things go well. I sound so stupid head over heels over I guy I hardly even know. The bell rang and looked up, I looked back at my notebook, it was full of hearts and his name, I giggled and put my things away once I was good I left the class.

“Hey sissy look over there!” Skye called as she came to me with Markus at her side. I smiled and looked, it was James and Skye was heading right to him now. I gasped and tried to hide, but too late they were talking and he waved. Instead of freaking out like I wanted, I sucked it up and came over. “Hey James.” I said smiling, god this kid was really cute.

“So Terri good idea right?” Macey asked, I blinked. “What?” I asked smiling, they all laughed at me. Skye smiled, “we’re goning go party and James is coming with. Good right?” She said winking at me, I smiled. “Yeah definitely, see you there!” I said walking off to my next class.

I gotta get ready for the party now, tell you about that in the morning.

Don’t Miss me too much,
Terri Hasting
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Join date : 2010-04-24

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Name: alyson
Age: 16
Affinities : spirit, fire. knows persons past with one single touch. can read auroas

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i love it! please write more!!!
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Age: 15
Affinities : able to take other people's affinities

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I love this story write more now
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 2:06 am

Huns, I have a ton more in store for you. ;D
Really I do.

I sighed and closed the book, it was. . . I checked the clock, 2:30 a.m. Well time to get some sleep, I hope. I learned over and turned off my lamp. I pushed my things aside but kept the book and music near, I closed my eyes and fell asleep.

I had a very curious dream. (Hey, how’d I get the accent? Oh yeah baby.) It started with this event of falling, like Alice. Then it stopped and I was looking unto a mirror, but I did not see me. I saw only Terri there looking at my body, (not the mirror,) I realized I was not me, but indeed Terri. Looking back to the mirror Terri was smiling mysteriously, almost a smirk. The Terri In The Mirror started to speak.

“Skye, remember the stories father told us? Our family consisted of horrible things?” She said pausing, then smiled and continued. “He was wrong, it is full of wonderful givings.” With that she broke the mirror and I awoke gasping for breath. What was that dream? I thought getting ready for the day. I sighed and looked in the mirror of my bathroom. It was me, I sighed and put on some makeup, I might use a lot but I assure you I’m no whore. Done with that I fixed my hair and added a bow, I smiled and went to a full body mirror. It might be summer but I was wearing converse, some good skinnys, and a tank top. I walked to my car and hummed a bit, today I was to visit Markus, go out for coffee and then come back and read the book. I got into my car, and played my CD, driving back a bit I realized the song.

“Perfect little houses, perfect little families, it’s family fun time, let’s commit a hate crime.” Rise, Rebel, Resist, by Otep. It might not fit the mood but I loved this song. It showed my anger for everything since last year. I hummed but didn’t sing, I wasn’t the singer Terri was. I’m the drummer. I smiled and beat against the wheel as I drove to Markus’s house, I giggled turning the corner to his place. I parked my car a little ways away, I walked the small bit of crossing the street to his house. As I walked to the front door I fixed my hair a bit and got some gum, I knocked on the door. Markus answered, “hey.” I said smiling gently.


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Age: 16
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keep it write more!
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PostSubject: Re: Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD))   Journal of a Dead Girl ((Charater Pictures up :DD)) - Page 3 EmptyMon Oct 18, 2010 3:10 am

Not too bad so far (:

Just a note:

It would be good if you could make it a lighter colour. It's a little difficult to read because of the font colour. (the background is black, so a cyan/orange/yellow font colour would be really helpful to readers)
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I think I'll just take the colour off.
But thanks~
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Keep updating (:
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