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Skyeee<3 [;
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Posts : 17868
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Skye's poems ;D Sun Jul 25, 2010 9:04 pm | |
| Well, I'm not really that great and I truthfully started writing poetry like a month ago. I usually write when I'm sad which isn't very often so I might not add many xD This one is unamed~! I remember being 5
And sitting on my porch
Just waiting for you to come around
I waited hours
But you never showed
I'd go inside and everyone would know
They'd all be sympathetic
But they didn't understand
How you made me feel inside
Like I wasn't meant to even be alive
So I'd run to my room and cry
Not like you even cared
You never even showed your face again
Then you called me at 9
And I was so surprised
I thought you were clean
But you were still a mess
All you did was make me stress
You left me again
When all I needed was a friend
I didn't ask much of you mom
I never asked you to sing me a song
To put me to bed
Or to give me a place to rest my head
I just wanted to know you cared
Well I guess you've made your point very clear
So next time you come around
Just know I won't be here
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
Character sheet
Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Mon Jul 26, 2010 3:40 pm | |
| I posted this a while ago but it was in a different thing so I decided to move it here. Haunting Nightmares
When I lie awake at night
I try not to scream in fright
Cause if I fall asleep
I might fall too deep
And I will see you again
But you are no longer a friend
You haunt me everyday
Now all I can do is pray
That tonight you won't be in my head
So I can go to bed | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Wed Jul 28, 2010 11:08 pm | |
| o.o This isn't very good and it's a bit repetetive but I like it. It's also a villanelle so it's supposed to repeat the way it does xD If you've ever tried to write them there pretty hard so don't comment saying it sucks xD
Deppression
The Darkness captured me
For I fear
It will never set me free
I've fallen far beyond the eye can see
I didn't even shed a single tear
The Darkness captured me
I felt like the dirt beneath a tree
The truth in it's eyes told me what I could not see,
It will never set me free
It was so scary I couldn't even begin to explain to thee
The terrible sights never appeared to only be mere
The Darkness captured me
Everything was bliss and I felt so free
I fell so hard I didn't fear
It will never set me free
Now I am fighting to break free
Though I will never escape, my dear
The Darkness captured me
It will never set me free
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Caristiona
Head Mod
 
Age : 31
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:09 pm | |
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Sak-Chan
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Age : 28
Posts : 77791
Location : First Year of collage here I come
Join date : 2010-02-25
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Name: Maria Silversong
Age: 16
Affinities : Air. death.
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 3:47 pm | |
| I like them all they are very good. | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:08 pm | |
| Thanks guys~! xD I didn't think anyone would comment to so now I feel special x3 | |
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Mari-chan
Trying to stop war
 
Age : 29
Posts : 8899
Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥
Join date : 2009-07-12
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Name: Breeann
Age: 17
Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:12 pm | |
| i like how you use the poems to express yourelf. they seem like the ones you could read to music, like in those club things xD
and poetry never sucks, 'specially yours. people might have dif opinions, but they dont see the true magic of good poetry (; | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:15 pm | |
| xD That would be so cool. I'd feel like a geek though xD
And why thank you Pallie Pie xD | |
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Mari-chan
Trying to stop war
Age : 29
Posts : 8899
Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥
Join date : 2009-07-12
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Name: Breeann
Age: 17
Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:17 pm | |
| heehee (;
and <3ing the username~ | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:18 pm | |
| Thanks. I realized I didn't like mine anymore o.O xD | |
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Mari-chan
Trying to stop war
Age : 29
Posts : 8899
Location : Dancing in and out of the beams of a neon moon ♥
Join date : 2009-07-12
Character sheet
Name: Breeann
Age: 17
Affinities : Poetry & Future Sight ((refers to my story))
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:20 pm | |
| aww i liken it xD for some reason your usernames sound extredeemeleee creavtive, like....gah, i dunnos how to explain it. eeeeehh. | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Thu Jul 29, 2010 5:21 pm | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:09 am | |
| This one is ehhh, ohkay I guess. The Real Me
Everday is just an act
A show put on so you can note all the fake facts
This show has gone on far too long
It's time for me to end this song
So I tell you who I am
And now you treat me like I'm ten
I went back to being a fake
Now that me you seem to take
I don't understand you
You tell me to just be me
But how can I do that
When the real me
Will never be
The me you see | |
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graciella
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Posts : 8897
Location : stalking you...no not u.....u!
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| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:16 am | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 2:18 am | |
| x3 really? xD I feel special now [: | |
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Caristiona
Head Mod
Age : 31
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 12:21 pm | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 1:58 pm | |
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ShelbyLeeLoveForever
Covering your mark to go off campus
 
Age : 32
Posts : 1432
Location : Healy, USA
Join date : 2009-09-03
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Name: ShelbyLeeLoveForever
Age: 17
Affinities : Mind reading, Healing
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:51 pm | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:03 pm | |
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ShelbyLeeLoveForever
Covering your mark to go off campus
Age : 32
Posts : 1432
Location : Healy, USA
Join date : 2009-09-03
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Name: ShelbyLeeLoveForever
Age: 17
Affinities : Mind reading, Healing
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:11 pm | |
| yw u have a gift of poetry | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Fri Jul 30, 2010 4:13 pm | |
| If only people where I am were as nice as the one's on here xD | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:20 am | |
| o.O I wrote this one quickly so it most likely sucks xD
Lies
Your lies
Have everyone hypnotized
So when the truth comes out
Everybody doubts
Is this what our world's come to?
People being fakes through and through?
The liars have corrupted us
Making everyone lose all their trust
Well I hope your happy now
You wear the crown
So now it's time to pick a side
Are you the truth or just a lie? | |
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Caristiona
Head Mod
Age : 31
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:29 am | |
| No that is awesome.
Your poems are amazing. | |
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Skyeee<3 [;
Trying to stop war
Age : 27
Posts : 17868
Location : Why do you need to know? Stalkerrr. ;D
Join date : 2010-04-09
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Name: Skye Centrics
Age: 17
Affinities : Night, Spirit, and Fire
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:30 am | |
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Caristiona
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Age : 31
Posts : 31810
Location : O.o Why do you want to know?
Join date : 2010-03-31
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Name: Lykinia
Age: 16
Affinities : Air & Water, and the color orange. :)
| | Subject: Re: Skye's poems ;D Sat Jul 31, 2010 1:33 am | |
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